Hi any suggestion and critism is welcomed and much appreciated

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I had a good morning i mean when a beautiful super model type maid comes and wakes u up huhuhu what red blooded man would not be happy after having breakfast on the bed she led me to the library i had gone to yesterday and again Gandalf was waiting for me with him there was the queen and the the a knight which i recognized to be be Josh the queens smile when she saw me was like a sun spreading wramth everywhere while i was staring at the queen i noticed a bloodlust or pressure directed at me i looked around it seems to come from the Josh he was staring daggers at me and i am certain that if queen was not here the would have knocked me out i stopped staring at the queen and greeted them the Gandalf started speaking

" Sora today i will lead you to the time chamber and you will have your magic lessons with me , combat lessons with Josh and etiquettes lessons with the queen "

hmm lessons with queen i am so looking forward to that i learned yesterday that the Sun Kingdom always had queens which when married accepted the husband in the family but he will not be the king more like a advisor to queen with little to no power and more importantly the queen was single , she was not married nor had a lover or some cliche childhood friend so i was totally getting her in my harem , ok i like harem get over it, he led me inner in the library and shuffled some books here to there after that the book shelf moved itself to reveal a door the queen chanted some magic words and summoned a key she opened the door which revealved a long set of stairs as we walked down the stairs there was a long corridor leading to a cave like place which had a big door which seems to made of gold and had a big hourglass in the middle with two statues of knights holding each side of the hourglass the Gandalf walked near the gate and chanted

"Keepers of time Remember the blessings of the Chronos and let the time fold Sesame"

the door opened with a loud sound and revealed a large white space hmm they so copied the Dbz it a exact copy of the Gandalf led me in followed by Josh and the Queen she turned to me bowed lightly

" Hero sama i wish u best of luck be God of strength Kronos be with you may you be blessed by mother goddess Ceres"

with that she left ah i was looking forward to spending time with her but it seems like my first lesson is with Josh he again seems to be staring daggers at me man what is his problem the Gandalf than explained to me the workings of the chamber

" Sora the meeting with other heroes of the other races is in 2 months, a month in here is equivalent to a day outside so you have 2.5 years of training which is barely enough for one year you will be trained in combat and after that you willbe trained in magic for a year and in last half a year you will have etiquettes & history lesson with queen while training both magic and combat i wish you luck you will need lots of it "

after that he vanished leaving me with that Josh he told me to spar with him what the hell i have never fought in my entire life now i have to spar with a knight commander he got two heavy wooden long swords and gave me one he said try to survive he is not expecting anything .

Josh P.O.V

The Queen and The Gandalf want me to waste my time training this preverted greenhorn i will spend time training my military in here than waste time on him we cannot use the chamber indefinately by the blessings of God of time Choronus can be activated on for a maximum period of three months in 1000 years because time magic in not possible for anyone other than gods i get the enchanced wooden swords which were gifts to the queen from the Wood elves they are very heavy i throw one sword towards Sora he however catches the sword easily hmm seems like has does has some foundation because even for me to catch one sword one handedly is tough i tell him to survive and that i am not expecting any thing and i raise my sword high and perform a straight strike at his head he raises his sword up to block my sword seems like he got monstrous strength because i used my mana to further increase the weight of the sword but he block it with such ease in comparison even a giant warriors knees would buckle so i strike towards his left hand at my highest speed but he tilts the sword and again he blocks i am astonished by his natural speed and by his reaction speed , his eyes are on me like a lion watches before jumping on his prey ridiculous i have been in hundred of battles againsts humans, wild beasts, i even fought a dragon to a standstill and he this boy of 17 years can match my me hahahahha

it is going to be fun like a how a raw ore is turned into a metal i will have fun training him i perform my technique quickly moving past him and striking his neck from backside Flash Touch if i had a sword and had he been an enemy he's neck would have flown he falls on one knee and endures with the help of the sword using it as a crouch oh i am more impressed he got the will too suddenly all my hair stand and my instincts are screaming at me to run and hide i did not feel that even when facing a dragon i felt excitement when fighting a dragon, a enormous godly pressure is on my i fall to my knees i look at Sora to see his black hair taking a golden shade he turns to face me i see his eyes turning from black to blue as he glances at me i fall face flat on ground i have trouble breathing it seems some one put a mountain on my back or i am thousands of feet underwater that much pressure before i lose conscious he falls down his hair returning to black and the pressure vanishing.

I did not mention that event to anyone because i did not understand what happened that time , in my one year training time that did not happen again. i taught him different types of techniques , sword styles , skills and how to use different types of energies with sword or in body strengthning like ki , aura ,mana , he already had more than enough strength , speed , and reaction time . he very easily surpassed me in swordsmanship and now in sparring 8 out of 10 time he won , he is my greatest pupil , tomorrow Gandalf is coming to start his magic training

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well i split the training into two small parts after that is hero's meeting so action will start 2 or 3 chapter later