《Revival [The Lake House Sequel]》Chapter 6.
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Ana
Any fear I'd ever felt in my life would never compare to this moment. The door knob turned and this is it, this is the moment my life ends.
And then the moment was over.
Justin came in with wide eyes. "Did you find it?"
I let out a shaky breath. "Yeah, I got it." I held the key up in my hand. "Thanks for scaring me, you asshole."
I watched Justin bite back a laugh. "Sorry. Richard's going out so we're good. He won't be back for a little bit so you can go."
I shouldered my way past him. "I didn't go through all of this trouble to not even see the infamous attic." I could hear Justin's grin when he says, "Alright then."
The attic's bigger than I expected. But it's filled from floor to ceiling with boxes and huge trunks-and dust. I can't even imagine the bugs and rats that were surrounding us.
"Wow." I muttered.
"There's a lot in here. I barely even remember any of it." Justin said. "Lately, I've been feeling like I'm losing connection with my mom, like I'm forgetting her. After she died, and Richard took over the house, he had all of her stuff packed up here. I think this is the only place where I can try and feel her again."
"And he has the audacity to keep you from coming here?"
Justin sighed heavily through his nose. "There's a reason. Every question I-we-have ever had about him may be explained through something in these boxes. I need to know." He looked back at me. "You don't have to help if you don't want. It's pretty stuffy up here."
I ignored him. "So where do you want to begin?"
It's a lot of heavy shit. Personal and intimate. A lot to take in all at once and so quickly. Justin's eyes scanned over every picture and every memento with careful eyes.
"She was a packrat." He didn't look up at me. "She loved to keep everything because she felt it could come to good use one day." He held a small leather notebook up. "Listen to this."
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"May 12, 1988
Mrs. Stock told me during English that it'd be a good idea to keep a journal. Mom keeps calling it a diary. But I'm not five and I don't need to write about my crushes and all of my little secrets in a dumb book. And I swear if Richard finds this and shows it to his stupid friends I'll beat all of them up.
Ever since Dad surprised us by bringing Richard home last summer, everything's gotten worse and worse. They were okay in the beginning and he was actually pretty nice. But now that he's in high school, he thinks he can boss me around. And he's always giving me these weird looks. We're just two years apart and I've been here a lot longer than him. I don't think Mom would think twice before kicking him out since she's made it obvious that she's not really happy he's here.
But he is my brother so I'm trying to give him a chance.
I raised an eyebrow. "Bringing Richard home? Where was he?"
"My mom and Richard...they had different moms." Justin flipped to the next page in the notebook. The ink on the pages ran together a bit as the corners were starting to yellow. "But my grandma didn't know about Richard. But then his mom passed and he had no one else so my grandpa went to get him and he lived with the family."
"Sounds like your mom and him didn't get along well."
Justin shrugged. "Seems like Richard doesn't really get along with anyone." He looked back down. "I don't even know if my grandparents are still alive or not. They kicked my mom and dad out after I was born so I don't even remember them. I wish I did."
"I think I should go." I said. I had been hanging around for too long. "But um, good luck. With everything. I hope you find what you're looking for."
Justin looked up at me with big eyes. Not even bothering to hide his disappointment. "I do too. See you around, Ana."
Justin
I put the key back where Ana found it before Richard came back. I took two notebooks from the box to stash in my room since I didn't know the next time I'd have access to the attic. I vaguely remembered Mom writing a lot when I was younger. I'd just never known what she was writing about.
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Things were still tense with Richard from our fight. I'd been keeping my distance since he put his hands on me. If he felt any remorse, I had no idea. But I was seeing Susan tomorrow and that had to scare him.
"We never really talk about Mom." I said that night as we were washing dishes together. As Richard rinsed and I dried, I watched him from across the kitchen counter.
"What would you like to talk about?"
I shrugged. "Nothing in particular. I'm just acknowledging the fact that we rarely talk about her. And I'd really like to not forget about her and act as if she never existed."
"You and I both know that's impossible, Justin. Stop being dramatic."
"Nothing's impossible, Uncle." I'm taunting him now. "I mean, it's pretty easy to forget that she ever lived in this house considering we don't talk about her-"
"Enough," He snapped. "Please, just-what do you want from me Justin?"
I shook my head. "I don't want anything from you. But I lost my mom and I don't care how long it's been, that's not something I can forget-"
"And how could I possibly forget? Yes, you lost your mother but I lost my sister as well and I was as torn as you were. But it's been years and the world continued to rotate and life kept going so we just had to go with it. We can talk about your mother whenever you want to. You may not agree with some of my decisions but I've never restricted that so do not make it seem like I have out of hostility."
"She's gone and I feel like I barely know her." I said quietly.
Richard sighs. "What do you want to know?"
"How did you two get along when you moved in with her family? Was it awkward or did you get along right from the start?"
"Let's talk and work at the same time." He handed me a wet plate. "It was awkward for the first few years I lived in that house. My father had left us and now I was living in a house with him and his family so I was angry at him. His wife hated me and made sure I knew it every second of every day. But Pattie was the one I'd gotten along the best with. Maybe it was because we were so close in age, I'm not sure. But I felt like an intruder. So yes, it was awkward."
"Did you love her?" I asked.
"I grew to, yes. We both grew up and matured and found that we had things in common. We became friends."
"And you got used to being an older brother?" I wanted to know everything. If I could have any piece of my mother, anything at all related to her, I'd take whatever I could get.
"I'd never really felt a brother/sister connection with Pattie. It never felt like the same blood ran through our veins." Richard said thoughtfully, like the words slipped without meaning to.
I raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean? Like you always felt distant?"
Richard stiffened just a fraction before looking over at me. "We can talk about this tomorrow. I think you should head up to bed."
"But-"
"Go to bed, Justin." Richard said sternly. And any trace of bonding we'd had in the last five minutes vanished as he turned his back to me, closing him off for billionth time to anything personal.
Hope you liked this chapter! A lot of good stuff is about to start happening and I'm really excited.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. 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