《You World》Chapter 3
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The ball stares at you with a surprise look. It whisper loudly, “The Evil Lord? Submit to you?”
It burst out laughing in your face, rolling itself on the floor. It is evident that it found your declaration hilarious.
“Ha ha. I knew you are a rowdy one, but this joke is a bit too much—”
You barge ahead trying to hit the ball with a powerful kick, but it swiftly dodges your attack with relevant ease. It pulls ahead keeping a safe distance from you, now staring at you with a more serious expression.
“Now, Now… this is crossing the limits you brat…” It shivers on the spot, and yells, “Come out my dear children! Come teach your naughty sibling how to behave in front of me!”
Thousands of smaller balls emerge from the ground, surrounding you and catching you completely off guard. Their numbers surprise you and realise you are in deep shit. You head towards the closest ball and punch it with all your force. Much to your surprise, the shell of the ball turns out to be soft and easily burst upon the impact. You can also feel your body absorbing the weird energy that is emerging from the broken ball.
You keep charging ahead, hitting and attacking as much as balls as you can, stealing their energies and making it a part of your own.
The big ball is now furious. “What are you doing my children?! All of you attack him right now!”
The balls shiver when they hear this, and they all charge on you to try and squeeze you to death.
This powerful attack almost overwhelms you, because the number of balls is just ridiculous. And it seems that it doesn’t matter how much you blow up, there is just too many of them.
But you aren’t giving up. Not yet. This is just a small obstacle you need to overcome in your road to greatness. Today is not the day you perish, definitely not dying by some kind of balls. That would be too humiliating for your standards.
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You kill and kill endless waves of balls. At first you struggle, but as you gain more energy, you began improving and catching up with their attacks. Your worries gradually disappear, and instead you feel something else, a new emotion engulfs your heart; this shit is fun.
You laugh maniacally as you turn around the tide of the battle, unlike the big ball, who is now furious. It unleash a powerful scream that almost make your ears bleed, and then it begin swallowing all the other balls in the area. So much for being his children.
The big ball then slowly transforms into a giant white knight. You can feel its colossal aura descending on you. You instantly realised, this motherfucker has gotten stronger again, and that you are in the red again. Bright side of it, you only have one enemy to worry about now.
At first you decide it’s safer to dodge the knight’s attacks rather than taking them head on. And your decision was a good one, as you could see after the knight misses his first hit; if that blow landed on you would be history.
You keep dodging every attack as the giant knight chase after you. During the chase, you begin stealing pieces of white matter that occasionally fell from the knight, absorbing them into your body.
The white knight is furious but there is nothing he can do. His only option is to keep chasing after you and hope he can finally put you to eternal rest.
The chase lasted for hours, until you decide to pause and prepare your first attack. You have now absorbed enough energy that you feel confident you can beat it, now that the knight is much weaker than before.
You are not sure how you will perform your first attack, but you inspire yourself from the numerous anime you have watched during your life, and simulate an attack from your favourite series.
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You unleash your attack with all might, hitting the giant knight on its chest.
The giant knight unleash a miserable shriek as its body shatters in two, surprising the both of you. Vast amount of energy escape the broken body of the giant knight, and it is immediately sucked into your body. This is your complete victory.
The energy you absorbed quickly transforms you. You then take a look at your new body.
The first thing you notice is that the colour of the skin is back, and your muscles are bigger and stronger. You feel your long hair resting against your chest and almost reaching for your butt, though it doesn’t seem to bother you that much. You are now wearing the outfit of a great warrior. You can’t stop admiring yourself. Impressive stuff.
This is the new you, and you feel incredible.
Before you is the defeated half-corpse of the original ball, now powerless on the ground, at your mercy.
As you approach the ball, it weakly says, “I surrender. From now on, I acknowledge you as my lord and I will do anything you say. Please spare me!”
Then you hear a rumbling sound. A large silver door appears not that far away from the both of you. The metallic door slowly opens, revealing a bright red entrance.
“Incredible… For a newcomer to gain access to the higher realm. You are truly something else. I am jealous…” The ball says admiring the new you.
As soon as he finishes his speech, a stream of powerful winds pulls you towards the red entrance.
Let yourself go and enter the higher realm. Resist and block the force of the winds. You and that piece of shit have unfinished business.
[Option 1 – stop reading and skip to chapter 5]
[Option 2 – continue reading below]
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As soon as you feel the power of the winds trying to push you outside of this realm, you unleash all your strength and disperse the stream of winds. The entire place shakes and the red entrance collapses.
Everything is calm again, as you move towards the ball, grinning.
The ball already knows what is about to happen, and begin begging for its life. But all of this in vain.
“You tried to kill me just moments ago, and now you asking for mercy? Don’t worry, I will make sure you demise will be slow and painful!” You yell as you jump on it and start tearing to pieces.
You laugh and laugh, crazily, maniacally. What a satisfying thing to do, you even think this is better than sex. It feels so great tearing that bastard down!
Useless are its cries, useless are its promises, useless are its struggles. You show no mercy as you lay waste to what is left of that piece of shit.
When you are done, you also absorb the remains of the ball. You are amazed by how much power that bastard had, its energy is on a completely different levels from the other balls.
The huge intake of energy transforms you again. You hair and eyes now turn red, and you can feel your internal power has now doubled. And you thought you were amazing before. How wrong you were!
You can now hear the sound of collapsing realm. This is something you are expecting. A realm without its owner is bound to collapse. The obvious.
But you are not afraid. You know that you are so strong that a simple realm collapsing will never kill you.
You stand there, laughing at yourself, as everything collapses, with you disappearing with the entire realm.
[Skip to chapter 9]
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