Yo guys, we are having a meeting. Get your asses over now or don't anything is fine. - Ariel

What's the matter Areil, me and Zazel were in the middle of writing chapter 10, what do you want. - Styx

Please hold your questions until everyone get's here. For now just sit quiet and let me do the talking. - Ariel

Hey Ariel, it's been a long time since we've meet, you always ignore me whenever I try to talk to you, is something the matter. IS the story going to crap. Are we finally moving out. Are we getting bad grades because you keep dozing off. I'm very curious to know what you did wrong. - Yokai

Why are you calling us out so late, I need my beauty sleep you know to stay this beautiful. Unlike you guys, I nuture my beauty. - Aphrodasiac

Great, new characters that didn't get introduced properly yet. - Ariel

Ok Styx, I've finished updating the skill page, has the meeting ended yet? Oh, it's still going isn't it. - Zazel

Yeah, we are just waiting for Uriel to come and we can actually get this meeting started. - Styx

Wow, we are doing a update notice where a chapter would go, this must be serious like out fear of -. - Uriel

Ok, everyone's here there is an important matter we have to discuss.

Should we rewrite the story or should we continue on as normal? - Ariel

Oo, this is a serious topic, I guess we all have too vote. - Yokai

Correct Mr. Goody two-shoes, we also have to give great reasons on why we voted for it. - Ariel

Can't we do this tommorow, I need to be beautiful for the dreams. - Aphrodasiac

Nope, we are doing this today and since you complained first, why don't you start? -Ariel

Fine but don't complain for trashing on our own story.

I vote to rewrite the story. My reason being because we didn't give any accurate description on the appearences and personality on the characters Styx and Zazel written. For example, Christina. She is a perverted maid who suddenly decided to work for Satan for unknown reasons. We know nothing about her or her past, we only just know those basic facts which don't give enough information about her personality or appearence. Are the readers just supposed to assume what she looks like and that she is just a pervert. You need to give more back ground information to build her as a character. You could say that she was raped in the past and enjoyed the feeling so she's been trying to recreate that feeling b assaulting men, killing the ones who don't satisfy her. She then meets Satan who takes her in as a maid because he thought she was just being assaulted. See, character and back story. For personality she could be a tall and stoic maid who is the definition of closet pervert for those who hasn't met her , and is open about this to people who've discovered this fact about her. For appearences, yoou could say she has short brown hair and other shit. You see what I mean?

This is why I vote to rewrite the story. - Aphrodasiac

Ok good reason, thats 1 vote for rewriting the story, how about you Styx. - Ariel

Uh, well I have to also vote for rewriting the story. Not because of character development, more along the lines of story. As one of our first comments said, our premise is not bad it's just the chapters leave to much of a gap. Let me explain, instead of Jay fighting Remedy, make him fight an albino tiger because of his huge [Ego]. However, that throws the reader's expectation leading to disapointment for a huge battle they thought was going to happen. It's like telling a kid that you going to give him candy, and ultimatly in the end giving him vegtables. I know we think about a thousands of ideas, but you ignore a lot of them and go for random ones at best. It's gotten so bad that we had to ask a friends to help decide where the story will lead to. Also don't forget the fact that readers don't know your pattern, heck a lot of them thought you were going to make Glenn's harem transfer to Jay. You also tried just to many ideas at once turning it to a confusing mess.

So because of these reasons, I vote to rewrite the story, even though it will take a lot of work. - Styx

You guys are really targetting towards me aren't ya, 2 votes for rewritting the story, how about the assistant Zazel. - Ariel

I really have no say in this but fine, I choose to continue what we have so far.

No particular reason other than the number of drafts we've written so far. Me and Styx have about 4 drafts in the making 50% of the way done. We used the best of you jumbled ideas to try and create futures chapters that might not even make it into the story. Reasons because of our weird knack for forgeting major things but other than that it's fine the way it is. We also tried our shot at trying to create back stories without you since it's hard enough when you try to add weird ideas into them. This is the end of my reasoning but I will like to know your opinion on the matter since you've brought it up. - Zazel

Sorry but I have to abstain since I am the brains behid the operation. But if I have to say I really don't care where the story heads as long as the readers enjoy what I write. - Ariel

Aw, is it because you love them. - Yokai

No, it's because I have a napoleon complex, if people aren't worshipping me then I get very aggresive. - Ariel

This is why I do all the talking and commenting, not you. Before you complain about it, how about you Yokai-san? - Styx

I just want to choose to continue the story just to even out the votes. Besides your new at the whole expressing your ideas thing so the readers can probably give you a pass when considering that. Don't forget, even though you are a guy who enjoy creating original story ideas, you are very terrible at explaining and expressing your ideas. You've had the idea to make this story for what, a year I think. Then you uplaoded the prologue but don't come back to it for 2 months. So writing on this is really a good way to do stuff like this, upload on a story website. - Yokai

So an even total in votes so far, negating both sides. How about you Uri- Where the fuck is Uriel. - Ariel

While you were busy not paying attention to him, some commented on how he is the frontal lobe, making him the frontal lobe and that it's not needed so he went back. - Styx

Wait, does that mean we have to leave to readers? Oh well, I was going to leave it to them anyways. So people who've stuck with the story so far, vote on how we should procced with the story at the top of the page. - Ariel