《World of Enosi | Discontinued! Do not read if you hate discontinued novels!》IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT | NOVEL WILL BE DISCONTINUED
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Apparently this was required so I'm just going to write this in.
I just realized this needs to be 500 words long. So I'm just going to copy the author's note above to here.
Hi there, author here. I'm very sorry to announce that this novel will be discontinued. I will give you some brief explanations as to why:
1. I cannot focus on this novel anymore. It's not like something bad happened to me or anything, it's just that I'm not really interested in writing this novel anymore. I know it was just 20 chapters, however I laid out the general direction for where the novel was supposed to go.
2. The story was going towards a weird direction. As i said, I did have a general direction for where this novel will be going. However, this novel was not going the way it was supposed to be... I could not connect the novel and its original plot. Ryan, Arci, and Dain were supposed to be the three main protaganists, with Ryan being the focus of this novel. However, I couldn't really write Dain as he was supposed to be, and Arci didn't seem to be... Involved, enough in the plot. He didn't really have any interesting reactions.
3. I was getting bored. This novel wasn't shaping up to my expectations, probably because the writing and
the 2nd point i mentioned. Again, I'm a new author so, I wasn't really experienced in writing, formatting, grammar, or how the buttons worked here. It's better for me to just stop here before this novel becomes some ultimately boring and uninteresting novel, where I can't even think of what to do. I really hope there weren't any plotholes.
These three are the reasons why I'm discontinuing this novel. Well, maybe I'll rewrite the original plot, and you know, actually think things through this time. But that remains to be seen honestly. I'm honestly kinda letdown, and disappointed with myself because I really wanted to create and imagine my own world, characters, setting, and plot... However, this clearly showed that I wasn't really suited to become an Author.
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There were many things that I wanted to do, I wanted to introduce tons of side stories for the other characters, a romance between Ryan and The Witch of Star Calamity that would develop over hundreds of chapters, Ryan's growth to becoming not just more powerful and capable person, but a mentally strong person who is logical, smart, and wise aswell. Dain and Arci were reincarnators that came from worlds that were technologically similar to Earth... Tetra, the Commander of the Knight Corps secret research project was supposed to be about touching the realms of Divinity. Terena's side story was supposed to be about a lonely and isolated prodigy. Jano's side story was supposed to showcase his struggles of climbing through the ranks of the Knights, both mentally and physically, Dain's side story was supposed to be about trash being reincarned to another world, but scarred and hurt mentally by an event that happened 5 years ago, which showed him that he cannot live in this world like harem protagonists from slice of life isekai novels, Arci's side story was supposed to highlight the passing of millions of years while being alone, something that really scared me when I thought about his side story. But I could not get his emotions right, I mean he is joyful but... I couldn't add in that bit of insanity in his words. The Witch of Star Calamity of course, gets a side story too because she was supposed to be the 'heroine' in this novel. Hers showcased her life of weakness and running away, as she was the daughter of a witch, and a special type of elf(which I haven't really thought of yet). She is discriminated by both Elves and Humans, and nobody really wanted to take care of her because she was born as a Witch, a being that caused doom. This wasn't something fake
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like the witches in the past, this was real. Being a Witch meant that you had off the charts mana storage and superior mana affinity. Being weak made you good targets for Spirits to devour you or any other beings to enslave you. Literally a life of suffering. She watched her Witch mother get captured and consigned to who knows what, and saw her elven father signing a contract with a devil to save her, ultimately causing her father's soul to be drained right in front of her eyes.
Aaah... I had so many things I wanted to do with this novel. But I just couldn't do it. Maybe this was lack of resolve but I still couldn't do it. I'm very sorry for the people out there who were actually enjoying this novel.
11 followers, 1421 total viewers. Im so sorry that I let you all down like this.
In the future, maybe I will rewrite the entire plot,. story, and, characters and actually do it for real. However, that would be hard because I'm nearing high school entrance exams. Yes, I'm 15. Im not even in high school yet. And if I get accepted, I'm going to have to live in dorms. So yeah, really low chance of this happening.
If you have any questions about this novel, please comment down below. I'm ready to answer any questions you all have, and once again I'm really sorry for letting you all down like this. I'm already mentally prepared for the possible hate I will get for doing this, so you can go ahead and express your frustrations.
Also, is there some option to have a tag saying that your novel is discontinued? I'm just going to write it on the name.
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