《The Silver Sabertooth》The Beast Unleashed
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No one seems to believe that something so powerful and could end their lives are coming to their way as they preparing for a fight...In the head of the Antorya soldiers but the worry and the fear in the generals and the king face tells that this may be the end to all of them...
In same time Zeral reaching the capital, he keeps running and running with the eager to kill in his face but as he running some certain memories are getting back to him but he ignores it and trying to over think it until he reaches the capital.
But one of the memories stopped him for seconds and he looked to the sky then says
"My sweet son, don't watch me now because your father about to do something so bad you will not like it but trust me son it's all for you and my dear wife"
Then he looks down to see the memories as just like real thing happening to him, he sees his son watching him training with another soldier...
The smile on the kid face can tell how much he happy to see his father training so hard, he believes his father is a real hero...However tried to remove this memory from his head so he can move on but his heart starts to hurt him so he wondered "What's wrong with him?"
After he took few seconds resting, he back running again as he getting close to the capital, the army of Antorya fully prepared to attack Zeral...
The king asks his generals "Is all ready for this?"
The first general answers "Yes lord, all are ready from the soldiers to the archers all are ready"
The second general with a smile says "We will stop this monster and punish him for what he did to all humans he killed"
The third general says "Yeah let's pray to god for that"
The king says "I totally agree we need the power of god to defeat this...Mons...Damned human"
Moments later, a commander opens the door quickly saying "Sir, Sir, he is here!!"
The king replies "It's times to end this" so he stand to go outside to watch the battle as he going his wife, the queen Emma, interrupts him with the concern in the face and tears in eyes that ruined her pretty face as she saying "No don't go outside please it's so dangerous for you"
The king stopped walking and with a smile "Have a fate sweetie, this will be over so quickly, he is just a man against my army...And I had to be there along with my men so listen you have to stay here okay? No matter what don't go out okay? and always that I love you and I will do anything to protect you and protect my child"
She grabbed his hands and says "Why are you telling me this like you are not coming back? what's wrong? you are not going to get hurt right?"
The king with a kiss on her lips then he says "I won't" then he continue moving...
Meanwhile, Zeral finally arrived at the capital, as he walking towards the gates, the archers above in the walls- the walls surrendering the main city and the only to it by the main gates of it- so they prepared to strike and waiting for the order...
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Then stopped walking as he remembering the last time he walked it out from the city, he remembers the people behind him cheering for him...With a smile on his face he says "Finally I'm back" then he look above to see black cloud coming down, he says "Wooaw this is charming welcoming gift to me, I like it"
The black cloud coming wasn't a normal cloud, it was thousands of arches coming down like a rain but Zeral start laughing "It's raining hahahaha" then he open his arms like about to give a hug to someone...
The arches come down at him while he laughing so those bows hit him many of them, everyone thought that was it! he will fall down by that but he didn't...
No single arch get throw his skin neither his head like he was wearing armor made from pure iron due his powerful body, not even a single scratch he get
They soldiers can't believe it so they attack him once more as the commanders screaming "AGAIN!"
And again the bows get down heavily on Zeral spot but Zeral again welcome it in same way as saying "Oh dear, it's raining again damn hahaha" but with same results, nothing get into Zeral's powerful body
The commanders order once more "STEADY...FIRE" this time they used the bows with fire then they yelled "BURN THIS BITCH" and they fire another thousand of bows with fire in them to burn the hell out of Zeral as they thought
Zeral looks to those arches and says "Man!! Is it raining with fire now? Yup welcome to Antorya" so the bows hit him and start to burn him and area he is in...
The soldiers saw him stop as fire eating him...They start laughing and saying "It's over!" the commanders smiling to each other but the king was not, he knows that this won't work on Zeral and yes it doesn't as they laughing...
Zeral is walking out from the fire with no single burns in his body even the power of fire won't affect his immortal body...The shock on the archers and commanders faces as they looking to Zeral.
Zeral taking off his clothes which were burning but his body was fine so Zeral yelled to them "What a great way to welcome me! Thanks so what about the desert now? I'm so hungry huh?" The commanders quickly order the soldiers behind the gates to open it and get out to fight but the king doubting them...
The gate went open and thousands of soldiers came out to fight the commanders who went out with them start telling their soldiers that this is the battle of life! this is a battle is the fate of entire kingdom as one of the commanders says
"This is your days, this is your time to prove that you are worthy to be men of the great Antorya kingdom! it's the day where we will fight the ultimate enemy to save our home! our families our future!! today the sacrifice needed to be done you fight for your god you fight to bitter end so everyone does your fucking best"
The entire army screams all along "HELL YEAH!!!" but Zeral who was clapping his hands and laughing at them says "Man! that's great speech I must say! but I wonder do you gave such much dessert to your guests? well, this is so grateful so shall we start? really getting hungry" then he pull out his sword
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Then the army start to attack Zeral after they surrendered him and they start a tactic to drove Zeral out his guard and open weak points that if he got some of course but they didn't realize that they are facing a man who was behind this tactic
As Zeral watching them how they move and taking positions to strike Zeral from many directions which they believe he won't able to block it but Zeral the man who created this tactic years ago, he remembers it so he starts laughing again "Man! I miss this one! hey, you go few meter left" point his finger to a soldier then he looks to other and says "Are you stupid? that's not the position you suppose to be at"
The confusion on the soldier's faces and the commanders as well made them wonder how he knew this tactic? they used few times before but was one of best tactic ever made as they believed in...
One of the commands says "Damn he is right" the other one asks "What? how does he know about this tactic? no one ever saw this one and survived?"
The other commander answers "I can't believe it but I guess he was a soldier of us before"
Zeral says "You in back of line just don't be nervous I can see you are about to piss on yourself but you see the problem is if you can't hold that position and wait for a weak point in my counter attack, the other half of line will lose"
The commanders can't believe that Zeral actually instructing their soldiers instead of them so one of them ask "Who the hell are you?"
Zeral briefly answers "Ah am I doing your job? sorry but you see I can't watch soldiers doing it wrong in front of me, after all, I am the one who creates it"
The shock the soldiers and commanders receive more than anything they expect so they wonder "WHAT?...HOW?...NO WAY..."
Then Zeral says "So you were thinking this amazing tactic which I made in the battle of Moscal years ago worked effectively on them so it may work on me as well mhm fair enough so I helped your soldiers to make it at least good at it was, now go ahead and try it on me"
One of the commanders so astonished quickly says "This can't be you! Damn it no! tell me you are not sir Adomas Ivr Marilos, the famous warrior, the hero of Batrak city"
Another commander quickly screams "NOO that's impossible"
Zeral interrupts him "Man! is that my last name? Mhm, not a bad one! and why this much of credits? huh? you know I never asked to be fame"
The commander tells the other commander "Damn it what hell happened to him? as I remember he was one of best swordsman ever lived"
the second one replies "Yeah I heard about his skills and now he is immortal now? how in the world we will defeat him then?"
The commander answers "I'm not sure! but it seems we are doomed already"
Zeral says "Now let's skip the introduction, shall we? more time you waste the more hunger I get so let's start dancing"
Then in a blink of eye Zeral with his amazing speed quickly tears the soldiers in front of him and killing them one by one tearing their bodies apart as the other soldiers watching...
All commanders scream "ATTACK!!" so the battle begin...Zeral killing the soldiers while moving quickly as they trying to catch up his pace and power but their swords have no effect on him, no matter how they try to stab Zeral, nothing can hurt him as he moving to kill them so brutal, so vicious as he eating some tearing parts of the soldiers...
Zeral proved to them that even their tactic even their number won't work against immortal being as Zeral, the king himself watching above along with his generals, his sad face tells the sorrow he is in to see his men died and brutally killed by a man who once was under his command...But as trying to remember who was he?
As Zeral taking out the heads of soldiers and butcher them savagely like wild beast eating a little rabbit then he noticed that the king above watching him so he smiled to him with blood covering his face as grabbing head of one of the soldiers then he screams "HAIL TO THE KING" and burst into laughter "Hahahha come down dear king join the feast"
The king looks to Zeral face and suddenly he recognized him as saying "No way!... It can't be you...So that's why you were wondering what happened at Batrak city"
The king stand and walk to downstairs as his generals asking "My lord! where are you going?...My lord no stop!" The king quickly moving down as saying "I know how to stop this...I must stop him"
The king refuses to stop walking to gate as all of his soldiers begging him to stop
He says "I will stop this man by myself. I know him very well..." then he turned to his closest general, Steve and says "If I didn't come back, this kingdom in your hand"
Steve says "Wait for my king, please don't say this!! you don't have to do this"
The king says "I know how to stop him from killing my men! please trust me and I trust my kingdom in your hands so please promise me, Steve"
Steve crying "Yes my friend, my king, my hero, yes I do"
Then King orders his men to open the gate to him so he can come out to speak with Zeral but the question is? how will he stop the unstoppable beast? Or is he going to his fateful death?
The end.
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