《To Build an Empire (Old, new one is out)》Poll
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I've been at a crossroad lately. The chapters don't feel natural to me and I'm not liking the way the story has developed. I could pump out chapters all day, but if it's not an enjoyable read, there is no point in me writing it.
So we're going to have a poll on it.
The three options are:
( - Keep writing this story with the same quality and frequency, with no chance of being rewritten.
(- Rewrite the story, this time at a slower pace with better prose and quality. Maybe even take it a different direction.
(- Abandon this work and move on to a new one that I can focus quality over quantity. I'm against dropping a book, but I want my readers to be happy.
Also, I want you to give me feedback on what can be improved if you feel like there is something that needs work.
I'm honestly not happy with the way my story is now, and that's due to the nature of how I write. I want to write, but if it's not good, what's the point?
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