《Space Age》Suggestions post
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Just saying, here is were you can post any suggestions you have about my writing or any Questions you have about the story.
I will also post updates to let you know whats going on in between chapters, for insistence this week i have writers block![th_0gotas.gif] so the chapter will be out a day late.
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Endeavour
When a threat to the galaxy is about to resurface - and with only tenuous proof that it's coming - Ali Turner must convince people to act. As a disgraced former captain, will it be enough? And even if it is, what lengths will she need to go to - or be willing to go to - to stop it? Endeavour is a science fiction series with action & adventure elements and numerous classic sci-fi influences. Feedback is appreciated. Book 2 complete. Book 3 being written. Gore rating is to be on the safe side where a particular scene strays a bit too close to the borderline.
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Unto Dark
A man of cripplingly ill mind, bridled with the spirits and regrets of the past. Wade Pierce trudges through each day of his monochrome existence, only as penance for his sins. Such a man is abruptly decamped of this world courtesy of unapologetic forces, left stranded in a realm filled with unknowns. Armed only with his potent yet fragile intellect, Wade advances into this new abyss, as he attempts to rewrite the wrongs he has committed. Plagued by vile beasts, self-righteous Gods, and even his own seething darkness, the cracks in his mind begin to spread and a dangerous, newfound power bubbles beneath the surface. As the world grows darker day by day, this unfortunate journey begins ------------ I suppose rectitude dictates that I should state any themes worthy of noting here. First of all, this story is not a sunshiny one in the slightest. Since it is listed under the psychological and mature tag and not the comedy tag, that shouldn't be a surprise. Next, morbidity is a factor and general apathy towards human life. All of these are common themes amongst other writers, so nothing new there. The story also contains consensual, and non-consensual sexual activity, although I have tried to be as tasteful as is possible for someone like myself. Finally, the pace is drawn-out, and the language is magniloquent at times. Not to mention, the chapters are quite lengthy. Don't expect to read this halfheartedly... Other than that, enjoy the story... There's nothing more important than that...
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The Five Series - redemption
Book 1 - Redemption Three generations have passed since the last near-apocalyptic war. Civilization is beginning to thrive again at an ever increasing pace. The burden of society has been once again placed on the back of a massive robotic workforce, creating a huge divide between industrial glory, and those forced to live in its shadow. Many have stubbornly held onto the old ways of self-governance from back when the government fell, but with its return, life in Welan City is changing. Aaron, a middle-aged man, who is stuck in the rut of daily life, witnesses a murder and finds himself in trouble, love, and the middle of a highly secretive robotics project. Aaron stakes his life on helping a prototype survive, and pays for it dearly. Passionate hate, love, and indifference send life in Welan City spiraling out of control, leaving no one innocent in the end. The Five Series is, well, a series. I've completed 3 of the books so far and will finish with a fourth, maybe fifth book. Book 1 is heavy on the character development side while the following will be much more decision and consequence oriented. This story reaches into the soul of a person and the universe we live in. Some people deserve a second chance, and some do not. With that im mind, no one really ever gets what they deserve though, do they? Always tell the people you care about that you love them as often as you can, they could be gone tomorrow. Would that change if you could always bring them back? I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I did writing it. Cody
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Insanely Lucky
Some Call her Mother nature.Some call her God. Some call her Life, and by extension "A Bitch". Lady Luck is all these things and more. After a Botched attempt to exterminate sapient life from Earth she inadvertently caused one of the worst species in the galaxy to come into existnece. Humans Cover provided by Jack0fHeart
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Reaper
Thousands of years ago god the creator got lonely and decided to make his own children, those are Life, Wisdom, Bounty, and Death. As they grew older, they got to have their own wills and thinking, life discovered that he could make life on a world, Wisdom discovered that he could give wisdom to those life brings, Bounty could help flourish living beings and Death could give death to a living. As god saw their abilities he decided to bestow them a gift, which is the Ark, the world where mortals created by the children of god lived. As a one continent Life as the eldest decided to divide the lands, Whiteshore where Life’s altar resides, Fallhan where Bounty resides and Bluemoon where Wisdom resides, as for Death who Life hates for his abilities and being a rebel, Death got the smallest and least bountiful of the lands the snow mountain Island which is literally divided by Life itself.
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The Path of The Sinners
'Fractal Lands' is a new world, created, nurtured, and released by the company, Liber. Seven friends decide that this world, might be the escape that they need. A world without the constrictions dictated within their own.A world where they can be free to choose their own paths.A world when the impossible, becomes possible. A world in which, not even the sky holds the limits.That is the world of 'Fractal Lands'. That is the land, they seek to conquer.Mature tag due to swearing, violence, and possible events I may come up with later
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