《Eternal Teacher》Chapter 7:The Compassion and The Shadow
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Author's Note:Thank you Chiarob317 for your advice I will try to implement this into the writing (printed the post and it's hanging above my computer for when i type at home)... so thank you and let's see if it helps .Also plz comment because things like this help me get better at writing
The Compassion and The Shadow
-Right after Ziotic casted the blinding spell-
Mc Point
As I stood covered in blinded i heard the laughter of the goblin as he ran, I became weary of my back as in the fields and forest of Europe I could remember when me and my men were attacked by the enemy as they “pretended” to run. Turning to face my rear the darkness fade from my vision quickly, looking at the bottom right hand of my sight i could see the blinking triangle again.
With a click the window opened and a message appeared.
You have completed the Mission:Save the Wedding
By helping the villages beat back Ziotic and his followers you have saved the union of the fairies and humans in the area
Reward
Human Rp +100
Fairy Rp +100
Golin Rp -100
??? Rp -100
Bonus Reward:Appraisal-Sama
“Appraisal-Sama” A being that will answer to the users questions with the info when prompted with a question after say(thinking) its name
*Interesting will need to try it, Appraisal-Sama, what is “Rp”?*
AN(Will keep Mc White in thought Appraisal can be Pink)
At my question a female voice resounded in my head.
*”Rp” as it is called is the Racial Point system. A way to explain to summoned souls and people on how the world perceives them. Positive Rp helps with that race giving you a higher chance of a peaceful interaction, while negative Rp does the opposite.*
As i was listening to Appraisals explanation Connal’s body glowed white the same as when i transformed and the leather armor and sword disappeared.Replaced by his “innkeeper clothes”
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Recalling this i ask Appraisal
*What does the glowing mean?”*
*”Glowing” as the user calls it is the activation of the Equipment Slots,when activated they will equip any armor or weapon the user has that are stored in his/hers “Inventory”.
The said items will adjust to the user's size to better accommodate them”*
*Hmm skills seem to be really useful but why do I have the rest of these clothes on?,Don't recall ever putting any on*
*Ehem the Skill “Shapeshifting” will apply the basic clothing to any form the user takes, It's a safety feature the Gods put in to keep people from running around naked as someone else.*
*So can i remove clothing?*
*Yes but you will get a special set of Titles for doing it that i would not recommend*
As i continued the talk with Appraisal I suddenly notices that the villagers were staring at me.
Not wanting to continue the eye contact i began to look around, as i scanned the group standing in front of me i noticed a small child bending over the two bodies of the people i saw before the fight. As she continued to cry I but together that those people must have been her parents. Not wanting her to bring back old memories i had of the towns I had walked though of screaming kids and gunfire i took the cloak i had thrown off and ripped it in two.
Walking over to the bodies i stopped to look at the girl,With small wings that seemed to belong to butterflies on her back, and ahead of hair of light blue she looked up at me with tears in her eyes.Seeing the ripped cloak in my hand she looked at me confused ripping off a piece of the torn cloth about the size of a napkin i began to wipe the tears from her eyes.. Shaking from the sudden action of kindness the girl began to cry even more.
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At this moment another lady there looked to be in her 50s with wings came over and hug the girl. Taking this as a sign i lifted the bodies gently and wrapped them in the cloak to cover their bodies.
After doing this another blue triangle appeared but i ignoring it i walked towards the villagers who were giving the girl space.They seemed to be arguing
“I say we chase after the little buggers and teach them a lesson” yelled a village.
At his words many other got up in arms to join him as they began to leave the field
“STOP!” yelled the wizard “Don't even think about leaving the field!”
“Why not old man?”said the villager who riled up the rest
“Look at the edge of the forest”
As the men and women who looked closely at the edge of the forest they could see a black smoke sitting in the shadows,this was the very same smoke witch had killed the parents of Camellia.
“That is the spell “Pursuing Fog” the spell will attack anyone who fleas that the caster perceives as a foe, when caught it will suffocate them to death”
Hearing the description of the spell the villager backed up from the edge.
“Sssoo.o what do we do about it” the villager said shaking
“Nothing… but wait.” the wizard said “It will dispel in about 30minutes , most mages use it for following people but it also works as a delaying spell when you retreat”
Knowing this the men and women gathered in the field as we waited for the smoke to disappear.
The fairy men took the two bodies and placed them in a carriage, after that I sat down on te grassy field as i watch the men burn the bodies of the trolls and goblins at the far end of the freild downwind.As i watched them burn the old women and the girl came down and sat next to me.At this moment i desided to look at the notification
Title Earned:Respector of the Deceased
for treating the dead with respect you have shown compassion for those who died for others
Fairy Rp +50
Bonus reward
The Goddess of Life and Nature is pleased with your actions when in the presence of injured people you deem allies Nature Plus will slowly mend their wounds at a faster rate
*Well i never ment to gain this but alright*
Looking over my shoulder i could see Connal and the Village Chief approaching…..
-Deep In the Forest-
As Ziotic and Snarl ran a creature watched when they finally stopped it approached
“Well well well… if it isn’t Ziotic” said the shadow in a harsh voice
hearing this Ziotic froze and turned towards the shadow.
“Ma-ma -ma Master what are you doing hear?!?” Ziotic said in a frightened voice
“Oh you didn’t think i wouldn’t check up on you after you used the spell i gave you along with the Ring of Blinding” did you?” the shadow said with a smirk
“N-n-n-no my lord i did not”
At these words Snarl slowly snuck out of sight not wanting to draw anymore attention to himself.
Meanwhile the voice laughed
“I thought you were smarter than this Ziotic after i helped you gain control of the nest and even gave you trolls you go and fail me.”
“Master if you give me more time i will have the village destroyed and the temple found it's hard to search the mountains when the humans are everywhere”Ziotic said with sweat dripping off his chin
“Oh Ziotic if there is one thing I've learned in my long life is that there are no second chances” and at those words Ziotic was sucked into the shadows body screaming the whole way in.
As the last evidence of Ziotic was only ripples on the shadows body he said to the bushes
“Now little red goblin why don’t you tell me everything that happened from the beginning”
At these words Sarl knew there was no escape and left the bushes to stand before the shadow
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