《Etryria [discontinued]》Another Prologue? - My Wish
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Chapter 19 – Another Prologue?-My Wish
As the Divine Providence Elous was sleeping, and the world kept revolving around the red giant star. Most of the “normal animals” evolve as they become magical creatures that can also manipulate mana. Many new dungeons were born, as well as the humanoid species populating the lands. As the lives of those who has intelligence move on, they’ve noticed that somehow God was not speaking to them, nor the God’s Valkyries, it seems like God has left this word. When the humans, and other races asked the Celestails, all the Celestials answers were all the same “We don’t know”, but that truth was Selena forbid the Celestials to speak about God. For those who were religious, not knowing that “God” was just sleeping, slowly they forgot about The Divine Providence Elous, and their new Gods were the Celestials. To the new generations, The Divine Providence Elous is just a myth in the old story of books, they didn’t hate him or believe in him, they just moved on.
After the Great War of Blackmoor, two more wars occurred in the middle of the super continent, and on its east side. But those story are just for another day *LOL*. Having new GODS, the “Celestial Gods” did a lot of miracles, they also created weapons to give to those who were worthy, only Tagruer didn’t make a new weapon cause he still had the Shadow Katar Limbo.
The world without The Divine Providence was becoming more like a game world, a world with swords and magic, where there were adventurers, dungeons, mysterious places and monsters, good and evil. And a lot of people cared about power, leveling, hunting monsters for ingredients, to make weapons and armors.
After so many years, The Divine Providence Elous has awakened.
***
Elous.
When I woke up, I can hear a small noise from outside, seems like Elysium was livelier than before. I slowly get up from my bed, while I rub my sleepy eyes.
“uahhhhh, how long have I been asleep? Uhhhhh… sounds like there’s a party outside.”
I got out of the bed and start stretching, I can hear a lot of noises outside my mansion, my room was big and the walls were thick enough that mostly loud sounds can’t be heard from the inside and outside. As I walk to the door, I summoned a hot cup of coffee to eliminate my sleepiness, and munch on some chocolate waffles. When I opened the double doors, I can hear a beautiful melody, different tones, voices, and someone playing a harp. The blend of music was so relaxing; I can feel that my eyes got sleepy again as the music were so lovely. I fought my sleepiness and walk at the corridor leading outside my mansion, when I was outside I saw a lot of. . . . how should I say this, “angels” singing and playing harp, some were laying down on the grass, some were tending to the flowering plants, and others have their own businesses. I can’t find my Valkyries, a lot has change, there were also other buildings around the mansion, the “angels” have a mixture of men and women, but most of it was composed of women. They’ve seemed to be about a hundred “angels” in total, some angel noticed me and gave their greetings and respect, the others seeing this also followed and gave their respect.
Angels: “Greetings to The Divine Providence Elous…”
I also replied to everyone, and I went to the Observation building where Selena was working, hoping that one of my Valkyrie was there. The building was enhanced, and much more beautiful that the previous place. When I entered the building there was different rooms and “angels” looking at different monitors which was still a bubble of water. All of them gave their respective greetings, and I continued to explore the building. When I got to the last room, there it was a large bubble of water; with a lot of “angels” looking at the monitor and in the middle, a throne were one of my beautiful Valkyrie was sitting. Selena was much prettier from before, or is it just the effect of “me missing my valkyries”, as she saw me, she jump out straight to where I am and hugged me so tight.
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Selena: “A wonderful day my God, I missed you, we all did, we Valkyries did, you have been asleep for a long time, about 700 years”
Elous: “Good day Selena, I missed you all too. Hmm that long” * I did intend to sleep a long time*
As I gave a sweet smile at her, in some way Selena is always serious but when she’s with me, her attitude changes to a sweet girl. I gave her a kiss at her forehead making her face red as a tomato. Some of the “angels” look at us with envious look and some were saying like “ohhhhhh” and “sweet”.. Selena glared at them and told them to get back to work. Hahaha, Selana was strict with work. I now summoned some pizzas for me, and also for the ones that were inside the Throne room of Selena.
Elous: “A lot has change; can you update me about Elysium? And those people, angels, whatever you call them?”
Selena: “Yes my God, we Valkyries come to a decision that we make our own minions like Marzanna did, here inside this observation room, all of them are my minions, I call them The Observers, they helped me observe the Celestials and also some of the places on Etryria. And I know that you saw a group of singing “angels”, they were the minions of Cassandra and Diana, they are called Guardians, and they were the ones guarding Elysium, it’s because some of the intelligent humans, and other demons manage to cross realms, but don’t worry they were taken cared off. That’s why the guardians are now singing to pass the time. And when you visit Marzanna you can find a lot of Soul Collectors in there like Harvy. And due to some circumstances some of the very good souls where not reincarnated, and they have wished to stay her at Elysium, and the guardians help them to build some homes around the mansion.”
Elous: “Thank you Selena. Let’s go visit Marzanna and the others, shall we?”
Selena: “You’re very much welcome my God. Yes my God I’m sure they’ll be happy to see you. And one more thing, would you like me to update you about the Etryria?”
Elous: “No it’s fine,thank you. As I’ve said before, I want to be surprised.”
***
As we walk out and went to where Marzanna is, Selena was staying close to me, very close. When we got to the Soul Mangement Building, it improved a little, but I’m guessing that the inside will be much creepier, it’s just a guess.
The inside of the building didn’t change that much, and a similar downward staircase greeted us when we entered and. We are now walking on the hallway and Soul Collectors were in every column stationed as a guard and kneeled to us, the aura was not relaxing, but it was a little creepy, the walls have chains hanging around and some walls was like cut in different ways and stitches back to place, and there were also bats. But the bats were cute, I give credit to that, they are like fuzz ball with wings. At the end of the corridor there was a mountain of stuff toys, but the stuff toys were creepy and weird, a stuffed bear with a different pair of arms and was stitched, a doll with a big eyeball as a head, and other stuffs out of the ordinary. It feels like I’m not in “heaven” for God sake, wait.. I am God..sigh.. In the middle of the stuffed mountain of nightmares was a door. Selena told me that it is the room where Marzanna is.
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I was a bit shocked when I entered the room; it was like a cult sacrificial altar inside. But the same portal and three chalices were still present. As I was looking around, my three other Valkyries was inside the room, they jumped on me, and they were now hugging and clinging on my neck and shoulders. Cassandra was crying in happiness.
Elous: “sheesh, Cassandra why are you crying, it’s not like you can’t see
visit me while I’m sleeping?”
Diana: “But we can’t, after we sleep together and went back to work,
A dummy here said that she accidentally locked the door.” Diana was now glaring at Cassandra.
Cassandra: “I said, I’m sorry. Hu hu hu hu, I even tried crushing the door, but it was too tough.” she was now in tears and hugged me tighter.
*Hmmmmm, I probably need to remove the lock at my door. I didn’t know that it’s possible to hold them off.*
Diana just sighed while shaking her head.
Cassandra: “I said I’m sorry, I thought we all talked about it and moved on.”
Marzanna: “hihihi,, it’s okay big-sis Cassandra.”
Selena: “We forgive you, so you can stop crying now. hahaha”
Cassandra was now happily looking at the two Valkyrie, and when she looked at her sister. Diana just ignored her, and was a bit mad. Cassandra then again burst into tear.
Cassandra: “HU HU HU HU.. my God, Diana didn’t forgive me.. HU HU HU.. Please punish her..” she was like a child seeking care and was accusing the “bad guy”.
Diana gave her utmost love to Cassandra, a flying fist straight to Cassandra’s head.
Cassandra: “Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!.. what was that for?” as she look at her sister.
Diana just glared at her with fiery red eyes and a raising fist pose.
Cassandra: “Nooo more… I’m sorry, I’m sorry.” She was now covering her head, from her monster sister.. haha
Diana: sigh.. “it’s okay, I’ve forgiven you a long time ago..I’m just messing with you, hahaha” Diana then gave a tight hug to her sister.
Cassandra: “hahaha, I know, I’m just playing with you.” Cassandra teased her sister and grope sister’s breast, and then gave a childish expression taking her tongue out “bleehh”. Cassandra starts to run as she was being chased by Diana.
Diana: “Grrrr!!! Get back here. I swear when I get you, you’ll gonna get a lot of LOVE…”
Cassandra: “From you?”
Diana: “NO…. From my Fist.” She was now chasing Cassandra around the room.
Cassandra: “hahaha, SURE.. But first, catch me if you can.”
The twins were now running around the room. I, Marzanna and Selena were just laughing and having some talk.
Elous: “Hmmm, Marzanna I have a favor to ask you.”
Marzanna: “Anything for my God. Just say it.”
Elous: “I want you to reincarnate me.”
All of my Valkyries stopped breathing and was a little bit shocked, even the twins that were running around stopped, and forgot what they were doing and walk close to me.
Diana: “Why my God, are you bored being with us?”
Cassandra: “Why do you want to left Elysium, why do you want to left us?”
Selena was calm and silent, trying to understand me. Maybe somehow they didn’t know what I really want from the start, nor they didn’t know what my origin was, that I was just a normal human from my past life, and was lucky to be given Godly powers. That I created my own game mechanic world, so I can live and play in it.
I created four light spheres, and this light spheres entered their foreheads. The four light spheres contain my explanation to them, I put there everything, about my past life, how did I become a God, and what I really want. For the first moment they have different expressions, but when it was finish they just gave me a sweet smile.
Selena: “We’re sorry my God for not understanding what you really desire.”
Diana: “We will support your wish my God, if that’s what will make you happy.”
Cassandra: “But please promise us that we can interact with you when you’re reincarnated. PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!!”
Marzanna: “I will always watch you my God, I promise.”*nod* *nod*
Elous: “Hahahaha,, thank you my Valkyries, yes you can visit me, but not that too often, okay? Thank you Selena, Diana, Cassandra and Marzanna.” I then gave them a sweet kiss at their lips and hugged them.
Marzanna: “If I may ask my God, why do you ask me to reincarnate you? You can even do it without me?”
Elous: “hahaha, You’re the one in charge of managing the souls, and also reincarnation. So I just want you to do your work.”
Marzanna: “Of course, it will be my honor to reincarnate you.” as she gave me a sweet smile.”
I then created flaming orb, my soul; the soul was similar to my skin, a black space with stars and galaxies inside of it. I then gave it a special description of what I want to be reincarnated, age, gender (male obviously), race, and a special skill. I told Marzanna to reincarnate me to a random location. Then I gave my final goodbye.
Elous: “Thank you my Valkyries.”
Diana: “Take good care of yourself my God.”
Cassandra: “We’re hoping to see you soon my God.”
Selena: “Don’t worry about Elysium; we will manage it for you.”
Marzanna: “I’m gonna miss you.”
Cassandra: “HU HU HU… I’m missed you already.”
They all hugged me as they said they’ve goodbyes. I then remove my consciousness and move to the soul that I’ve created. I ordered my “God Body” to move and sit at my throne.
Elous: “I’m ready Marzanna.”
Marzanna: “Nn*nod*” she held my soul and hugged it; I was now being squished by her soft mounds.
Marzanna walked closer to the table where the three chalices where. She then carefully held me, and kissed me (soul form) one more time then put my soul in the Golden Chalice, The Chalice of Reincarnation.
Cassandra: “Hey!! Marzanna, that’s not fair, having an extra kiss. Not Fair, Not Fair.” As she stomps on the ground.
Marzanna: “hihi”*giggles*
Cassandra: “No!!! wait my God.”
My soul was now inside the portal of the Chalice. I can’t hear them, I was now inside of the endless void, and I felt tired and sleepy. Then my consciousness blacked out.
Thank you for reading. A bit late chapter, i was doing a sketch for the Valentine Event (still not done) and was tired to wrote a chapter sorry. This is the original plot of the story, make a "game" world and play it.
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