《Etryria [discontinued]》Chapter 8 - Descending to a City
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Chapter 8 – Descending to a City
I, and the twins move from Elysium to Creation Realm, We’re now floating in space and staring at Etryria.
Diana: “What a beautiful world my God created”
Cassandra: “Yes, it’s magnificent”
“It’s still far from what I have in mind, from my ideal game world”
After we observed at Etryria I decided to visit one of its cities. Still lacking at many things more or less it can be called a city, with large stone pathways and suitable houses (old wooden style) an army training camp and a small castle made in stones. We slowly descended from the sky.
A guard saw three lights descending from the sky, he alerted all the guards, and ordered them to report to the army Chief.
Guard: *salute* “Sir three mysterious lights are now descending from the sky and it seems to be coming to the city”
Chief: “Lights you say, it must be the Celestials, but I never heard of Celestials going together to visit a city. I must report this to the King.”
“Gather all the troops and wait for my orders”
“Yes sir” the guard answered and left the chief’s quarters.
The Chief hurriedly goes to the castle, and reported what his guards saw. In the throne room the King was sitting on his throne with his son and daughter at his sides.
Chief: * kneel down* “My Lord 3 mysterious lights are now descending from the sky, and are going at the direction of the city”
King: *thinks for a moment* “Seems like it’s not the Celestials, prepare to greet the “lights” and be sure to not point any weapons, we don’t want to agitate any beings that came from the sky.”
"I'll be sure to follow you after I'm done with my preparations"
Chief: “Yes my Lord” the chief walks out of the room, and went back to the army that’s waiting for him.
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Princess: “Father I’m a bit scared”
Prince: “Don’t worry sister I’ll be sure to protect you, in the King’s name, I’ve promised to protect my little sister, and a promise that I will never break.”
King: “Ho Ho Ho Ho (Merry Christmas*LOL*) worry not my child, I and your brother is her, now let’s prepare to greet those “lights””
After they had prepare a carriage was waiting for them outside of the castle,.
Coachman: “Greetings to my Lord, Prince and Princess. The chief said that the lights are now at the southern gate of the City”
King: “Ahh yes, please do get us over there”
Coachman: “With pleasure my Lord, as humble as always”
The coachman assisted the princess and the prince on the carriage. Soon after the three are inside, the coachman whip the horses, and they started to move in a moderate speed. They are being escorted by the Royal Knights.
All of the people gave their respect to the King upon passing by.
Elous;pov
We’re slowly descending from the sky to the gate of the city.
“Seems like they've noticed us, a lot of people are now gathering”
Twins: “We’ll be heading down first to tell the people that the Divine Providence Elous is here”
“Okay good luck at that” *then I gave them thumbs up*
The two flew down at a fast speed while I was taking my sweet time. It got me thinking, should I be a proper God and talk like a God?
In my head:
*Foolish humans bow down to your God…… wait that’s an evil God*
*Humans we come in peace* nope that’s not it.
*Humans, I am your creator, the God of All the Celestials, the Beginning and the End, I am The Divine Providence Elous* then a bright light will shine… hmmmm too cliché.
*sigh*… I’m sure I didn’t need to introduce myself; I’ll let the twins take care of it for me. Nn *nod* Nn *nod*”
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When I got down to the ground, all the people are now at “dogeza”( Japanese manners by kneeling directly on the ground and bowing to prostrate oneself as touching one's head to the floor) and worshiping me as a God. I was looking around and it seems like I can’t find the King. I saw a guy with a higher quality of armor from the rest, maybe his the head guard or something.
“You with the chainmail armor rise, where is your king?”
Chief: “My deepest apologize my God, my Lord is on the way here, please don’t get mad”
Diana: “Who are you to order The Divine Providence Elous like that, letting our God Elous wait for that king of yours is a sin” *she then give of a menacing aura*
The chief of the guards and the people flinched, and were now sweating from their foreheads. Cassandra was just holding her laughter because she thinks that the expressions on the peoples faces were too hilarious to looked at. I just give them a wryly smile.
“Hold yourself Diana, I can still wait a little more”
Diana: “Yes my God, I’m sorry for my behavior” *then bows her head*
Chief: “Th-thank you my God for having patients, I truly am sorry for you waiting here”
Diana gives a glare to the chief, but the chief was too afraid to even look at Diana.
*Sigh* Diana is being such a hot head again. While waiting children came closer and talks to me, Cassandra and Diana were merrily playing with the kids and telling stories about how Elysium was so beautiful. Some of the people are now at ease, and was just watching us play with the kids, I can read some of the men’s eyes looking at the twins with perverted smiles, *sigh* I can’t blame them because the twins are just goddess of beauty and perfection. With those perfect body and smooth white skin, any man would think dirty thoughts about my two angels.
Kid1: “Are you ok Mr.God?”
Kid2: “Is there something bothering you Mr.God”
Kid3: “Maybe he forgot some work in the heavens, and are now troubled by it”
Kid4: “I’m sure it will be fine as long as it’s Mr.God”
“hahaha, nothing to worry about children, hey I got something for you little ones.”
Like a clown in those birthday parties for children, I performed a simple “magic trick” a few gesture of hands here and there, and from nothing a created a lot of sweet candies.
“Here you go, be sure to share them to your friends ok?”
The children were amazed by the trick and they happily accepted my gift to them. I can hear the children saying.
“wOooOw” “amazing” “I want to do something like that too” “hmmmm smells delicious”
When the children eats one of it some were crying, and some were just so happy stars can be seen from their eyes.
“Hey sweetie, why are you crying? Does something hurt?” I asked the little girl.
She shook her head saying no,. “I was just happy Mr.God, it’s the best thing I ever tasted. Thank you Mr.God” then her tears stoped, and was replaced with a bright smile.
After I gave more baskets full of candies to the children. I heard a lot of horses going to our direction. A knight was leading the people in horses then he came down from his horse and a loud trumpet was played.
Give your respect to King Gallio Caerellius the 3rd King of Coabluff, Prince Mettius Caerellius and Princess Olivia Caerellius.
All the people kneeled to the ground.
Thanks for reading. If you have time please feel free to share your thoughts. It can help me to improve.
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