《Etryria [discontinued]》chapter 7 - Visit
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Chapter 7 – Visit
I went outside of the house and it seems like there are two buildings close to the mansion. The twins explained that the buildings were made to be used as a place for Selena and Marzanna to help them with their work. I was quite excited to look at the insides of those two buildings. I first went and take a look for the building where Selena is, and the twins accompanied me.
We stopped at this building, built in translucent crystals that shines like a star in different colors.* AN: I used the world translucent because it allows light to pass through, but only diffusely, so that object on the other side cannot be clearly distinguished * We are at the front of a massive double doors, it automatically opened for us and a long hallway greeted us. When we reached the end, a large pool of water can be seen and a single throne was on the middle, a beautiful smile can be seen on the face of a woman standing in front of the throne. Selena bows and give her greetings.
Selena: “Greetings my God, The Divine Providence Elous,Seems like you have a good sleep my God”
“Yes I had, I’m here to visit you Selena”
Her face reddens like a tomato, she tries to hide her smile and be serious.
“Do the twins help you with your work observing the Celestials?”
Selena: “Yes my God, they are a great help to me.”
“Well that’s a good thing, mind updating me on what the celestials have been doing for the past years?”
Selena: “Certainly my God”
The pool of water floats in the air, and formed six equally sized bubbles. Soon after they floated, images of the six Celestials can now be seen, it functions as a monitor.
Celestial of Heaven Dadea - She was now being worshiped as a Goddess, she was the one very close to the human race because she gave them hope in times of need, heals the wounded and cured the people with incurable sickness. Medicines are still being researched at this point of time.
Celestial of Darkness Tagruer – Having that lazy attitude and still being a "kid", he always liked to sleep, and also prank outer races. Being a mischievous child he is. Internal conflicts from all races were all caused by Him, greed, lust, pride, envy, betrayal, murder. He gave them thoughts of these sins.
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Celestial of Plants and Animals Yhhena – she’s the most well known Celestial, being close to most all races especially to elves, beastkins, and humans. She helped the humans to grow their crops to the highest quality, she helped the elves to understand more about the forest, elves are the one who are more likely to protect the forest and nurture them, and the beastkins calls her for help, because they don’t want to be helped by a human like Goddess, like Dadea. And because beastkins and elves have the same Celestials(being half elf race and beast), they have that bond of trust to each other, even though they don’t have the same culture.
Celestial of Water Voslene – people and other races gave her offerings before going to the water, and sail their boats, most of all to prevent natural calamity. * She’s demanding haha* And also to have her blessed the water for growing crops and also for the medicines/potions. (the three Celestials are somewhat connected to each other, Dadea, Yhhena and Voslene)
Celestial of Land and Inferno – he’s famous to the devil/ demon race, he gave them power for an amount of soul for offering * even though he can eat all the souls Marzanna gave him, a real glutton* he creates the inferno in the middle of Etryria and the only gates to Inferno is at the place where a lot of volcanoes can be found.
Celestial of Knowledge Evrasil – his now at an island, and that island ware now full of different kinds of dragon with all sorts of color, Selena said that Evrasil created all those dragons as an experiment for better understanding of the dragon race. People who seek knowledge and understanding made an expedition to find him but they failed to do so. It’s because they are still on the era of the unknown where they didn’t venture too much and afraid of the dangers from the vast world. They only take it a little step at a time to explore.
“Seems like they’re doing just fine, but I guess Evrasil was too busy from his work”
Selena: “I’m sorry my God for not taking any actions, it seemed like it’s not that threatening.”
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“Yeah its fine, as long as it’s not bothering anyone its good, let him be for now. I’m sure he will get his answers”
“Thank you for doing a good work watching the Celestials for me”
Cassandra: “I want to be praised too, I help also”
“haha, good work to you too and Diana” *while patting her head*
Diana just gives a dazzling smile while giving thumbs up.
Selena: “I’m happy to be of service to my God”
“I’ll be going now and visit Marzanna”
Selena: “Yes my God, Please see me again if you have the time” she gives me a lovely smile while her cheeks reddened
“I’ll sure do” I gave my reply and started to walk down the hallway again.
We walk to the opposite of where the crystal building was and now we’re in front of a building that has a kind of temple theme on to it, it has no doors but after you walk in it, a stair case going down can only be seen and small orbs of blue flames was on the walls to give light to the stairs. We continued going down from the stair,s and when I reached the bottom I was a bit shocked to see a sacrificial altar in the middle. There are three chalice on the table, and on the top of the wall across the altar was a void, and orbs of light was coming out of it and goes to the three different cups.
When I looked to my right I saw a bed and a cute sleeping angel *wahhh kawaii* seems like she’s taking a nap. Cassandra being a meanie shoots a small magic orb to Marzanna’s forehead.
Marzanna: “wahhh, who did that? Is it you again big sis Cassandra” “uhmm, my God is here, sorry for seeing me in this state” *she was still rubbing her sleepy eyes*
Diana hit her twin sister in the head, *pong*..
Diana: “Stop bullying Marzanna”
Cassandra just reply with her tongue out *bleh*
Marzanna: “its okay big sister Diana it didn’t hurt anyway, and I’m sure big sister Cassandra was just being playful”
Cassandra: “hahaha sorry for that little sister Marzanna”
*then she gave Marzanna a hug* “uhmmmm”
Marzanna: “uhhhhgg, bi- big sis, I can’t breath.. it’s too big” *Cassandra let her go and they both laugh*
“hahaha seems like you two are very closed”
Marzanna: *nod* “Nn, big sis Cassandra always helps me manage the souls, and also big sis Diana”
“ ohh I see, I’m glad you’re not having trouble at managing souls”
Marzanna: “ it was quite hard at first, but big sister Cassandra thought of an idea to help my job get easier”
“so that’s why you became so close”
Marzanna: “yes, that and also she’s always the one who helps me a lot on my job”
Diana: “Hey I helped too you know, I’m just not that good at managing souls that’s why I let Cassandra have more time helping you and I had a lot of time helping Selena”
Marzanna: “hihi, I know that big sis Diana I’m always thankful to your efforts”
Diana: “ hahaha, I guess you need to explain to our God how you manage the souls”
Marzanna: “Nn, when someone dies their soul force are sent to the River of Souls and at the end of that river is that portal on top of the wall. When the souls goes out of the void they were automatically sent to the chalice, the three chalice also has a void inside of them, the Red Chalice has a void to Etarr, the Black Chalice has a void for the three cured lands and the last is the Golden Chalice for the soul reincarnation.
“That’s a convenient one”
Marzanna: “But I still needs to manage the souls because some times, the souls escaped from the River of Souls and posses a living being, it’s quite the trouble to let the soul roam free, I called it Special Soul, this Special Soul has a massive amount of soul force that they can sometimes break free from the flow of the River of Souls. I make sure to punish them and send them to Etarr”
“ Nicely done Marzanna”
Marzanna just giggled and smile.
A lot had improved, I’m excited about seeing Etryria again.
Thank you for reading.
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