《Totem Master: A Spiritual Adventure》Reader feedback, lore dump chapters?
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What do you guys think of the last few chapter?
Do you like the change in tone?
Are you interested in the direction the story has turned?
Would you guys like lore dump chapters, chapters that are not part of the main story. But that would help to build the world, adding details for me to use in later chapters.
I would like to hear your opions and if you guys don't say anything. Nothing will change. If only one person comments then I will only have them to help steer the direction of the story.
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