《Totem Master: A Spiritual Adventure》Reader feedback, lore dump chapters?
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What do you guys think of the last few chapter?
Do you like the change in tone?
Are you interested in the direction the story has turned?
Would you guys like lore dump chapters, chapters that are not part of the main story. But that would help to build the world, adding details for me to use in later chapters.
I would like to hear your opions and if you guys don't say anything. Nothing will change. If only one person comments then I will only have them to help steer the direction of the story.
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Nouvelle chance dans la fantaisie.
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After a girl born in the country moves to UK she notices her next door neighbor is the one and only Tommyinnit. She falls in love with him and she thinks he likes her too but does he actually like her or does he just use her for views.I'm not sexualizing Tommy (just wanted to get that out!)I'm writing for fun and I just wanted to make someone smile! Also I do put some song lyrics in here so yea 😂Also this is my first writing so if you see a mistake you can correct it and I will try and fix it!For the people who didn't know Y/n means your name. L/n means last name. N/n means nick name. U/n means username. I'm going to be writing a lot but it takes a little bit of time cause I'm a little busy!! Thank you for clicking on here and if you do read I'm excited to see what you think of it :)
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