《Dusk God》Chapter 2 - The World Of Camas
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So far I have moved from the mediation planet as I want to find a new planet to find adjust myself to my new power. “System find the closest planet with the human-like creature,” I speak out
Found an inhabited planet with humans, will show visual on ‘Map’.
I moved my hand on the system and click onto Menu where I see various options. Then I click on Map where I see a huge map of a section of the universe I’ve been. Where in the corner of the map I see a golden outline of a planet of blue and green.
“That’s something new,” I say while the corners of my mouth bend upwards.
I then look for any data on this planet through my data bank and see its called ‘Camas’ where the technology was in a medieval level period the last it was checked. So I check to see the world’s highest-level creature to see it’s a Hydra about level 1200. 'With this creature being the highest level I shouldn't have any trouble'
So I teleport a couple Galaxies to the planet and looked at the town like areas where I go outside of the 2nd biggest one and make my way to the gates. I go through and a guard comes up to me with a tired expression because it’s night.
“Hello, Sir welcome to the town of Lemyon do you have a permit, if not please sign out this form and pay the price of two silver.”
I then took him with crimson red eyes and say, “I don’t have to pay anything.” Which he then repeats with a zoned out look “You don’t need to pay, give me a moment to get you the form.”
He gets the paper and ink and sits me down. The form only asked for name, age, and reason for coming. Which I fill with the name of Michell Han, the age of 24 and the reason for being here rest from travel.
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The guard then looks at me and says, “That will be………. have a nice day sir.”
Which I ask, “Where's the shopping area” and he points to the west area of the map on the table.
I took my time through the crowded streets and looked for an adventures guild and thanks to the advice of an old man made my way there when the sun was setting and walk into the adventures guild and go the closest receptionist, which was an average looking beauty.
“I wish to join the guild,” I said with my face covered by my hood.
“Yes sir, give me a second.” She says automatically
She then goes into the drawer and gets a form and documents that say that I'll take all responsibilities and a contact where it says even if I am injured I cannot blame the guild and so on. Which I agree too with my alias of Mitchell Han.
She then looks at me with a deadpan look, which makes it clear she doesn’t think much of me then she says to me. “We will now evaluate your magic level through this magic core Mr.Han.” Which she points behind herself to a door and where I follow her.
"Please call me Michell," I said in the same tone.
"This is going to tell your magic level, not affinity. The level goes from no light (F) to light red (E-D-C) to clear red (B-A-AA-AAA) to dark red (S-SS) to dim white (SSS-X) which is the highest level that a royal mage has given 500 years ago." With a bit of a pause, she continued."So I need you to put ALL you magic power into the orb to make sure that you get the best scoring."
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I go the core and inject a little bit of adjusted energy to not make them give me an above average level. The amount of mana I injected was like comparing a galaxy to an atom.
I learned that the grading the guild does is F, E, D, C, B, A, AA, AAA, S, SS, SSS, X system were F rank is lowest and X is highest.
So since the hydra is the strongest being on this planet I guess that is X.
The Magic core went from white to a bright black to then cracking a little. Which I then look her in the eyes with the same eye trick I did to the guard, which was hypnosis with a little more power to and say, “Don’t move or yell.” I began to look at the orb to find that it was a weak thing and it couldn't even hold any more of my mana without almost exploding.
Then I then tell the system to repair the magic core which with a slowly disappearing crack on the core growing smaller till it was gone I looked at the girl and said: “You shall not remember this and think I have a B rank magic level."
Then with a snap of my finger, she looks at me and tells me “Test your strength against that stone over there.” She points to a stone cube, which I do to the same effect as the magic orb telling her to write me down as a C rank.
After the whole process of getting my ranks down, she tells me to take off my hood for a picture which I did without worry. Then I saw her expression as she looked at me with a surprised and a little red over her face. After a couple of seconds of her drooling, she then took a picture with the small core.
She then looks at me and says with a still reddish face while trying to seduce me,“Will you need anything else.” Which I answered with a dry-toned of no to get her to stop trying to show me she pushed upped breast.
I then with my new adventurer's card, which ranked me as a B rank, went find a request for the subjection of monsters. I find that these monsters are all should be around level 25 in the system database and try to find some of the weakest. I chose Goblins, which are level 10 each but go around in groups to kill, making panic amongst people outside of the town.
Although I am overpowered to do this it is still good to know the basics, I thought.
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