《Ghost Girl, Ghost Girl. She Gonna Take Your Soul!》Chapter 2: Haunting the Home (I)
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It was late at night and the parents were exhausted from the police officer's questioning.
They dressed into fitting clothes for slumber and quickly went into bed. They turned the heat up a bit, because their room was suddenly cold.
Ghost Girl stood over her parent's bed. If she had unfinished business, then it had to be them. But what can she do? Go to the police and write ghostly messages like: 'I WAS MURDERED! SEEK JUSTICE FOR ME!!'
Normal people would freak out and probably call the priest!
Besides, would anyone care about the strange death of a run-of-the-mill teenager? Excluding her horrid home life, life at school was average as it comes. Semi-good grades, a few associates to hang with, addict of the internet, and maybe nerdy tendecies.
"I will have to do it myself," said Ghost Girl.
Ghost Girl reached her hand towards the mother but it just went through her. The mother shivered from a sudden coldness. Ghost Girl leaped back a little, thought she had awaken her mother.
Ghost Girl went towards her parents' bathroom. She flipped the switch of the bathroom light.
"Okay...I can still touch stuff."
Ghost Girl tried to pick up various objects: toothbrushes, floss, hair dryer, towels, and other things.
Ghost Girl found out that the she can only carried things, if its a pound or less for several seconds. When she tried to touched her parents, her hand phased through them. So, she can hold onto physical objects but can't touch the living.
Damn. She just needed to strangle them. Now what?
She looked around her parents' room. First... she was gonna mess with them.
***
Morning came. An alarm from the father's phone was going off. He then snoozed the alarm and slowly got up.
He dragged himself to the bathroom and be prepared for work. The death of his child didn't stop the daily routines that was embedded inside his DNA.
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He stared at the mirror and saw a ghostly figure of his daughter. He spurned his head around quickly but didn't find anything.
"Ahhh!" The mother screamed.
The father rushed to his wife and saw her pulling her hair out. The father yelled: "What happened!?"
"My ring! It's gone!" The mother tried to search everywhere for her wedding ring. It was a very expensive ring, with a huge diamond on it.
The father can't be late for work. "Keep looking for it! It can't be far." The start of the morning wasn't looking favorable for him and he was annoyed.
Since the mother can't make breakfast, the father will make a quick one. He quickly grabbed a bowl, cereal, and milk. He ignored the blood stain on the ground.
He quickly took a bite and spitted his food! "Ow!" He spitted towards the ground and there was centipede! The father stomped the bug and saw there were a few other bugs as well! The father was so disgusted, he ran out the house and tried to drive away. Except his tires were flat!
The father got out of his car and was furious! "Hey! Is this some kind of plank!? Some yourself!!"
He was yelling on the top of his lungs in public. He was known to had quite a temper in the neighborhood. His yelling wasn't a surprise but this early in the morning?
***
Ghost Girl was watching all this and was amused. Well, she didn't do much in regards to pranks. Hiding a ring. Putting bugs in the cereal box. Was there anything more she could do? As an underpowered ghost, she can't do much.
She needed to plan out their "accidental deaths," and get it over quick.
Thinking about staying like this for eternity unnerved her.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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