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Hi everyone, I'd like to take a moment to ask for some help with my writing. I have had plenty of helpful criteques since I started writing Alyx.
But I wanted to give everyone an official chance to speak their mind. So far my biggest hurdles seem to be. Grammar, diaolouge, logical character action / interaction and event coordination. If you have suggestions, tips, tricks or advice. I would be greatful for any help I can get.
I hope to improve and continue writing Alyx and possibly other stories, the other stories i have in mind though are more emotionally complex and I'd like to take this chance to study up and practice before any attempt at writing them is made.
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