《Thaellis A Kingdom Down Under》Book update
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Hello... its been a while (Cough, over two years.)
That wasn't planned, but that's life, and I haven't been slouching about, leaving this story to wither and die.
No, no. Never
I have, during all these years of absence, been working on a rewrite of it. After making plans to do some quick fixes to ready the story for one day being published digitally. I took the time to read it, and then began to thoroughly rip it apart. With fresh, and better skilled eyes, I saw all the atrocious grammar mistakes, terrible line editing, bad plotting, and lore breaking events.
My plan of a quick fix died. Hence the silence, and other reasons. But I'm here now, writing to you, entities hidden in false light. To announce that the first book, is nearing completion. Its going through a final edit, before the decision of where to publish it online begins.
I would have waited till it was done, but so much time has already passed, and I figured you all deserved an announcement. Since, the bad news is, the webnovel isn't going to move forward, the rewrites were major, with new things added in, and other things taken out.
On the bright side, besides the story getting closer to publication, is I have another story.
One I have been working on for a little over a year, with thirty chapters now.
Its called Manifestations of Faith, and can be found here, or through the site's search engine.
The first few chapters will have grammar mistakes. (no where near as bad as Thaellis) Before reaching later ones that should have little to none.
See it as an apology for a lack of content, and for those of you who wanted the webnovel to continue. A part of me wanted it to, but the amount of work to fix the chapters, it was pointless.
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Speaking of content, for those of you who simply like reading the things I type, then try my art account here. The newer works, once you click them and scroll down, all have short stories attached to them.
... Well that's all I have, sorry for the wait, hopefully the links provided will give you all some entertainment to pass the time.
Sincerely yours, Freethorm
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