《(On Hold) Regarding my time being a God, it was fun》[Volume One] Extras
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Well, first of all sorry guys, this isn't a chapter.
But we're at the end of the first volume so I thought I'd share some insights of the process in creating the characters for, of course fun, and to clear up their personalities...
I'll be talking about Ralph and Leila.
Very first draft: Ralph is a God who can't even see his own body, he wasn't given a land or anything, he just kinda woke up with a Menu.
He was too OP that he could manipulate terrain and everything since the very beginning.
If he goes into a cave and clicks on the wall, the Dungeon menu will pop out for him to do everything he wants.
His powers' capabilities were too wide too early on, thus I didn't have enough skills to guide the story and be in charge of his bunch of powers all at the same time - Failed.
*Leila's actually a newly high elf slave that hasn't been touched.
Second draft: Ralph dies in a hospital and the goddess gave him a character creation menu.
He creates the new "himself" in the new world as a Vampire.
I tried to put my own spin of Death March on him, meaning that he gains abilities through behaviors.
But yep, way out of my capabilities, I couldn't manage all the abilities and guide the flow of the story itself without making its cogs loose everywhere
FAILED
*Leila's a ragged Elf slave at this point and later on evolved to a Dhampir, didn't get too much into her...
Third draft: this one's kind of better for Ralph...but Leila just dies off the story within 2 chapters...
I was seriously depressed writing this draft...
If you have seen my side story project on RRL, you'll notice this: Ralph is a skull face.
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Everything about him is human except for the face that of a Skull.
He has this absurd ability of darkness to devour things around him.
It seriously went well until Leila appeared as a Vampire Princess that has mental problems due to a trauma.
I couldn't make out what is the trauma for Ralph to work on, thus the character of Leila just kinda dies off away...*sobs*
Then the very last and final draft I suddenly came up with by jumping out of bed first thing in the morning:
Our current Ralph-sama with the miko bunny-chan Leila...
So with that said, I want to clear up Ralph's personality...
I'm getting some feedback saying that Ralph is unrealistic as a grown man.
Dude. I'm sorry for those of you who have never met a grown/adult/middle-aged/grandpa man who is still playful and carefree like in his teens or 20s, I seriously am...
When I build up a unique MC that stands out from the generic world, our world, I intentionally had him as a man who isn't depressed with his life, otherwise it wouldn't just be a fantasy if you stick the big rod of 'depressed/serious adults' into Ralph's butt...
He only likes games and stuffs like that, he's just happy with his life that he's really carefree and goofs off a little despite the number 35 in his age.
So to close this up, I would like to hear from you guys YOUR DEFINITION of a real villain, alright?
I'm working very hard on Bagdur, I need a few more references to work with, so...please get in the cmt (if you can) and throw at me some opinions on what do YOU think would make an extremely badass Villain....
Thanks for sticking with this shit, guys...Hatter's out.
Alright, I went full retarded and made a whole new post...I'll merge the illustration into this post...
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A Broken World [Dropped Pending Rewrite]
This work has been dropped- because I am rewriting it. Look forward to the new and improved "A Broken World," now available HERE on Royal Road! Three thousand years ago, Demonic creatures invaded the world. Though their power seemed irresitable, a band of heroes managed to steal the knowledge of summoning rituals and worlds from them and created, "The Millenial Summoning." A powerful magic that would bring forth a being from another world with the power to change the world forever. The first being summoned became known as "The Speaker," and he brought the power of the Gods with him. Teaching prayers and invocations that blessed humanities legions and began to push back the demons, founding of the "The Church of the Spoken Word" rose to power and a stalemate was reached. Two thousand years ago, that stalemate was broken by the second casting of "The Millenial Summoning," and the arrival of "The First Sorceress," who taught humanity the basics of magic and enchanting. With the power of the Sorceress, the mages, and the priests the tide turned and the Demonic hordes began to be shoved back, signaling hopes of a golden age for mankind. One thousand years ago, the hopes of final victory and a new dawn for mankind were dashed by traitors who slew the participants of the ritual and took their places, using the ritual to bring forth a godlike being from the demons home world, "The Demon King," for no human knew his name, erased millenia of growth reducing humanity to barely a fragment of its former glory. Now the ritual is being cast again, and a new being is being summoned... In our world, after nearly two decades of studious work, Luke Jaeger is making his dream come true. Working and going to school full time, sacrificing his health and social life in his youth, Lucas obtained Doctorates in genetics and virology, as well as associate degrees in business and accounting. The modern world is not easy, and despite it nearly driving him mad from stress, this was the bare minimum he needed to be approved for a business loan to start a company focusing on commercial genetic therapy. Despite the challange of getting his business running, Lucas feels that his work has finally paid off. Lucas's car never left the banks lot, nor was Lucas ever seen again in our world.
8 95Qi research logs. Volume 1
These are my original research notes from when I first fell to this forsaken place.I apologize for the earlier notes, all I had was the clothes on my back, my notebooks, and a box of pencils.I hope one day this book will make it home.I hope it is I who deliver them.I miss you all so dearly.
8 86Omnipotent's Ascension
Lenin had always been restricted in the use of power. Being looked down on from birth up until middle school. But now he's in highschool, and there's nothing going to stop him. From cultivators to mages, telekinetic master, race lord's and other practices. Lenin decides to ascend and protect his loved ones. He would normally laze around, but with the coming threat to those he loves, what would he do? A novel about different races, and powers. With magic, qi, prana, plasma force and other forms of energy. It also has a unique cultivation theme.
8 201Psych Investigation Episodes
Jack Harris thought failing math was the worst thing that ever happened to him. That was before he discovered he had superpowers: before he became the prime suspect in a series of murders.
8 143Obsessed! Hoodie x Reader - Alive (ON HOLD)
A college student's life flips upside down when she meets a certain bunch of people. Her main focus is staying alive instead of finishing college, if she even had the choice.Picture: (Credit to the orginal artist)
8 96IMAGINES ❤️
Random imagines about you and Kendall Jenner. Feel free to request some stories. Thank you guys! GXG only. G!F but no smut. 😂 I don't know how to write it. Just kidding! There's SMUT inside. 👌🏼
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