《Falling Star of Evolution》Important Notice!
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Karnage :
Hello guys, well I've been doing some thinking for a while now and actually I wanted to rewrite this fic from a few chapters back, well basically from the beginning. I was thinking about giving it a new twist, and instead of having Sol land near the Royal Family, have him land among beasts and make a few changes. Rather than having him being 16 years old, have him be a year old. Naturally as you can guess he will be raised by beasts and encounter humanity later down.
Same concept of special body attributes, but Element attribute might change. This poll is basically to find out how others feel but regardless I feel strongly about doing this rewrite and it may happen even if the polls vote against it. Just curious either way as to how people would feel about it. If people firmly reject the idea though, I might just continue on from here. Either way, please vote or comment and state your opinions.
As for why the thought of a re-write came up, ever since chapter 8 the views and comments have been dropping so I thought maybe I forced a little too many different elements in there and I want a story people can enjoy not just skim through, know what I mean?
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