Hello all,

I believe that the best course of action will be to rewrite this book. The plot is a mess and the character is kind of just way too knowledgeable on everything. I also think that the combat is too clunky and can use a revamp. Furthermore, i want to get rid of the author comments throughout the entirity of the story.

So for the sake of everything, this novel will be rewritten in the background as i try to write a different story in the meantime.

Cheers and thanks,

-cromsler, master of being inconsistent