《The Scars You Left Behind [on hold]》Rewriting
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readers, i am taking the time to go back and rewrite this story since i wrote it when i was twelve/thirteen years old and since then, i've grown as a writer. plus, i had been getting a lot of about how undeveloped this story was. so, now i am fixing it. i will be re-publishing the chapters as i rewrite them.
there will be changes. i'm rewriting the entire story, so if you're feeling up to it, go back and re-read it. i would suggest it because i plan on making this version of the story bigger, better, and more emotional than the last.
thank you for your patience.
-bitch
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