《the go-getter||nba youngboy》prologue
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Ailynn', her sister Reine, and their family had taken a trip to Mount Fuji in Japan. Ailynn'
was planning to kill herself . She felt no will to live. Life was getting way to hard for her. She told
her family she was going to the store but in reality she went to Aokigahara Forest. It was known
at Japan's suicide forest or the sea of trees. She had listened to Jhene Aiko's song "Jukai" and
did her research on the sea of trees. It was one of the reasons she was so eager to visit Japan.
When she made way there she saw a boy. He had turned to her. He was a brownskin boy, pretty
brown eyes, and some dents across his forehead. He had on a jacket that read Never Broke
Again on the back with his hoodie on. she sat next to him and examined him more.
Clearly he wasnt okay.
"Are you okay?" she asked him. She could tell he wasnt very fond of her and he hesitated to tell
her, but she was a stranger and he was sure he would never see her again. he went on to
explain to her how he was feeling and what triggered these feelings for him. she knew those
feelings all to well being that she felt that way herself. comforting the stranger turned into
Ailynn crying.
"why you crying pretty girl" he asked her with low eyes. she could tell he had been previously
crying before too.
"our stories are just as similar.. i wanna end it. i dont wanna be here anymore" she exclaimed.
he hugged her and responded " you just made me realize that I have much more to live for" his
voice cracked. " take your own advice , it aint worth it."
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They vented to each other for what felt like hours. Night had crept upon them and she knew it
was time to part ways besides her family would be looking for her. he looked at her leg as she
got up which revealed a scar she had since a kid. Ailynn took one last look at him and hugged
him tight as ever. They both walked away at the same time. She had a feeling they would meet again..
eeee i'm so excited for this book and I have big things in store for it. tell me what y'all think :).
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