《Me Making Wings Of Fire Mary Sue's》Book 1- RainWing
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(This is my first Mary Sue, so please go easy on me, tell me if I need to make her more horrible/great)
Perfect the RainWing flew around the rainforest, the sun shining on her beautiful scales which were every single color, except drab ones. Because RainWing protagonists cant have any shade of brown or gray on them.
"Hey Perfect, it's time for your venom shooting lesson!" Her venom-training teacher, Banana called.
"Cant I have a different teacher?! Even if you are the best venom-training teacher you are still so ugly!" Perfect wailed, why was her life so horrible!? She had the best teachers in everything, she was super beautiful and popular and funny and smart and everyone in the two continents followed her on social media. LIFE WAS TERRIBLE!!!!!!!
"Because you need to have good venom-shooting skills." Banana explained, he hated making Perfect unhappy because he and everyone else adored her.
"I already have the best venom-shooting skills!" Perfect argued.
"Of course you do, may you please demonstrate." Banana begged.
"Of course! What shall I get?" Perfect agreed, she was so modest!
"Hit... that tiny little random leaf." Banana suggested.
"Of course!" Perfect agreed, spitting magical death spit at the exact leaf Banana was talking about even though he barely described it.
"Wow! That was perfect Perfect! We should go tell the queen how great you are!" Banana suggested.
"She already follows me on social media, also I have met her twice for similar reasons, LOL!" Perfect exclaimed, summoning her phone out of nowhere and began to text the queen.
Hey Your Majesty! Me and Bananabrain, my magical death spit teacher, are coming over to show you how great I am again!
LOL Perfect! I'll be waiting!
Perfects phone disappeared and she and Banana started tree gliding to the village, Perfect found the best path and swung perfectly, her scales glowing in the greenish light, she went ahead of Bananabrain easily.
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"Wow Perfect! You are also awesome at Tree Gliding, like- more then awesome! We should tell the queen about that too!" Banana complimented, his bright brown eyes glowing with admiration, after all, he adored her just like everyone else. (Message from the author: Am I overdoing it)
"Well duh, I am great and modest, of course I am faster than a full grown adult who does it more than I do!" Perfect said, it was the truth!
"Look there we are!" Banana exclaimed, pointing at the pavilion.
Queen Rainbow was accompanied by her daughters, Princess Sloth and Hibiscus. Perfect remembered not everyone loved her and followed her and would do anything just if she told them to, she and they were ENEMIES!
"Hi Perfect! I still can't figure out how to fix this phone, but I will follow you on Facebook, instagram and everything else when I do!" Sloth said sweetly, showing Perfect a diamond phone. Ha! Joke was on her the little fake, Perfect had a phone with every kind of gem on it!
"I heard that you have become the best venom shooter in the whole tribe, because I have my invisible guard to tell me things, I already knew you were great at venom training from my text!" Rainbow said happily.
"OMG!? How could I not beat your guard here?!" Perfect gasped.
"Actually, they texted me because you got ahead, the text even came after you did!" Rainbow explained.
"Oh thats alright then, I was worried the author didn't make me totally flawless!" Perfect breathed out.
"YOU SUCK AND I HATE YOU FOR NO REASON!" Hibiscus exclaimed.
"Dragonets, we are here to test Perfects venom skills, can we be patient." Rainbow announced.
A couple of RainWings bright in the target the size of a talon.
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"Please hit the center of the target." Rainbow requested.
Perfect scoffed and shot magical death spit right at the center of the target.
Everyone except the two princesses cheered, Perfect ignored the ding on her phone which said she got a text from Sloth, and the one about how she gained a follower on every social site. Evil Sloth, out to destroy her.
"Thats brilliant!" Rainbow exclaimed, "I hereby adopt you as my daughter because of how awesome you are!"
"Thats cool!" Perfect said happily.
"I have something to admit!" Banana announced, "I am half MudWing!"
It seemed true, he had yellow and muddy brown scales and a MudWing build, but he did have a prehensile tail and a ruff so it was a perfect disguise.
"I have been talking with a half-MudWing?! EWWWW!!!!!!!!" Perfect exclaimed, running behind Rainbow.
The scum began to sob uncontrollably and flew away.
"Perfect, I have decided to abdicate my throne and make you the new queen!" Rainbow announced, taking off her crown and placing it on Perfect's head.
"I know you'll do a great job." Sloth said, standing up and flying away.
Rainbow disappeared because no one cares about her.
Hibiscus attacked her, because of how completely horrible she was.
Perfect fought her without even using magical death spit because she was awesome.
Then she became queen and everyone loved her.
Just a reminder I want everyone to tell me how to make my Mary Sues, more Mary Sue.
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