《❄️Frozen Solid❄️Encanto》Pressure
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Where we left of my lovely's
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Mirabel stares at the ceiling. There's no way she's sleeping, and there's no way she made it all up. It wasn't just her who saw it.
Frustrated, Mirabel climbs out of bed, opens her door and looks up to the candle where the wall was covered in cracks.
Getting on the roof next to the window with the candle she goes close but hears footsteps so she hides.
Abuela:" ay, Pedro, I need you...cracks in our casita, if our family knew how vulnerable we truly are...if our miracle is dying...we cannot lose our home again,(signs) why is this happening,open my eyes. If you he answer is here help me find it...help me protect our family,help me save our miracle."
Abuela walks away and Mirabel gets close looking at the candle
Mirabel:" I will save the miracle" just then a ice rope wraps around her waist, pulling her down the roof gently towards pari who gives her a raised eyebrow.
Pari:" why are you on the roof, in the middle of the night Flores?"
Mirabel:" uh..welll.(signs) I'm gonna save casita and our miracle"
Pari:" that's to dangerous Flores"
Mirabel:" I kno-"
Pari:" which is why I'm going with you"
Mirabel:" what no you can't" pari shuts her up by showing her an green glowing glass type.
Pari: this morning when I was using my magic for the kids, a thought came in my mind and I just randomly made it. I didn't want to show anyone else Becuase well A it looks like a piece of tio Bruno's vision, and B I'm older than you so I'm definitely going"
Mirabel looks at the green thingy turning it around but both sides were blank. Mirabel:" ok fine let's go"
Mirabel slams open her door and pari just stands at the door watching her.Mirabel grabs her skirt then her bag and casita helps with her shoes.
Mirabel:" wait how do I save a miracle?" She looks at pari.
Pari:" don't look at me"
Casita creaks
Mirabel:"by figuring out what's happening to the miracle"
Casita creaks again then opens the windows.
Mirabel:" oh I have no idea, but there's is one person in this family who hears everything about everything"
Pari:" good it's a start.....oh my gosh are we gonna become best friends after this?" cold wind start coming through from her excitement.
Mirabel:" pari"
Pari:"sorry"
Next day__________________
Walking past pepi and papa Mirabel and pari goes up to Dolores who's getting some food for breakfast.
Mirabel:" if anyone knows what's wrong with the magic, it's her"
Mirabel:" Dolores, hey, you know out of all my other cousins. Your like my favorite cousin, so I feel like I can talk to you about anything, ergo you can talk to me about anythi-"
Pari:" that's not Dolores Flores" Mirabel:"shh I got this pari"
Mirabel:" I feel like I can talk to you about anything, ergo you can talk to me about anything,like the problem with the magic last night. That no one seemed to worry about, but maybe you heard about that maybe I should know about. "
Felix:" Camilo stop pretending your Dolores so you can have seconds"
Pari:" told you"
Camilo:" mm worth a shot, ah (grunts)" casita hits him in the back.
Dolores:" the only one worried about the magic is you,and the rats talking in the walls, oh, and Luisa.I heard her eye twitching all night,(squeaks) "
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Mirabel and pari looks over at Luisa to see her setting up the table. Luisa:" there we go"
Abuela:" everyone to the table, let's go, let's go"
Casita brings over chairs for everyone as they sat there seats. Pari walks over to sit in between pepi and Felix.
Mirabel quickly takes pepi"s cloud casing a cloud to form on her head, she takes a seat next to Felix as he touches her arm she feels better already.
Mirabel:" Luisa"
Abuela:" family, we are all thankful, for Antonio's wonderful new(grunts) gift"
Antonio:" I told them to warm up your seat"
Abuela:" thank you tonito, I'm sure we'll find a way.to out your blessings to good use."
Pari:" oh so when I try to help you out I get in trouble" pari crosses her arms.
Abuela:" pari you have ice magic"
Pari:" right"
Mirabel:" Luisa, Dolores says your totally freaking out. Any chance you maybe know something?,about last night with the magic..(gasps) you do"
Abuela:" Mirabel, if you can't pay attention I will help you."
Mirabel:" oh actually"
Abuela:"casita"
Casita moves mirabels chair over to Abuelas.
Abuela:" as I was saying, we must never take our miracle for granted." Mirabel leans back in her chair looking at Luisa again. Lusia catches her eye then quickly looks away.
Abuela:" so today we will work twice as hard"
Mirabel:" mhmm I will help Luisa"
Abuela:" stop"
Abuela:" first an announcement, I've spoken to the Guzman's. About Mariano"s proposal to isabela"
Pari:"(snorts) your actually gonna marry that guy." Isabela gives her a stern frown making pari laugh even more.
Abuela:" Dolores, do we have a date?"
Dolores:" tonight, he wants 5 babies" isabelas eyes widen as flowers appear on her head.
Pari:" wow that was unexpected"
Abuela: wonderful, such a fine young man with our perfect isabela. Will bring a new generation of magical blessings. And make both of our family's stronger"
Camilo shape shifts into Mariano then gives kissy faces to isabela. She uses her magic sending flowers into his face making him cough then turn back to his normal form.
Abuela:" okay, our community is counting on us,La Familia Madrigal"
All:" La Familia Madrigal"
Mirabel:" Luisa hey, what?"
Mirabel:"(Grunts) sorry"
Isabela:"what is your problem"
Lusia is already down the hill. Mirabel runs over to pari and grabs her wrist then follows lusia.
Mirabel:" hey Luisa, hold on"
Luisa picks up the church setting it down somewhere else as the bells ring"
Old woman:" Luisa can you re-route the river?"
Luisa:" will do"
Man:" Luisa the donkeys got out again"
Luisa:" on it"
Luisa picks up the donkeys taking them over to the pin.
Mirabel:" Luisa(yelps)" she falls off down the wall as pari jumps across it. Pari:" you really need to start climbing" Mirabel gets up then starts running so pari follows her.
Mirabel:"wait a second( groans) you gotta tell me about the magic.what's going on what are you hiding."
Luisa:" nothing just got a lot of chores, so maybe you should just go home"
Man:" Luisa my house is leaning to the.."
Luisa pushes it back into place as pari makes ice flowers to make it look more homey.
Mirabel:" Dolores said your eye was twitching and it never twitches,somethings making you nervous"
Luisa:" hey move your gonna make me drop a donkey"
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Mirabel:" Luisa will you just.....(scoffs) just tell me what it is"
Luisa:" there's nothing to tell"
Mirabel:" you're obviously worried about something"
Pari:" Mirabe-"
Mirabel:" Luisa, if you know what's hurting the magic and it gets worse, cause you won't tell me what's wrong"
Luisa:"(loudly) nothings wrong, wow sorry that uh snuck out there what I meant was why would anything be wrong.I'm totally fine the Magic's fine, luisas fine im totally not nervous" her eye twitches again.
Pari:" your eye is twitching"
Mirabel:" yeah your eye is doing the thing..."
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Luisa:"
She throws a rock in the air then it comes down breaking on her back.
Pari:" my back hurts now"
Mirabel:" okay...."
Luisa:"
Mirabel:" of course, I mean...hey where are you going" the donkeys back up.
Luisa:"
Pari:" oh my god" she covers her mouth with her hand.
Luisa:"
While Luisa is breathing hard Mirabel and pari goes up to her and gives her a big hug.Mirabel:" I think your carrying way to much(grunts)" lusia squeezes them both in s bare hug.
Pari:" ok yep that's gonna(grunts) hurt"
Luisa:" maybe I overdo it"
Mirabel:" yep"
Luisa:" Um there is something you should know, last night when you saw the cracks, I felt weak."
Mirabel:" what?"
Man:" Luisa the donkeys"
Luisa:" on it"
Mirabel:" wait, wait, wait, what do you mean, what do you think is hurting the magic?"
Luisa:" don't know, but I heard the grown-ups one, before tio Bruno left, he had, like some terrible vision about it"
Pari:" I over heard it to, that's why he left"
Mirabel:" tio Bruno? What was in his vision?"
Luisa:" no one knows they never found it, but if somethings wrong with the magic, start with Bruno's tower. Find that vision,"
Mirabel:"wait how do you find a vision, what am I even looking for?"
Donkey brays as they land on her back.
Luisa:" you find it, you'll know, but be carful. That place is off limits for a reason,"
Abuela:" such a perfect match,"
Isabela:" so perfect"
Abuela:" so good for the encanto"
Pari makes a tiny ice figure of isabela then Mimics her. Pari:" so perfect"
Mirabel:" pari focus"
As they get up to the door pari suddenly stops, Mirabel looks back at her.
Pari:" sorry, I just haven't been in there ever since he left, he was like my best friend" Mirabel grabs her rand reassuring her. Once pari smiles she opens the door.
Mirabel:" casita,can you turn off the sand?"
Casita moves the floor tiles.
Mirabel:" you can't help in here?"
The tiles move again.
Pari:" casitas right, even I can't use my powers in here, My powers are no match for his even if mines is stronger"
Mirabel:" we'll be fine, we need to do this, for you for Abuela. Maybe a little for me......find the vision, save the..."
(Screams) pari laughs as Mirabel falls downs, she looks back at casita before she jumps down as well.
Pari:" probably should have told you that there is no leveled floor"
They both look up at the big huge rock with stairs.
Both:" definitely need to start working out"
A bird appears on a rock. Mirabel:" oh hello" (squawks)
Mirabel:" lot of stairs, but at least I'll have a friend and a sister, no he flew away immediately"
Pari: come on, the more we wait the more stairs appear"
Mirabel:" all right,"
Walking up the stairs.
Mirabel:" welcome to the family Madrigal....there's so many stairs in the casa Madrigal m.....you think there would be another way to get so high cause we're magic..but no.. magical how many stairs fit in here. Bruno your room is the worst" (panting)
(Gasps)
Pari:" now I really wish I had my powers right now" she laughs.
Up ahead is a far jump to get to the other side, the bottom looks really dangerous and deadly.
Mirabel groans frustratedly. Mirabel:" come on,"
She uses a pice of the stair that has rope attached to it, she throws it behind the rock making it stay still.
Pari:" wow and you said your not creative"
Mirabel:" just get over here, ok we can do this, " we go back a little then run flowers jumping off the ledg making it over to the other side.
Mirabel stomps her foot on the ground in excitement but a piece of the floor caves down falling into the darkness.
(Distant thud)
Pari:" nice going big foot" Mirabel sticks her tongue out at her then looks at the door.
Pari:" ew rats, Bruno was obsessed with them back then"
The bird starts shivering.
The circle door opens up slightly.
The bird flys out of there.
Mirabel:" quitter"
Stepping into a room full of sand the door suddenly closes making the room dark but there's a green glow.
Pari:" it's his vision....it's broken into pieces?"
Pari and Mirabel looks on the group seeing the green glow in the sand.
Mirabel picks one up then starts to put them together like a puzzle while pari watches form behind her.
Mirabel:" me"
Pari:" Mira we gotta go like now" (rumbling)
Pari starts helping her finding the glass.
They both run to the door banging it trying to open it . The door opens and they coming flying out landing near the cliff.
They walk out of Bruno's room with sand all other them and in their hair, walking back to mirabels room they were stoped by Abuela.
Abuela:" where are you coming from in such a hurry"
Mirabel:" I'm sorry, I was"
Abuela:" what is in your hair"
Luisa:" my gift I'm losing my gift"
Abuela:" what?"
Luisa:" Mirabel and I were having this little talk, about me carrying to much, so I tried not to carry so much but I realized it was putting me behind, and I knew I was gonna let everyone down. And I felt really bad, so I was grabbing all the donkeys, but then when I went to throw the donkeys in the barn they were.....heavy(sobbing)"
Pari:"........."
Abuela:" what did you do, what did you say to her?,"
Mirabel:" nothing. I... I don't.."
Abuela:" mirabel....(signs)" chruch bells ring.
Abuela:" I have to go get the Guzman's, for isabelas engagement, stay away from Luisa until I can talk to her.tonight we can't have any more problems, and whatever your doing stop doing it."
Going into her room pari stands next to her as her puts the vision back into place.
Mirabel:" why am I in your vision Bruno?"
Just then pepa walks in with a cloud and a basket in her hand. Mirabel covers them up by standing in front of them.
Mirabel:" tia jeez"
Pepa: sorry, sorry I didn't mean to...shoo shoo shoo( grunts)" she closes the door on the cloud.
Pepa:" I just wanted to get the last of tonitos things, and then I heard the name we do not speak. Great now I'm thundering, and a drizzle will lead to a sprinkle. Clear skies, clear skies"
Mirabel:" tia pepa? If... Bruno.. if he had a vision about someone.what would it mean for them?"
Pepa:" we don't talk about Bruno"
Mirabel:" I know it's just hypothetically, if he saw you"
Pepa: Mirabel, please we need to get ready for the Guzman's"
Mirabel:" I just wanna know if it was generally, positive or like less positive"
Felix:" it was a nightmare"
Pepa:" Felix"
Felix:" hey she needs to know, pepi she needs to know"
Pepa:" we don't talk about Bruno"
Felix:" he would see something terrible and then...(makes ticking noises) boom it would happen"
Pepa:" we don't talk about Bruno"
Mirabel:" what if you didn't understand what he saw"
Felix:" then you better figure it out, because it was coming for you"
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