《❄️Frozen Solid❄️Encanto》Antonio
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Pepa: "I made a rainbow"
Mirabel (carrying to much) enters the courtyard where preparations for Antonio's gift ceremony is in full swing: flowers everywhere(some frozen). The house is creating stairs, moving furniture.
She nearly knocks into passing musicians
Mirabel:"sorry, excuse me"
Pari:"where do I put these chairs abuela?" Pari asks, eyeing abuela with chairs in her hand.
Abuela:" put them in the kitchen for now"
Pari:"on it Abuela"
Pepa:"Delores, can you hear if anyone is gonna be late?"
Mirabel:"huh? Whoop!" She almost trips as she looks down at casita helping abuela.
Abuela:"lift it higher. Higher" Camilo, watching from the balcony above, praised people.
Camilo:"hey, nice job over there"
Jose:" yeah,yeah"
Abuela:"Camilo we need another Jose!"
Camilo: "joooose" he shape shifts into Jose helping him with the banner.
Abuela:" Luisa, the piano goes upstairs"
Luisa:"I'm on it(almost bumping into mirabel) careful, sis"
MIrabel try's to balance the groceries as the wind picks up. Pepa is creating a tornado as she nervously paces.
Snowflakes starts to fall from above as pari walks into the courtyard, looking around anxiously for Antonio.
Pepa:"my baby's night has to be perfect, and it's not perfect. And people are going to be coming and nothings ready, the whole town will be there"
Felix:" your tornado-ing the flowers.. the flowers"
Isabela: did someone say flowers?" Isabela descends above Mirabel on a flowering vine and flowers bloom all around her like a god dang angle.
Pari:" this night is about Antonio not you isabela" isabela scoffs then lands perfectly on the ground.
Felix:" our angel, or angel."
Isabela:"please don't clap" she hands a Bouquet of pink flowers to Pepa,
Pepa:"thank you"
Isabela:"oh it's nothing" she flips her hair hitting Mirabel as flowers emerge in her face causing her to grunt.
Isabela:"a little sisterly advise,if you weren't always trying too hard you wouldn't be in the way"
Mirabel:" actually Isa, this is called helping, and I'm not in the way you ar-" Mirabel collided with a post, Isabela rolls her eyes.
As Mirabel hefts a ton of supplies onto the kitchen counter, Julieta notices Mirabel is clearly overcompensating. Concerned, but trying to not show it, Julieta sidles over.
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Julieta:"woah"
Mirabel" excuse me" just then pari slides in using her magic then sits on the counter nexts to julieta.
Pari:" mama I really need help looking for Antonio, I looked everywhere"
Julieta:" get back to work I'll help you in a minute" a flower falling slowly in front of pari's face she uses her ice magic to freeze it causing it to fall to the ground immediately.
she gets up and walks out the kitchen heading towards the stairs to probably mess with Camilo since she can't find Antonio.
Julieta:" Mi vida, you ok? You don't have to overdo it"
Mirabel:" I know mama, I just wanna do my part like the rest of the family" Mirabel lifts a heavy object on the counter, the house shuffles of away, revealing agustin, his nose is covered in gross welts that are impossible not to stare at.
Agustin:" she's right, amor"
Mirabel:" eesh"
Agustin:"first gifts ceremony since yours a lot of emotions"
Mirabel:" bee sting"
Agustin:"and I've been there" Mirabel bends down right as her mom turns around to see his bee sting.
Julieta:" ay, Agustin" Julieta sighs and starts working on a cure.
Agustin:" when me and your tio Felix married into the family, outsiders who had no gift never. Ever would, surrounded by the exceptional it was easy to feel. Un-exceptional"
Mirabel:" ok papi"
Agustin:" I'm just saying, I get it" Julieta cute him off with an arepa. Julieta:"eat, mi Amor, if you ever wanna talk"
Mirabel:"I gotta put out the stuff, the house isn't gonna decorate itself" the banners casita put up drop down in a sad way.
Mirabel:"sorry, you could, you look great" the banners instantly go back up.
Julieta:" Corazon, remember"
Agustin:"yeah remember"
Julieta:"you have nothing to prove!"
Agustin" you have nothing to prove"
As Mirabel turns the corner she shows a thumbs up.Mirabel:"mhmm"
Agustin gives julieta a look like "we nailed it" He sees that Julieta looks concerned and matches her concerned face.
Mirabel sets up a candle on top of papers that has Abuelas name on it
Felix:"ah los musicos, you guys can set up over here" Felix says in the distance.
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Abuela;" clean your rooms!, I don't care how big they are" abuela also says in the distance but getting closer.
Abuela:" pari close your door everyone is freezing"
Mirabel stands up looking at abuelas door then to the pictures of them when they were little, hand on the magical doorknob. The pictures captured the glowing door and joy in there faces except pari's. For someone that got there powers and awesome ones at that, pari didn't look happy, she almost looked, sad?.
Tiple maestro:" has anyone seen my tiple?"
Abuela" one hour" she said getting closer causing Mirabel to gasp and stumble back setting a fire on the decoration.
Mirabel:" oh (grunts) oh no, no," she grabs the candle then grabs the decoration waving it around hoping to put out the tiny fire.
Abuela:" maybe you should leave the decorations, to somebody else?"
Mirabel:" no, I actually made these as a surprise for you. Ooh!" She lifts up the surprise to see the tiny fire is still there, she quickly throws it on the ground stomping on it as she nervously chuckles.
Abuela:" Mirabel, I know you want to help but tonight must go perfectly, the whole town relies on our family. On our gifts, so the best way for some of us to help......is to step aside, let the rest of the family do what they do best, okay?"
Mirabel:"hm..mhmm" wind blowing
They both turn side ways looking at pepa.
Abuela:" pepa you have a cloud"
Pepa:" I know mama but now I can't find Antonio what do you want from me?"
Pari:come on tia pepa we'll find him together just stay calm" pari uses her ice to freeze
the cloud then grabs pepa's Hand calmly moving her to find Antonio.
As Mirabel walks to her room she over hears Abuela and mama talking.
Julieta:"mama be nice to Mirabel okay?, you know tonight will be hard for her"
Abuela:" if the gift ceremony doesn't go well this time, tonight will be hard for us all" Mirabel walks in her room closing it.
Felix:"Antonio"
Sitting on her bed she reaches over grabbing a gift placing it on her lap fixing the top a little. Mirabel:"everyone's looking for you.....this present will self-destruct if you don't take it" she dangles the gift slightly under the bed waiting.
Mirabel:" in three....two.one...oh" she Chuckles as Antonio grabs the gift from her.
Getting under the bed she lays next to Antonio who is tracing the animals on the gift. Mirabel:"nervous?"
Mirabel:" you have nothing to worry about, your gonna get your gift and open that door...and it's gonna be the coolest ever..I know it" they both stay silent when they hear pari.
Pari:" ANTONIO" after a while of silence they go back to there conversation.
Antonio:" (whispers) what if it doesn't work?"
Mirabel:" well, In that impossible scenario. You'd stay here in the nursery with me, (whispers dramatically) forever...and I'd get you all to myself" she tickles him.
Antonio:"I wish you could have a door"
Mirabel:" you know what?, you don't have to worry about me cause I have an amazing family,.. and an amazing house...and an amazing you"
Mirabel:"and seeing you get your special gift and your door, that's gonna make me way more happy than anything, (signs) but, alas I am gonna miss having the worlds best roomie." Placing the gift in front of Antonio he opens it finding a stuffed animal inside.
Mirabel:" I know you're an animal guy, and I made this so. When you move into your cool new room, you'll always have something to snuggle with"
The earnestness of the moment is gently cut as the house moves it's floorboards to draw their attention to the time.
Mirabel:" all right hombrecito, you ready" Antonio nods his head.
Mirabel:"sorry I got in one more squeeze" casita starts moving the boards under them causing them to move from under the bed laughing.
Mirabel:"ow ow"
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I'm gonna end it here guys I hope you liked it and I hope you liked the character I added in the book also.
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