《I SAID I LOVE YOU》IS THIS LOVE?MAINE NA JAANA,TU HI BATANA!
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Is this love?I didn't knew..you only tell me!
"Aadi where are you dragging me to?",Angel questioned me.
"Angel wait for a while,you will know yourself".
"Aadi what if your granny or anyone gets to know that we are missing?"
"Trust me angel,I managed everything,We need this time to discuss something important".
Later we were seated on the mat,facing the small pond with angel in my arms,and our fingers intertwined.
"Angel ,I know you forgave me,but still I think I need to clear some issues of the past".
"Aadi it's okay,I wont mind,let the past be in the past"
"No angel,we cant move on properly unless we discuss the demons of our past,angel today ,here I will tell you a story,Our love story ,in my view...ready to hear?",She nodded a yes shyly.
"Angel there was a guy named aaditya kashyap,a rude arrogant guy,who never cared about anyone,everyone used to call him a monster,but none knows how much of aa broken soul he was inside...
Then once, something happened to me,It was the sweetest thing that could ever be,It was a fantasy, a dream come true...It was the day that I met you...
Now, this is a story all about how...My life got flipped-turned upside down with your entry.TARA,I still remember the day I met you
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With that I opened the basket and gave her the rabbit.
"You still have it?",she asked me crying.
"Yes angel I never lost it in the first place,sorry it looks horrible with all the patches,but in my eyes,it's so precious to me,and angel let me continue the story".
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"Angel I never know what love and affection were!! You came into my life when I was in despair ...I felt god had made you just for me....It seems I searched all my life for someone like you,You used to mend me with your care and affection....And all my heartaches and pains slowly started to dissappear in your constant love and care but I never showed you what I truly felt,I always covered my true feelings with my rudeness".
"You never ceased to surprise me,Remember the time when our college took us to excursion trip to araku on dussehra holidays?
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"And you know angel I still remember the day you confessed your love for me.That day You touched my hand, and reached my thoughts, my heart, You looked into my eyes, and touched my soul....Through only a simple confession you changed me, with only a I LOVE YOU you moved me,With only a look you brought me life. You are my angel from above ".
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"But angel you did not hate me nor did you leave me,you started loving me more and more,and trust me I started falling for you..Who cannot love you?
Your smile radiated every room you walked into....And all the men s heads turned and looked at you,Your beauty I could not resist.
Your voice as gentle as breeze,your I love you's started Soothing and cleansing and relieving all my pain.
This is your love- which in you I found Like the rising and setting of the sun...and I was proud that You love me,only me"
"My angel, Whenever you used to look at me I used to feel you, whenever you touched me I heard your thoughts, whenever I saw you I used to explode inside..your love started making me alive again!"
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How much longer can I keep deceiving myself that I wont love you...I could not last long? I started loving you because it feet right in the heart, Finally I figured out that the most purest and the best feelings in life are only felt from the heart, never understood from the mind. I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU.
"Angel....The first time I saw you, my heart fell. The second time I saw you, my heart fell. The third time fourth time fifth time and every time since, my heart has fallen.
You are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen. Your hair, your eyes, your lips, your body that you haven't grown into, the way you walk, smile, laugh, the way your cheeks drop when you're mad or upset, the way you drag your feet when you're tired. Every single thing about you is beautiful.
When I used tosee you the World stoped. It stops and all that exists for me is you and my eyes staring at you. Just you, and my eyes staring at you.
I was able to find the words to tell you how much I love you .... I wanted to just scream to the whole world that I'm in love with you. "
"BUT THEN
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So this was the first past of the past...did you like it...trust me it was so hard to write it to show the past in aaid's view..tilll now we saw tara's view..i wanted to show it in aadi's view too....and the past mentioned in bold are from prologue,aao milo chale and the description...you can refer them once ,but they were in tara's pov.
How was the chap...did I reach up to your expectations?Gimme ur views in comments!!
PLease vote and comment...I am not getting much votes...reads r upto 500 but votes r not even 50...plz silent readers try to vote and comment...ur response gives me energy to write.
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