《Rating Your Warrior Cat Ocs!》@Ztar101
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Name and reason: Shakenpaw, when he first opened his eyes he tripped on everything.Lots of the apprentices make fun of him for it.He never means to make a fool of himself but he is EXTREMELY clumsy.
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Appearance: Black apprentice with green eyes.
Rank: Apprentice
Clan: BoneClan (My au Clan)
Age: 8 moons
Mother: His mother is unfound and probobly dead idk.
Father: Spiderscar is his father which he lives in CliffClan(he never knew his parents)
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Littermate(s): His sister is Featherfall but she is unfound.
Mentor: Blizzardspike
Relationship with them: uhhh none ig ;-;
Gender: Tom
Strength(s): not really any
Weakness(s): his 'curse'
Theme song: 'Ready as I'll ever be'
Personality: Very clumsy, kinda curses with it.Everyone in the Clan thinks he's useless because he can't hunt or fight and always gets in bad situations.
His mentor is disappointed in him and is getting sort of a bad reputation because everyone else thinks he has bad mentoring skills.Shakenpaw doesn't have much friends but he does kind of have of crush on Birchpaw which they are both friends.He hasn't told anyone about this and isn't planning too because he feels that if he does tell Birchpaw, and they do become mates, it will ruin her life.
Cause of death: After his mentor,
Blizzardspike asked the leader if they should kill Shakenpaw, because he thinks he's useless and only taking up room in the Clan and eating food that they could use for 'useful cats',
Shakenpaw hears this and runs away to tell his friend Crevassepaw about this, he decides to run away from his Clan.
Shakenpaw finds a rogue with a black pelt and red eyes.The rogue gives Shakenpaw the confidence to return and fight back and that's what Shakenpaw does.
He comes back to the Clan with confidence and tries to kill Blizzardspike but fails.
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Shakenpaw is wounded very badly.
Birchpaw tries to stop him without violence, but Shakenpaw realizes what he's been doing and what he is becoming/became.He begs Birchpaw to do that final blow but Birchpaw refuses.Shakenpaw gives a small speech to her but then Birchpaw finally kill him with his last words being "I always loved you, Birchpaw.I'm sorry it had to end like this."
Why this OC is special to me: Shakenpaw is a cat whose been through a lot.Having hostile glares, knowing that he won't be good enough for anyone, not having parents, almost getting killed twice, etc.
Despite all his effort to please his mentor, friends, and the rest of his Clan, he gains the strength to fight back despite failing he learns mistakes and finally confesses to Birchpaw.
He's a cat who pushes through no matter what comes through his way and its special to me because I think that's what a lot of people need to be.
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