《GCSE Language P1&2 Q5》Paper 2 Question 5: Fame Prompt
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'Our world is a paradise for plastics; a nightmare for the rest of us.'
Dear editor,
While scrolling through the seemingly endless list of channels on TV last night, I came across 'Love Island'. A program about a group of attractive bronzed gods and goddesses on an island with the intent of finding love. I have one word to describe the program:
Disgusting.
In the present day and age, young children are taught that if you want to be popular, you have to be pretty. This message is very negative and offputting to most girls because it puts them off revising or having fun. Instead, they are cooped up in their lonely room debating which eyeshadow look would get them the most likes. These girls idolise the bronzed goddesses they perceive the 'Love Island' cast to be so much that many young girls will go to tanning salons and look like a walking wotsit just to try to be more popular.
It's similar for boys as well. They watch 'Love Island' or other programmes along the same line of attractive people finding fame and fortune and begin to long to look like them. A study found that 36% of boys who work out don't do it for the health benefits. They work out to be 'beach body ready' or to resemble their raucous role models. These role models aren't beneficial to boys either. In the past, boys idolised famous footballers or scientists, wanted to be the one who discovered a new planet or scored the winning goal. Now, look at them. Shirts off, filters on, face tuning out the blemishes and photoshopping in the six-pack. Boys are looking up to heartbreakers, drunkards and sex addicts. This is NOT good.
Instead, boys and girls should be idolising the people who do good. A study found that nurses who work unpaid overtime drink Red Bull on the job to stay awake. These people are so devoted to making people (often the drunkards) healthy again that they will drink energy drinks so they don't fall asleep and continue to work instead. They are an inspiration to us all, not the braindead bimbos of reality shows who get drunk every night and end up in the hospital with liver failure. One of my cousins works in a special needs home for children. He is far from the pinnacles of prettiness on TV but his work is spectacular. He looks like a dropped pie but he's a good bloke.
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I believe that we can make a change for the better. We don't want a society of plastic braindead robots, but social media and TV seem to advertise these men and women the most. We need authors, scientists, journalists and mathematicians who have the willpower to improve the world and set us back on track. For a closing statement, I propose this: Do you want a society of tanned deities, or a society of people ready to change the world?
~~ Marks ~~
Content & Organisation: 19/24
Technical Accuracy: 15/16
Total Marks: 34/40
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Shovels In Spades
We all have dreams of becoming powerful, becoming the cool mage that rules the world, living as the dashing rogue who can steal a kingdom's entire royal treasury undetected, or perhaps, the valiant knight whose prowess on the battlefield is unmatched by all. However, when the apocalypse strikes, you can only use what you have at your disposal, be that guns, baseball bats, your fists, or maybe, just maybe, a shovel. One young man who goes by the name of Darenzo has just had his world altered into one that is now the focal point of some sort of experiment. Just at the end of his shift at the skip site, a worldwide announcement was made, that not only changed Darenzo's life, but also the lives of all of the Earth's inhabitants. Can Darenzo survive and thrive in this changed world? Or will his growing madness best him? The answers to these questions can only be revealed with time. [Goal of 2 chapters per week, the only exceptions being announced breaks or emergencies] (The new cover art is a courtesy of the very kind and talented ssddx and was designed using the fanart cover of cthulupillar as the base.) This novel is a participant in The Writer's Pledge
8 180Hybrid Summoner
All his life it seemed like the gods condemed his existence. One thing led to another in an endless spiral that would break nearly anyone, and yet it only taught him one thing. The strong make the rules and the weak get eaten by them. He never wanted power, fame, or glory. He wanted a happy life with a family that loved him and he finally thought he could get it. Until she slept with his best friend hours after his parents funeral. It took years to peice himself together again but he did it and just so the gods could get the last laugh and end the world. Now thrown into a world straight out of some fantasy VRMMORPG like he read about online the skills he created to combat depression will now combat monsters straight out of a story book. Follow Niko Bolas as he crawls through a world overflowing with monsters- and not the human kind either. Watch as he turns all the pain of his life into a strength that will make the world itself tremble. This is the journey of a man that finally is where he was always meant to be. Even it that is at the end of a world and the begining of another. Quick shout out to Deviant art cause they make so much awsome artwork. The cover is theirs and i just used it cause it felt in tune with the MC. Oh and this my first book so i'd appreciate some good solid constructive criticism, ENJOY.
8 60Nightfallers (LitRPG)
A group of outcast children become assassins within a high-stakes online game. Caught in the middle of a savage war between three schools for gifted children, they find themselves pawns in a bet between billionaires. A bet where they must win the competition at any cost, or lose their home and their friends—but first they need to overcome their own limitations and fears.Updates each week, with occasional bonus chapters.
8 153Above All
"In a world where strength rules supreme. All beings shall bow before the strong."This is the golden rule of all mortals who wish to take the path of martial arts or wizardry and defy the will of the heavens.Those who do not obey this rule will suffer a miserable fate worse than death. Arthur, a 13 year old boy who has encountered a strange occurrence during his early childhood, is forcedto undertake the tribulation of the heavens. Follow him and watch as he tries to become the one who stands above all.
8 183Poor Lenore
The great expansion led the royal family to prosper greatly in the age of sail. Conquering the seas led many to rebel against the empire. A young pirate by the name of Sid Vicious narrowly escapes empirical forces after a job in the capital goes awry. Finding haven in Port Dover, he meets a couple of orphans. Locke Ligarius, his sister Eleanor, and best friend Bellamy are swept into a world wrought with danger, excitement, and deception. Prior to Sid's arrival, Locke's life is mired by apathy and boredom. At a young age, his alcoholic father drank himself to death and left him alone to care for his sister. Now, years later, adventure is knocking at his door and he will have to decide between his commitment to his sister and his own personal aspirations. Sail with Locke in the first of a five-part series as he uncovers his fathers past and grapples with consequences of his decisions.
8 80Great Master of All
Hmm, Basically no Idea for a sypnosis but well. Will he be the great master of all or what might happen? Uhh, warning is there for whatever it is better warned than nothing kek
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