《The First Demon》Prologue and Chapter 1
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I don't own any material contained within this story. All copyrighted content remains the property of the person, people, or organization that holds the copyright. This story is solely for fun.
Well I had this idea for a while and thought I might as well put it out there. But please excuse me for any Mary-Sueness. I don't mean to do it but I just ask you bear with it and try and ignore that fact.
I own the O.C. Lilith and possibly her demon. This also applies for the rest of the story. And this story deals with the anime and the first chapter starts on the day of the ball featured in the last episode.
I also have this story on fanfiction.net, Inkitt, and I believe Quotev under the same username... this is the 1st completed story I made on fanfiction.net and thought I would share it here in its mostly original form so I could see just how far I have come every once in a while. Plus I have a strange pride with this story and can't seem to delete it off the internet and instead have spread it around wherever I go... ignore the obvious joke there please haha.
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The creator of two of the people of the garden was elsewhere making other things. That was the only way the other woman, created by the Evil One, was able to meet and to become sisters with one of the two people.
The gardens were being worked on by a man naked as day, but only one of the two naked women sitting on the grass near the garden knew this wasn't right. The woman who knew, her name was Lilith, and she was jealous of this woman's beauty. The woman sitting next to Lilith and chatting had long platinum blonde hair, same as the man, and with eyes as blue as the sky above them, also same as the man. And her skin was a creamy white, same as the mans
But Lilith wasn't meant to be there. You could even tell by the way she looked compared to the only two other people here. She had raven black hair and her skin wasn't one single color and was always changing, and even though she had a nice body, the naked woman who she loved as a sister had one more gorgeous. Another thing that meant that she wasn't meant she wasn't supposed to be there was because she was sent by the Evil One. He wanted to make sure that the woman sitting across from her ate from the Tree of Good and Evil.
She hated trying to do this knowing their fate but it was in her nature to cause misfortune to others and she had to obey the orders of the Evil One, her master. At the end of the day the creator of these two people would send them down from this garden and bar the Tree of Life so they couldn't return unless they died like the mortal animals they tended.
Lilith plan would have to commence now if she ever planned to do it. They walked past the Tree of Good and Evil and Lilith said, "So sister how about you take an apple from that tree."
"You know because Father said we could not." The woman said as it was common knowledge.
"But didn't you know? Wait you wouldn't know. This tree is the tree that will let you know all things in the world." Lilith said picking up a strand of the un-sinful woman's soft long hair.
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"Well then why had Father said we couldn't?" The woman said looking at the tree.
The seeds of curiosity were now successfully planted and that made Lilith's job done, "Why don't you try one and find out. Surely you'll know then. And then let the person in the field try one and tell him what I had told you."
The woman looked at Lilith shocked and asked, "Aren't you going to be here with me?"
Lilith laughed and let a tear roll down her face as the other woman took an apple, "I'm sorry but I have to go back to my master. And I'm sure you'll hate me after this so it's better for me not to be around right?"
Lilith then burrowed into the Earth as the woman she loved like a sister took a bite. Lilith appeared before her master, the Evil One, and said, "She and he will be fallen by the end of today just as you planned master."
The man hidden in dark let out a dark and seductive laugh and said, "Good Lilith. You are now the first demon. Now come here my snake and I'll personally make sure you never feel sad for this deed again."
Lilith stepped into her master's arms and accepted the most wonderful pleasure for him, but it would be a long time before she could begin to get over her first of many sins.
*1 if you hadn't already guessed it deals with Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden, and Lilith is the "snake" that convinced Eve to eat the apple, and if you want to know more info on this look up "Lilith" on Wikipedia or just look up "Adam and Eve" on Wikipedia.
Lilith awoke to see that her mother was still asleep and her father gone off to the kitchen to cook. The woman smiled and quickly and quietly slipped on her maid's uniform and when she was done, her mother, a stocky graying woman with kind, soft, brown eyes, smiled and said, "Isn't today you're day off child?"
Lilith laughed and said, "no it's yours mother. Now may you help me with my hair? It never turns out right whenever I do it."
The mother smiled, knowing her daughter only did his to make the elder woman feel loved and needed, but said yes nonetheless. Lilith sat down in front of the vanity mirror and took in her... different appearances.
Lilith had long raven hair that fell past her past only slightly, she had pale skin, and was quite shapely in a beautiful manor, but what distracted, and in many cases, dismissed Lilith as a candidate for every man she's set her sights on were her eyes. Normally they are a thing to lure a man in, but her eyes lured them in and then made their faces turn in disgust for Lilith's eyes were that of a golden snake's eyes.
The woman's parents always told her that it made it for a higher purpose, but all the other nobles, except for the inhabitants of this household, thought it cursed her. What other way was Lilith to think? However, once Lilith's mother started brushing her hair, Lilith thought about the party she was to attend with Emilia, her mistress.
Lilith had already, everything set for the young noble woman. She had a very fashionable pink gown with enough showing and enough hidden to allude mystery and fascination without going indecent for her friend and employer. Then Lilith would dress Emilia's hair in a way so that it showed her neck, while having some fall from the pearl strands that held everything together. She would look splendid.
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Lilith's mother was done dressing her hair up and Lilith immediately headed to the kitchen to get the breakfast for Emilia. She met her father, the head chef and said tired good mornings before she quickly rushed up to her mistress's room and saw that the lithe blonde occupant had not awoken from her sleep. Lilith smiled at her friend as memories of their childhood came to mind; them playing in the back garden while their parents went on with their lives. However, these two girls had no idea that their social status was until the age of nine when Lilith was put to work and Emilia had to go into lessons that are more serious.
Though Emilia and Lilith still kept their bond throughout the years. Lilith opened the curtains and let the light hit Emilia's face that had some blonde strands falling into it, while she said, "Up to arms young mistress. We have to get you ready for the ball tonight."
"I won't wake up until you promise me that you will stop calling me young mistress in the privacy and in the presence of those close to us." Emilia mumbled into her pillow.
Lilith let a small smile grace her face and said, "Alright Emilia, but I still have to get you ready to greet the early comers."
Emilia turned to Lilith with a smile and then sat up and said, "Alright Lilith, make me into a beautiful prospect."
Lilith smiled and helped Emilia out of her nightclothes, and into the corsets, straps, strings, and dress that came to make the outfit look stunning. Though when Lilith was working on pearling Emilia's hair, the blonde stated, "How come men don't find you attractive Lilith? I mean, they like me well enough but you do have the bigger chest."
Lilith blushed and said, "My eyes are what drive the men away Emilia, and besides, even if my eyes were normal, you fill out your figure much more nicely then me."
Emilia pouted and said, "Take a compliment Lilith dear. Now since you're done with my hair let's head down stairs."
Lilith nodded and smiled and when they reached the bottom of the steps, the Madame, Emilia's mother, who was a curvy woman with similar, yet older features like Emilia, smiled and said, "Good afternoon Emilia, and Lilith. My, my what a splendid job you did on my daughter Lilith."
Lilith bowed and said, "I try my best Madame."
The Madame smiled and then frowned saying, "I'm sorry dears, but for the sake of all our tempers, could you-"
Nevertheless, it was too late. The elderly gentleman, who was the Madame's cousin, came strolling in, and when he noticed Lilith, he made a sign against evil and said, "Good afternoon, cousin, and Lady Emilia. Now could one of you explain why this filthy creature is standing in my presence?"
Lilith bowed her head, and kept her eyes from showing while saying, "Is this better my Lord?"
"Much. Now I don't want your eyes showing again in my presence." Lilith nodded to his request and he was then gone.
Lilith had learned very early that during social events with nobles that she had to keep her eyes hidden at all times, and she did very well at it.
The Madame said, "Well the guests should be arriving in streams now. Please take your places in the ballroom." both the females nodded and headed into the ballroom.
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Lilith was looking everywhere for Emilia, to give her the drink she asked for, but she couldn't find the blonde anywhere. That is until Lilith noticed that Emilia was dancing with the famous Lord Mikk. Lilith couldn't stop looking as the two gracefully danced across the floor and for the first time in ages, Lilith was jealous of Emilia's position on the social ladder.
Lilith then shook her head and smiled for Emilia's good fortune before heading towards the balcony, and waiting for her blonde mistress. Lilith then got another glass of drink in case the Lord Mikk decided to join Emilia for a night time view of the sky on the balcony. In a few minutes Lilith heard some feet moving towards her and she guessed it was Emilia, so she turned around with the two drinks, but nearly dropped both the cups when she saw Lord Mikk talking and smiling with Emilia.
Lilith immediately turned her gaze down, hidden from the handsome Lord's view and wished that his eyes wouldn't stop traveling on her form, she could feel them for a split second before Lilith said, "Young Mistress, I have the drinks you asked for."
Emilia smiled and said, "Thank you Lilith, and is one of them yours?"
Lilith shook her head and stated, "I thought you may have a guest later so I got them a drink. Lord Mikk if you prefer something different, I could always replace this."
Emilia took the glasses and said, "It's just fine Lilith."
Lord Mikk then spoke asking, "Why does she hide her eyes?"
Emilia looked a bit sad and angry and said, "Her eyes are unusual, and since most of the other nobles, can't see the beauty of them, she was forced to train herself to hide them in such a manner."
"Is this true?" Lord Mikk asked.
"Every word, Lord Mikk." Lilith continued.
"Then let me see them," Lord Mikk had stated that so calmly and suddenly, that Lilith looked at him in shock. All he did though was smile and said, "Well, I've never seen such beautiful eyes on such a lady before. You have a fine catch Lady Emilia."
Emilia smiled and Lilith blushed saying, "Shall I leave you both to your chat. It seems I interrupted it when you entered the balcony."
"You may do whatever you wish Lilith," Emilia stated and Lilith bowed.
"It was good to meet you Lord Mikk, Call me if you need anything young Mistress." and with that Lilith left the balcony to leave the two alone to chat
Alright so on the last episode of the anime, remember that girl who danced with Tyki, and the woman who introduced her daughter? Well Emilia is the dancing partner, and the mother is the Madame. Hope you liked it! And remember... this takes place at the party at the end of the anime!
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