《Vallyk vs dejaune》Dejaune
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I wake up and put on workout clothes to go run around the neighborhood. Once I went outside I seen vallyk coming out the door with ashley. I just brushed it off and started jogging. As I was jogging I could feel vallyks eyes on me and then I stopped because dejaune was calling me.
Call
J: yes jaune
De: ma where u at
J: I'm on a jog wanna come with
De: yeah
J: ok I'll turn around
De: k bye
Call ended
As I was running back to jaune I saw vallyk and his friend Kobe, Derek, and mike. They all stopped and looked at me. And they saw jaune come outside. When I walked up and pecked dejaune on the lips vallyk gave me a stank face and walked over to me and him
V: so this who u with now
I ignored him and we started jogging. We jogged around the whole neighborhood and when we got back to the hous we took a shower. And we noticed that Lisa and Dre were gone. We don't mind cause we maybe thought they went on a date. I went down stairs to the kitchen to get a snack and someone knocked on the door. I walked to the door and saw................
TBC
Who do u think she saw
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