《BAMBISONAS!! MY OCS (DO NOT STEAL!)》A new bambisona part 2!
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Uhh, the picture might be bad!
The name is covered! And idk why:
Drogamo! (the one on the right!)
Age: 25
Facts: -He has ADHD -He is very sensetive in the inside, but causes chaos accidently on the outside. -He isn't interested in dating YET. -He is scared of interacting with other bambi's -
-He knows the whole 'family tree', but has a bad childhood (accidently killed a member on mistake.)
-Likes: Dragon Fruit! And probably peaches too! Hanging out with Buberry sometimes, snakes, sometimes slicing fruits (likes playing fruit ninja), likes watching Mr Beast and eating his chocolates! (always wants the ticket to the chocolate factory) Watching We baby bears (dont ask why its just a hobby)
-Dislikes: Talking about 'family'. NFT's, tik tok, Blaze and the Monster Machines! (Barry Burana also loves to watch it everyday, which annoys Drogamo.)
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