《Tumse Na Jaane Kyuin✓》Chapter- 14
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The next Morning, A knock on their door disturbed the sleep of Shyam and Anjali.
Anjali groaned burying herself into her pillow, Shyam chuckled at his wife's childish behaviour and got up to open the door. Opening the door, He gritted his teeth seeing Subhadra Devi Malik standing in front of him.
“” Shyam's cold voice almost made Subhadra Devi flinch, but she composed herself quickly and forwarded a glass of milk towards him.
“” Subhadra explained the purpose of her visit. Shyam took the glass of milk and walked inside the room, Subhadra followed.
“” He asked turning towards the bathroom
“” Subhadra said confused at his sudden change in track.
“” Shyam said distaste dripping from his voice and went into the bathroom to drain the milk into the basin
“” Subhadra asked wide-eyed seeing his actions.
Shyam ignored her question and went out of his room gesturing her to follow him
“” Shyam said
“” Subhadra asked
Shyam gave her a DO-I-NEED-TO-TELL-YOU look
“” Shyam shrugged nonchalantly.
“” Subhadra said.
“” Shyam stated stolidly
“Damad-ji-”
“(Don't you assume that I've forgotten what you've done, Stay away from Anjali or you'll see the worst of me!!) ” Shyam warned her.
A smirk appeared on Subhadra's face.
“” Shyam asked sarcastically, She shrugged.
“” Subhadra asked feigning curiosity.
“”
“” Subhadra asked confused
“” Shyam asked flasbaggered
“” Subhadra smirked evilly
“” Shyam asked exasperated. .
“” Subhadra said sadly
“” Shyam asked stupefied
“” Subhadra said nonchalantly.
“” Shyam started in a surprised tone, His voice turning strangely anguished towards the end.
Subhadra looked at Shyam confused, Shyam shook his head “” He said dismissively and walked away from her.
“” Shyam said solemnly.
It's short. But it's kind of important for it to be because.. If I had added anything to it, The update would've been a mess.
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Any confusions cleared? I don't know if the explaination of why planned that accident made any sense to you or not, But this is it.
I'm not happy with the response this story is getting. I thought the suspense is making it interesting, But the number of votes & comments that I get makes my assumption wrong!! Please LET ME KNOW if there's something that you don't like!!
I've been giving back to back updates of this story and expect the response to be good too. It takes a second only to press the vote button and merely a few minutes to write out a comment. Is it too much to ask for?
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