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, welcome to my world of 'Untouched'; the brain-child of both many sleepless and dream rich nights. I've been debating writing this for a while now; worried that it may turn into an epic - yet, here it is!
, I acknowledge that this book is not for everyone for several reasons. It is a hybrid of paranormal, fantasy, mystery and suspense. The book is also written in long chapters; chapters that are detail rich and designed to transport you into the world I had in my mind. Please do not point out chapter length as it was intended this way. Also, I am aware that characters in this book may be hateful and trigger some readers. This is intended also.
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, I must say a big thank-you to those that have already embraced this world, whether you are someone that reads the updates religiously or someone that has just found it and binge reading as I write this. Knowing that people are enjoying the roller-coaster of a journey is AMAZING!
I am always open to questions - always. I know a few have been asking if this will have a sequel; we will see! ;)
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I often get asked what I listen to when I'm writing. Well, if I could have a theme song, it would be this. Listen to it; let it set the mood:
And the closing of the theme would be:
, I hope you enjoy this. It was designed with you in mind. Remember that if you enjoy it, please as your support is much, much appreciated and means the world (and the next one over) to me! xx
let me know in the comments below if you would like to see a sequel!
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In Serial16 Chapters
Chaos Wave
The year is 2055. Virtual Reality has been around for nearly forty years, and the Full Sensation Dive System has been around for about thirty. The various countries of Earth have long since given up on Warring against each other in this dimension when it turned out that with the FSDS (Full Sensation Dive System) virtual worlds became real, especially once Richard Alonzo Albeque's AIQNPC (Artificial Intelligence Quest and Non-Player Character) System was released and spread like a wild virus across all the active MMOs. People vanished from their Dive system, leaving nothing behind of the person they were, and the Characters they were in game become locked out, and no longer responsive to the System. In addition to this, they are suddenly showing up on ALL servers of a game at the same time, almost as if they were now an NPC. The governments put a stop to all distribution of FSDS Technology, and keep an eye on these 'Digitized Players'. Ten years pass and one of the first ever Digitized Players, a Level 500 Catgirl by the name of Atreya the Dawnbirth, created a stable portal between their MMO and Earth. With the return of one of the players, the governments remove the bans on FSDS Technology, which has still been researched heavily while under the ban. Wars break out over control of Virtual Worlds, but these wars are all fought ON the Virtual World, so the Earth isn't polluted further. Immortality is now available to all who seek it, if you can find a World to call your own. Of course, nobody paid attention to one of the few warnings Atreya brought back with her... The NPCs sometimes became sentient and disobeyed coding laws.
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Decimating Gods and Demons
From Zero to One, One turning to Two, Two x Two equals Four, Four becomes Eight,Eight multiplied itself,Sixty-four symbols appear,Representing all... A boy who suddenly transcended to another world. A world that he dreamt day and night. It's a fantasy world where cultivators and cultivation exist! He easily adapted the new world as if he didn't care why he got there and only thinks to become a cultivator! In the midst of his immersion in his new life. He then suddenly wakes up and returned to the real world... He thought, "Was those experience that I felt so real were just a dream that I have created?" Warning: Contains Spoiler CULTIVATION SYSTEM Dantian has three parts. Lower Middle Upper. Upper - where the fog appears. Middle - will be revealed as the story progressed. Lower - the earth will appear. Mortal Realm - Measured the fog how dense it was. Earthen Realm - has nine earthen layers. - larger storage of elemental energy. - will be replenished by raining down the elemental energy from the formed fog at the upper level. Horizon Realm - Way of Recuperating Elemental Energy on Earthen Realm - has two ways. ¤ Gathers the elemental energy of Heaven and Earth ¤ Using the gathered fog at the upper level to replenish the earthen layered at the bottom level. I created this because of Daoist Trekshcool's concern. Thanks, fellow Daoist! Credits To All Daoists: Daoist Jaydcar - the first commenter. Daoist Trekshcool - the first Daoist who wrote and rated my story. Daoist Roknar - the 2nd commenter and the first who said, "ok this is one of the stupidest chapters you have written". Thanks to him I didn't write stupid chapters again. Hahaha. Daoist Roktah - gives me the insight in dao of a proofreader. Daoist IllusoryDemon - the first person who asked if he will be upgraded from the 'Daoist Invisibles'. Daoist Invisibles - to you all who read and even rated anonymously. Reminders: Their names are clickable except the Invisibles. BOOK ONE: Vivid Dreams
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Gabriel "The Bastard Son"
Gabriel is a young boy with very unique appearence and thus he is subjected to a lot of bullying,His only desire is for the days to pass so he can escape to his room.His days are quite normal except the fact that he suffers at the hands of other kids,that was the case untill his encounter with Kevin,a scientist with a dramatic backround and a will for revenge.Gabriel finds out that he is not a normal human and Kevin explains to him that various paranormal creatures roam the world,creatures from tales and myths are responsible for the most evil of crimes and Gabriel will use his powers alongside Kevin to bring justice to this so called "normal world".In his quest Gabriel will come across a lot of historic and mythical characters/beings that will help or oppose him... Author's Note- Gabriel's story is a very long one,the novel will go on for a long time,more and more chapters will be released that are going to explain the main plot of the story.The story will unfold slowly and the major parts will come soon enough.If you like the story,please rate and if your main issue is the bad writting,I apologize,I will try to improve as I go along.English isn't my mother language and I am taking lessons at the moment.Please be patient with me.
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In Serial170 Chapters
Slime Girl
Slimes are stupid!Annoying little pests that don't think about anything.How would they? They don't even have a brain.They don't even think about what they do, dissolving anything in their reach.That's worse than a beast acting on instinct, that's just following a program.A plague of mindless balls of goo.If it were up to me they should all get eradicated.At least that’s what I thought.Until my life was turned into a mess. Stupid slimes!
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Xavier and Nevah
Xavier isn't the happy little boy he used to be. At fourteen he turned to weed and alcohol just like his Abuelo and dad in the past. With bad friends and a siblings that hate the way he is, Xavier doesn't know how to be better. That is until he meets shy, quiet Nevah. His little sisters friend that stutters and blushes from embarrassment when talking. Her innocence pulls Xavier in. He knows what he thinks is wrong, he knows. Yet he can't seem to get the small, 4ft11 girl from his head. Maybe she's the better escape he's been looking for. ~~~~~~~My body held her captive between me and the wall. Both my hands by her head as I stared into her eyes. Never in my life did I think I'd go for a girl younger than me, but she drew me in. Her innocence is holding me captive like my body with her and the wall. Her chest heaved brushing against mine with ever inhale. Her light brown eyes staring into mine, glossed over. My eyes started to blur yet I didn't miss the tears falling down her soft cheeks. A hand of mine reached up making her flinch hard. More tears fell down her cheeks so I lifted my hand more, but slowly and wiped her tears with my thumb. "I will never harm you Nevah. Never." I whispered and pressed a small, soft kiss to her lips before walking away. What have I done? ~~~~~~~~Mature⚠️Please read all story's in order -daddy at fourteen -my dads best friend -Xavier and Nevah
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The Last Light of Eden (Sky Children of the Light)
(This story IS still being updated! Sorry it's taking so long to write chapters!!!)Long ago, before even the elders landed on the isles' peaceful shores, a darkness plagued the land of Sky. Creatures of evil and hate roamed freely, destroying all that was bright and good in the world. However, ancient stories tell of seven creatures, children of light, who sealed the darkness away, but at a terrible price. . . The seven children were locked inside the Eye, cursed to forever stand guard at its' gates. . . Until now. When the gates to Eden open once more, and a strange, glowing child falls to the lands of Sky, it's up to an odd group of heroes to reseal Edens' doors. But, with the darkness spreading fast, and the Krill constantly on the hunt, will they stop the spreading shadows in time. . .?(Thanks so much for 5K views!!!)"Sky Children of The Light" created by ThatGameCompany!!!Sky au created by me! =)Cover art also by me! (Art Software: FireAlpaca) Chapters will update irregularly due to school, homework, and lack of Coffee. I apologize for the inconvenience! =) If you guys have any comments or find any errors in my writing, feel free to let me know! =D Thanks!
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