《Broken [FINISHED]》Author's Note
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Hey guys!
I just wanted to say: I am very busy. Right now I'm in tech week for one show, and I just started rehearsals for another show. Misophonia therapy at the hospital starts next week, and with all of that I'm also trying to keep up with my homework. In other words, I don't have much time to write. And I'm not Hamilton, I write slowly. So I will try to update once a week, but I might only update every other week.
Also, I have really appreciated all the votes, it was wonderful, thank you. But I can't see who voted. I would really like to get to know you guys better, so I thought that it might be nice if you all commented on this chapter. Tell me something about yourself: your name, your fandoms, whatever you want, and then I will: check out your profile, maybe start reading some of your books, maybe hit follow. Is that a good idea?
This Author's Note is getting way too long, but I have one more question: would you like Author's Notes at the end of every chapter or only when I have an important message or question like now?
Don't forget you're amazing and talented! Bye!
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