《Why did you do it? An Ash Betrayal》Aloha
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'whispering'
"Human talk"
(thinking)
TRio= team rocket
Ash's POV
( We didn't know were Aloha was so we asked for directions and you won't believe who we ran in to...)
???: When will we get to Aloha
Satoshi: Not until 5 hours Mairin I suggest you go to bed
Mairin: Ok Ash
???: SO Ash why did you change your name to Satoshi anyway
Satoshi: A Well short story I got betrayed, Alain
Alain: What!!
Satoshi: I'm going to tell you about the long part... It started like...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ash is coming home from winning the Klaos League and has a BIG surprise waiting for him at home ...
Ash: I can't wait to tell everyone the news about the win in the Klaos League right Guys?
Pikachu: Pika Pik (right Ash)
Lucario: Yes Ash. I wonder what your mom has planned for us
Ash: Yes I can't wait to see. Race You back
Lucario: You on!
Pikachu: Pika Pik Pikachu Pika CHU(I will beat you both. Time for a QUICK ATTACK)
Ash/Lucario: No fair
At Ash's house.
Pikachu: Told you I would beat you guys
Ash/Lucario: Because you cheated
Ash: let's just go inside
Mr. Mime: Mimey Mr. Mime ( Deila Ash is back)Mimey Mime (Hello Ash nice to see you)
Ash: Good to see you too Mr. Mime. Hi Mom
Deila: Hey Ash come to the living room for a sec
When Ash comes in he sees all his traveling companions.
Ash: Hey guys. I don't want to sound off rude but what are you all doing here
Misty, Brock, and Dawn: All of us are here because you durged your Greninja so we are here to take your Greninja
Ash couldn't believe this his friends are betraying him. His aura was faring up so Lucraio used calm mind to calm him down but it didn't work
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Ash: Do you all believe this?
Misty, Brock, Cilan, Iris, May, Paul and Dawn: Yes!!!!!!!!
This made Ash's aura red in anger
Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: Well we don't think you durged your pokemon if you did every one of us would know
This made Ash calmer
Ash: Max why do you side with my Kaols friends
Max: well because they traveled with you in Klaos and we didn't so it's safe to say that they are right
Ash: Thxs Max
Max: Np
Ash:
Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: Well We are coming with you
May: Oh No your not Max
Max: Yes I can you can control me because I'm ten and starting my pokemon journey lets go
Ash: Yeah follow me and you can pick up your starter pokemon
At Professor Oak's Lab
Ash: Professor Oak?
????: Ashy-boy is that you
Ash: Hey Gare-bear
Celmont, Bonnie, Serena and Max: what Ashy-boy Gare-bear
Ash: OH forgot about you guys Gary this is Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max. Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max this is Gary. Max would like his first starter pokemon
Gary: right this way
Ash: and a Gary and I talk to you for a sec sure
Gary: well yeah
Ash: well
Ash: I can't wait to tell everyone the news about the win in the Klaos League right Guys?
Pikachu: Pika Pik (right Ash)
Lucario: Yes Ash. I wonder what your mom has planned for us
Ash: Yes I can't wait to see. Race You back
Lucario: You on!
Pikachu: Pika Pik Pikachu Pika CHU(I will beat you both. Time for a QUICK ATTACK)
Ash/Lucario: No fair
At Ash's house.
Pikachu: Told you I would beat you guys
Ash/Lucario: Because you cheated
Ash: let's just go inside
Mr. Mime: Mimey Mr. Mime ( Deila Ash is back)Mimey Mime (Hello Ash nice to see you)
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Ash: Good to see you too Mr. Mime. Hi Mom
Deila: Hey Ash come to the living room for a sec
When Ash comes in he sees all his traveling companions.
Ash: Hey guys. I don't want to sound off rude but what are you all doing here
Misty, Brock, and Dawn: All of us are here because you durged your Greninja so we are here to take your Greninja
Ash couldn't believe this his friends are betraying him. His aura was faring up so Lucraio use calm mind to calm him down but it didn't work
Ash: Do you all believe this?
Misty, Brock, Cilan, Iris, May, Paul and Dawn: Yes!!!!!!!!
This made Ash's aura red in anger
Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: Well we don't think you durged your pokemon if you did every one of us would know
This made Ash calmer
Ash: Max why do you side with my Kaols friends
Max: well because they traveled with you in Klaos and we didn't so it's safe to say that they are right
Ash: Thxs Max
Max: Np
Ash:
Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: Well We are coming with you
May: Oh No your not Max
Max: Yes I can you can control me because I'm ten and starting my pokemon journey lets go
Ash: Yeah follow me and you can pick up your starter pokemon
At Professor Oak's Lab
Ash: and done
Gary: Wow
P. Oak: I can't believe your friends would betray you like that so my giving all of you theses
Hands them Pokeballs these are Mega balls hey in inshouer the chapcher of any pokemon
Ash: Here
Gary, Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: what pokemon are in here
Ash: Max you get Marshadow, Serena you get Diancie, Bonnie you get Zygarde, Gary you get Solgaleo and Celmont you get Zapdos
Gary, Celmont, Bonnie, Serena, and Max: Thanks Ash
Ash: NP
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Satoshi: And then
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Serena's POV
Its been a week and I haven't seen any progress on my team this if this continues my team will not evolve I have to leave I'm going to betray Ash and then tell the other where he is
Ash's POV
I have been scening a strange aura form, Serena so I think she is going to betray me so through aura when their train to keep training and for Mewtwo to use psychic on Diance's Pokeball
Serena walks up to Ash
Serena: Sylveon use fairy wind
Max: ASHHHHHHHHHHHH
Ash: Mewtwo now ( time to fake my death)
(Ash was teleported to the hall of origin)
Ash: what where am I and what am I do in here
Arceus comes and taps Ash on the back and he turns in to an Arceus
Arceus: Hello son
Ash: Mom?
Arceus: Yes ash
Ash: Mom your an Arceus
Arceus: yes and I have unlocked your ability to transform
(after a long explanation )
Ash: thank you( Teleaprots back in his Arceus form)
All but Ash: Arceus!!!
Serena: Let's go Gardevoir Psychic
Serena leaves
Ash Transforms back
All but Ash: Ash you are an Arceus?
Ash: yes let's get to training
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Marin: I can't believe that they betrayed you guys like that
Satoshi: Marin! you are awake
Marin: I didn't go to bed I wanted to find out why you changed your name and now I know
???: Aloha what are doing
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