《Dramione Repertoire & Critique》24. A Clandestine Reality (fanfiction.net)
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It had always been a subject of discussion that Rose hadn't inherited the famous Weasley red hair... Everyone has their secrets, Hermione Weasley included. But what happens when those secrets finally see the light of day? .:HGDM:.
Tears od Ebon-Grey
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1400201/Tears-of-Ebon-Grey
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4393951/1/A-Clandestine-Reality
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The story is short (only 20 chapters), but the chapters make the story the perfect lenght. Read it within 24 hours (some of you can probably beat me easily).
It starts with Hermione being wedded to Ron, but her realizing that their child - which she had thought to be Ron's - is in fact not his. How will she face the hard truth? And how will cope Ron? Bonus, Harry is not with Ginny, but with Luna (Huna for the win!). Plus, Mrs Weasley is nuts and you suddenly want Narcissa Malfoy to be your fairy godmother. Yup, that's how perfect it is.
The story between Draco and Hermione is adorably sweet (that makes a lot of cuteness). Ron doesn't have it easy, but neither does Hermione. I love how everything seems to be falling into place, like a perfect puzzle. Definitly worth the read!
Completed.
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