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EDITING STILL TO BE DONE
Thank you for coming along this ride and making it to the end, the last sprint if we are counting bonus chapters. I cannot express how excited I am to announce that we have made it all the way through this story. Thank you so much to everyone who has read all the way till the end and I can't express my gratitude towards you guys! I really want to go give all of you a huge virtual hug for reading!
I know the ending was a bit rushed and fast-paced but that's some advice I know I need to get better at, and I hope I do better in future stories! At least, that's the goal for All The Colors.
You know the feeling when you start a new story and it's just awesome in the beginning? And then as you write on, it starts to dim down a bit, which is why I can never finish a story. I don't know if that's just me but that's exactly what happened this story. I'll be rewriting the last few chapters soon and posting several bonus chapters, so stay tuned :) I've also seen all your comments about how it is half brothers instead of step brothers, and I hope you know that I have been acknowledging and hearing your comments. As I go through the story and make edits, I understand that readers who added the story to their private libraries will get notifications, so I'm trying to make the notifications as limited as possible. All these edits and bonus chapters will be done soon, I'm hoping by Fall 2021. Stay tuned, y'all!
I've also started a new story called All The Colors that I'm really excited for, and I really hope you guys decide to check that out!
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Concluding this story and note, I just wanted to say that I can't repeat and emphasize enough how thankful I am for all of you.
written with loads and loads of love,
It's been a few months since I've posted on here, so I wanted to give you guys a quick update. School has started and is going strong for me, especially with finals nearing, so I've been really busy these past few months. In about a month and a half, I'll start summer break- meaning more time to write. I've started editing the date chapter where Ryan and Jessica finally go out. I'm also looking to change the cast a bit and add more diversity in-between the characters. I'm so proud of all the accomplishments Fragile has made within these few months, and I know none of this would have been possible without you guys. Fragile hit #6 in Teen Fiction in March, won 1st place Humor in The Carnival Awards 2021, and won 2nd place in the End of An Era Awards Humor. I still want to give you all a huge virtual hug, since I can't come up with any other way to show how grateful I am. :) Thank you to all of you who are still reading and waiting for bonus chapters, and to all of you who've made it up to this point at the end, and to all of you who have even clicked on Fragile in the first place. Lots of love, gratitude, and prayers towards you all and wish you all awesome days. Stay tuned, the edited date chapter (with much more detail), will be posted soon!
cover explanation:
this story includes her memories of her father and aspects of her childhood, thus the swing. swings are normally symbolism of little children and her sitting on the swing as a teen shows her relation with the past. how she's stuck in the past and at the end, she beats that, and wins.
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