《Debanya: Rebirth Of Love》chapter 13
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Continued
Nakabposh : I am also confused . But I think these bracelets would help us.
Ananya : hope so.
Nakabposh : now time is running out so I should leave .
And then both exited.
In Bharatnagar
Debu take vivan for magic practice they started practicing which lasted for almost 2 hours . As vivan was learning it slowly.
After practice
Debu came in the garden and was thinking of the recent happenings . And what to do ahead same was going with ananya. But suddenly there bracelets started glowing making them aware that the bracelet is giving some clue so they quickly reached at the old house . And saw each other.
Nakabposh : did your bracelet also started glowing.
Ananya: yes .
Nakabposh : I think today we will get to know something .
In Shinkai
Ray comes back after completing kal pooja
Ray : now I am back with more powers and would not leave that baalveer.
Birba : did you got new powers.
Ray : yes 😏
Birba : that's really good and what's the plan ahead.
Ray: that would be a secret and laughs dangerously
In old house
Suddenly there bracelets starts glowing and takes them to a room.
Nakabposh : whose room is this and why the bracelet has brought us here.
Ananya : it's so big and familiar too.
Nakabposh : yes to me also.
Ananya : the mystery is eating me up . Let's do one thing we should examine this room what if we get a clue.
Nakabposh : hmm .
And they start examining the room.
After sometime nakabposh find's something.
Nakabposh : hey mystery girl.
Ananya : what happened.
Nakabposh : see I found this album which has some photos .
Ananya : these are the same people who I see in dream . pointing to a photo
Nakabposh : okay then we will take this photo with us.
Then they start seeing other photos . Where they found a photo which had a shop name written at the end.
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Ananya : I think we would get a clue. We should visit this place and ask them about these people in the photo.
Nakabposh : hmm you are right . We should do this . Bye meet you tomorrow at 2:00 .
Ananya: okay bye.
How was the part comment and tell and yes the story would be slow it might be boring but I want everyone to know the story line clearly . And the lead characters would be also clearly explained . If the story would be fast then you won't understand the characters . Everything is related to something interesting so please keep supporting and motivating me .
Till then bye.
Thanks for reading 😊
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