《Debanya: Rebirth Of Love》chapter 9
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Continued
In Bharatnagar
Debu comes into his room and starts thinking of a plan to take vivan to veerlok without him knowing it.
And a plan strikes him.
Debu calls all Pari's.
Debu: Pani pari could you make something which would hypnotize vivan in such a way he will not remember anything after the ceremony.
Pani pari : yes I could do that. (And she uses her magic and a pot appears in her hand.) Baalveer this bubble will hypnotize vivan .
Baalveer : thanks Pani pari and you all should go and start the preparation I will come on time.
Then he goes to Karuna ji's house.
Karuna: are debu you here come sit.
Debu: no karunaji I was here to take vivan actually I had a important work with him. is he at home?
Karuna: yes I will call him wait.
Vivan vivan !
Vivan: yes mom
Karuna: debu has some important work with you so I called you.
Vivan: no I won't go with him first he has to tell me what work does he have with attitude
Debu (thinking): huh I seriously don't understand why pari tara has chosen him like seriously he has so much of attitude but I can't do anything I have to obey shourya .
Debu: vo devkiji was calling you.
Vivan: okay then I will come. lets go.
As they were passing from garden debu used that pot and hypnotized him.
Debu: done
In veerlok
Shourya: were is baalveer time is running out.
Baalveer : I am here and vivan is with me let's start the ceremony.
Vivan was just admiring veerlok as it was so beautiful . ( So ya he is in his senses but will forget everything after returning)
And then the ceremony starts everyone starts showering their powers one by one .
And then it was time to return.
So how was the part let me know in comments.
And yes so after 2-3 chapters it will be really interesting you will get to know baalveer's past , vivan learning magic and debanya nokjhok everything will be there but ya as I have told earlier only the story will go slowly.
Thanks for reading 😊
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