《Reality Check (One Piece Fan-Fiction)》Chapter VII: "Unwanted" Guests Pt. 2
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(okay, I'm making Atami & Alex hate each other because, sibling rivalry & it'll be explained in future chapters)
Atami watched as the child cried in fear while Whitebeard cradled him in his arms, she didn't know what she did. She stood up & gave Thatch a look, he mouthed out to her that he's shy
'That's not shyness, he looked terrified.' she thought
"Now look what you did, you scared him shitless, excuse me for my language." she rolled her eyes
"I didn't do it on purpose, besides, I don't even know what I did moron!" the two glared at each as they butt heads, Leo got even more scared when he heard them argue "Pink head!"
"Spotted idiot!"
"Bitch!"
"Freak!" suddenly their heads were slammed together & they fell to the ground with a thud & swirly eyes, everyone sweat dropped as she rolled her eyes & put her hands on her hips
"For goodness sakes, you two can't last a second without arguing." behind her someone scoffed
"Yeah, & thanks for leaving us behind."
"Long time no see, Kizu, Shaw!"
She rolled her eyes again & crosses her arms while Shaw lightly smiled & waved, Leo sniffed & looked at the new people in curiosity. The girl had unnatural white hair with dark blue eyes while the boy had light blonde hair, like Whitebeard, with blue eyes as well, but his left eye was more pale
"& where did that child come from?" Kizu asked as she motioned her hand to Leo "I don't see a mother anywhere." Shaw snorted
"What is Marco laid an egg?" soon enough everyone burst into laughter while he blushed in embarrassment
"Shawn!!"
"What?" Kizu had walked over to Roger & placed the crown on his head
"What the...?" she smiled
"Atami stole the crown for you, sir." he looked at his daughter & she smiled at him
"ευτυχισμένη ημέρα πατέρων, μπαμπάς (happy fathers day, dad)." everyone, but Roger, Shaw, Kizu & Alex, stared in confusion while he smiled at her before the two shared a hug, Leo looked at how happy they were before looking away
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'I wish I had something like that...' he thought to himself before sighing sadly, he jumped outta Whitebeard's arms & walked to his room... alone
"What's the matter with the kid?" Alex asked
"He's not really good with socializing with new people-yoi."
"He's super shy."
"He seems distant, what have you been doing with that kid?" Raleigh asked "You haven't been to soft on him, have you?" they all look away, Raleigh shook his head
Time Skip
Atami was looking around for the kid so she could go apologize to him, she still had no idea what she did but, it still broke her heart hearing him cry. She had found his room & being polite she goes to knock on the door, but suddenly she heard talking
"I can't believe I made a fool out of myself... I'm such a fool!" she leaned her ear against the door & heard sobbing "She's not her, so get over it you idiot! You made her feel bad!" she then heard him get up so she kinda panicked
"Fuck fuck fuck! What do I do?" then the door opened "So you do talk." acting as if she wasn't shitting herself
"W–Wha... I--"
"Uh uh! You can't find an excuse to get outta this, plus, all I wanted was to say sorry." he watched her walk away in disbelief, he should be the one apologizing, she didn't have to... it was his fault, its always his fault
"Wait!" & so she did, she stopped in her tracks & turned around "I-Its not y-your-- your fault!" she raised an eyebrow, for a child his voice sounded rather attractive "I-I'm just... you r-reminded me of someone t-that hated my existence."
"Oh? Who'd ever hate your existence? Your a little cutie with a very attractive voice."
"M-My voice?" he asked with a blush, she nodded
"Yes." she motioned the inside of his room & he walked in with her following behind "So, tell me, why don't you talk?"
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"..."
"Touchy subject...?" he nodded, there was an awkward silence between them until Atami thought of a way to break the ice "So, you wanna know about the four of us? Kizu, Shaw, Alex & I?" he shrugged
"Sure..."
"Okay, so, first there's me! My full name is Portgas D. Atami, I'm currently 24 (making her the oldest, cause, she literally the eldest. I created her first, making her the older sibling), I am great at using swords, kicks, hand to hand combat & I am a great cook. I've eaten an Angel Fruit that gave me the power to control the entire ocean & sea, plus water of course. I also have an animal companion, her name is Opal & she's a tiger that can become a sea king & human! Next is Kizu. Her full name is Kizuato D. Greed, but we all call her Kizu for short. She's 23 years old, she's also good with swords, she ate a Devil Fruit that gave her powers to do anything, but she's kinda like a witch cause she does spells & shit! Her animal friend, or I'm not entirely sure what it is, is a little puffball, her name is Jinx
Now there's, Knight D. Alexander, or Alex for short. He's 22 but he's a shit head, for an asshole he's very polite towards women... with me off the list. He ate a Devil Fruit that gave him the power to control natural disasters & he's always a great inventor, don't tell him I said that. His companion is a wolf that can become a human & griffon, his name is Sly. Lastly there's Clarity D. Shawn, or Shaw for short. He's the youngest sibling as he is 21 years old, but he's rather the most mature one... right after Kizu. He ate a Devil Fruit that gave him the power the shapeshift & also steal the skills &/or power of anyone or anything. He's great at playing any instrument & he can speak any language other then japanese & english. His animal friend is a fox named Volpina, she can only turn into a human that can fly.
The four of us are known by a different name by the Government, we are known as the Demon Quad, or Demon Siblings. We cause havoc on only the Marines, we'd never hurt those who couldn't defend themselves, mostly children. Marines, are quite the opposite."
"I-Is that why you four become a pirate?" she looked down at him & nodded
"Yes, other then the fact that being pirate... makes you free!"
"Free...?" she nodded at him with a smile
"Of course!"
"... I want to be free..." she gave him a look "I've never been loved before, the Whitebeard Pirates are the closest thing I've ever had to call a family."
"... hmm, Kizu lost her mother when she was born, Alexander lost both his mother & father & his younger sister while Shaw... heh, I'm not entirely sure, but he was neglected by his adoptive parents & me? I'm not sure either, I haven't lost anything yet but... constantly being told I was never meant to be born, can do something to you. You know what I mean?" he nodded his head
"Of course." she hadn't noticed but she started crying, she coughed a bit & wiped her tears away
"Lets push aside all this mushy business & go to where everyone else is partying! Come on Leo, it'll be more fun with you there!" she had her hand out to him & he looked at it weirdly, before putting on a brave face & taking it
"... o-okay!"
↓[Opal]↓
but imagine her not wearing that, with orange & black hair/fur & a poker face look
↓[Jinx]↓
↓[Sly]↓
↓[Volpina]↓
(okay, I'm putting Atami as the eldest & Shaw as the youngest cause I like it better, plus Atami was the first OC I made when I was like, 10-11 so yeah. In height for them its obviously Shaw as the tallest, then its Alex & Atami taking second place while Kizu is the shortest)
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