《Kernstalion》Quick update- not a chapter
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A quick update:
As said before, I'll be removing Kernstalion from RR due to the amount of flaws/plot holes/rule mistakes and other things.
You have until Sunday (10-09-2022) to read it here, and after that I'll remove everything except for the first few chapters. If you have any final thoughts, or things you think should change, let me know.
I'll be busy editing/rewriting this book and I'm hoping to finish that somewhere next year. As soon as the edited version is finished it will be released on Kindle as are all my stories, and I'll post an update here. Also, if I continue the story at some point I'll post those here to.
Also: I will need a few more proofreaders for the final draft. If you are interested, leave me a comment or message. I'll send out some discord invites when the time comes.
Thanks to everyone who has read/commented! I appreciate it immensely!
- John
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