《Juggernaut: The Crafters Legacy- a LitRPG》Juggernaut rewrite
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So, I have been making good progress on the editing, but I have come to a new realization. I was originally planning on just editing the old chapters then posting them here, but because of all of the new stuff I am adding / changing anyone who decided to pick up the story during this process would be very confused because of all of the inconsistent information past my fixed chapters. So, in an effort to not cause a ton of confusion I have decided that I will start a new story on RR called juggernaut: The Crafters Legacy- a LitRPG (Rewrite). I know very original. So if people want to keep track of my progress on my editing check it out.
I only sent over the new book submission today, so it will be a couple days before it is approved by royal road. also in an effort to not drive myself insane with all of the editing I will be doing I will be shorting a lot of my chapters to around 4 or 5 thousand words instead of the monsters that a lot of them were.
there will be a lot of new changes to mechanics and stuff, so I hope people will read the rewrite, and continue to provide me with feed back as my story takes its next step forward in becoming the best version of itself.
also if people want I can also post the mostly unedited John chapter since it will probably be a while before I make much progress in actually progressing the story because of all of the stuff that I have to change.
Thanks for reading the story and I hope you continue to follow along.
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