《Black Sheep's Freedom》Announcement
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Happy Lunar New Year! May this coming year bring you all good physical health, mental health, and new, exciting opportunities.
I'm sending this notice out early to inform everyone who had read my story that I'm rewriting it. Surprise! Although, it's not actually a surprise since the writing kinda sucked.
I was lucky enough to receive feedback from a few people. The problems were there before and I noticed them. But, with others putting their thoughts down into words, things were clearer. The story suffers from me trying to put too many details in and my lack of experience also makes it difficult to follow the narrative. Thusly, I'm going to streamline the style, which will hopefully make the story a more enjoyable experience, both for me and for everyone who reads it.
I know, I know, new writers and their rewrites. Just give people the story already! But at least it hasn't been far into the plot. I haven't even gotten to the end of the first arc yet!
Can you imagine writing 50 chapters and then redoing them? I don't have the will to do that so, I'm going to do it right now while nothing too interesting is happening.
So, yeah. Words are hard and I'm an awkward person as well. Eloquence isn't my forte. Nor is writing. But I'm working on both. Thanks for reading so far and I promise it wouldn't take long for me to start uploading again!
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Dark Realms Book 1 : Creation
Lily’s signed up to play Dark Realms, a controversial new MMO that included taboo subjects like slavery and rape. After making her character and waiting for the servers to go live, Lily unexpectedly finds herself waking up in a new reality based on the game world. Lily has to quickly learn the rules of the system while struggling with the consequences her choices during character creation.
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Chivalrous Thief
What happens when a self-righteous thief steals from the wrong guy and gets transported to another world? This is what happens.
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Martial World
This story is about a guy who gets whisked off to another world to find out that he is so strong that the only battles he loses are the ones against himself, as our MC finds out this new world might not be so bad. The more time he spends there the less he finds himself missing his home.
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ᴀ ᴘᴇɴɴʏ ꜰᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴛʜᴏᴜɢʜᴛꜱ?
**cover not mine <>-- "words i never said" kind of feel --a collection of some of my poetry-an outlet for me to release my emotions and thoughts and everything in between.all poems published are, in fact, mine.if something ive wrote inspires you to create your own art; fret not, my child, and write, draw, or do whatever it is you do best! <>just please dont forget to @, tag, or send it to me as, i myself, am a lover of all things beautiful and creative - and perhaps a little odd.if you repost, just credit me.tw: some poems may be a little dark, depressing, or triggering. i will add a tw to the really dark ones, but if i were to add one to every poem that may shake the faint of heart; there would be one on every page. i write from the heart and soul-everything and anything that comes from a place of realness will not be tolerated by everyone.take what i write as you will!some may not understand it;some may live and breathe it;some may walk away feelingheardseen understood.this is a way of setting my thoughts and emotions free. and yes -that is a warning. <>"it is a mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." - Aristotle started: july 5th, 2022finished:
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he, him, and i
There's no structure. Heartbroken random words.Wrote many over time.Check out an active playlist for this story on Spotify!profile: smokeandtulipsPlaylist name: he,him, and i https://open.spotify.com/playlist/5UizJALQcYVyoXBIXgjEKh?si=zhv6smMiQK6Rb4Cjw8Nx2g
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Lust | JiKook
"If this is what hell feels like, then I'm not afraid to die."
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