《Black Sheep's Freedom》Announcement
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Happy Lunar New Year! May this coming year bring you all good physical health, mental health, and new, exciting opportunities.
I'm sending this notice out early to inform everyone who had read my story that I'm rewriting it. Surprise! Although, it's not actually a surprise since the writing kinda sucked.
I was lucky enough to receive feedback from a few people. The problems were there before and I noticed them. But, with others putting their thoughts down into words, things were clearer. The story suffers from me trying to put too many details in and my lack of experience also makes it difficult to follow the narrative. Thusly, I'm going to streamline the style, which will hopefully make the story a more enjoyable experience, both for me and for everyone who reads it.
I know, I know, new writers and their rewrites. Just give people the story already! But at least it hasn't been far into the plot. I haven't even gotten to the end of the first arc yet!
Can you imagine writing 50 chapters and then redoing them? I don't have the will to do that so, I'm going to do it right now while nothing too interesting is happening.
So, yeah. Words are hard and I'm an awkward person as well. Eloquence isn't my forte. Nor is writing. But I'm working on both. Thanks for reading so far and I promise it wouldn't take long for me to start uploading again!
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WARZONE: Modern Warfare in a Fantasy World
Join Discord by clicking here. --------- Connor, a 19-year-old in the 22nd century who enjoys spending time playing military and strategy games. He is now looking forward to a VRMMO game called "Warzone" that mirrors Earth where the players start as an ordinary soldier in one of two factions, Federation or The Empire, then rise through the ranks and manage their own armies. Connor, who was looking forward to playing Warzone, put on his VR helmet. Although unbeknownst to him, where he was sent to was not... Warzone. This is a rewrite of my previous novel, starting from the prologue.
8 197ALmond
When Max O'Brien receives an almond with a skull painted on it, he initially plays it off as a prank. But, after his wife leaves town, he begins discovering more of the nuts hidden around the house. More disturbing than that is that some unseen intruder is keeping an accurate running count. The more almonds Max finds, the stranger things get. Mysterious noises. Moving objects. Damaged valuables. It's a haunting that grows in power with each success in the involuntary scavenger hunt. As the almonds pile up so do the threats until Max realizes he may just not survive. ____________________________________________________________________________ Author note - This is a short work originally written for Wattpad's Novella Contest (finished second overall). It's a total of 11 chapters and just about 23k words. I'll post a chapter every 2-3 days so it'll wrap up fairly quickly. Anyone in the mood for a quick goofy/creepy read should give it a try. Thanks.
8 106Space Story
Several centuries into the future, humanity has utilized warp engines to establish colonies on hundreds of terraformed planets, united as a single Confederation. En route to a planet at the fringe of humanity's domain, a lone starship captain finds a vessel derelict in the void of interstellar space.
8 147MCU shifting script
Im just publishing my mcu script so i won't hahe to write it down and maybe someof you can get some inspiration haha
8 71Indian Queen Of Roman Crown (completed)
(Winner of mysterious awards) Looking for a strong female character? Check. Eyeing for love ,conspiracy and action?Check. Want to see two great cultures of history ? Check. Want to know about story of an Indian princess and great prince of Florence who was a widower? If it's a yes , then peep inside to see what secrets it beholds. Here , blood is not thicker than water. People will even go to hell if it's about the crown and power. Craving of being a ruler surpasses every height. Conspiracy, betrayal and what not just to win Rome. Amidst of it, beautiful relations would also blossom. Dive deep into the story to find what it has to offer.⇥cTzc9bjL⇤
8 120Swish
{Free story 1 paid bonus chapter} Virginia hates her school's basketball superstar, but Eli Shepherd is hoping to change that, one basket at a time. ***Virginia takes a job at her college's basketball gym where worlds collide and attraction runs wild between her and the school's captain of the basketball team- NBA Draft hopeful Eli Shepherd. Trying to keep her father's celebrity status as a retired basketball legend is a hard secret to keep, especially when her dad invites Eli over to train him- at her house.While deadly secrets threaten to tear apart the only family she has left, Virginia must search for answers while guarding her heart against the greatest threat it has ever faced- Eli Shepherd. 🚨COMPLETED🚨*This story is FREE but there is one Paid bonus chapter!WARNING: Mature scenes and themes. Read at your own risk.
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