《Great Master of All》Chapter 4
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But he was out of energy so he decided to absorb some first, as he sat down cross legged with his fingers in the ground again….(you probably know it now anyways lmao)
He stopped when he felt the heaviness this time again, as he did not want to pass out just yet, as he wanted to finish training first before he completely try going over that heaviness again.
So he got his energy back to full, but he felt how his own body was getting tired so he decided to do this one last time before he go and rest his tired body.
Sadly he still could not make it turn faster but he knew that he should not give up, thinking about what he can do to make it better he slept.
Next morning he woke up with the sound of wind, and the chirping sounds of the birds. As he did not heed it any attention and instead started his control training, this time he did not bother with the spiky balls, as he knew it would slowly get better as he get better at controlling his energy, this time he decided to make a flat form and then turn the outer layer into a sharp one.
He managed to do just that in his first try but some energy was wasted as he was not used to creating it this thin, so he tried and tried until it was his 9th time of creating it, he finally managed to make it so that he don’t waste that much energy while creating it, so he decided to try the sharpness of this thing he just created. As he pointed at one of the tree that he can see, suddenly the sharp thin circle blade that he created flew towards the tree, as it suddenly pierced through, Sadly it did not completely separate the tree but It at least pierced till the middle of the tree, but he was still satisfied with the speed and the power behind its thin look.
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And he was also satisfied as he found out that he still have some mana reserve even though he wasted his mana from doing trial and errors before.
He wanted to do it one more time but he suddenly heard a loud *SCREEEEEEEECH* on the sky, as he suddenly looked up he found something he don’t really know, specially knowing that he only had the memories of training from the memories he received.
As the screech from the sky came louder as the flying animal charged down towards him.
He did not panic, or whatsoever, he just muttered under his breath *Earth Wall* as he pointed towards the ground where he estimated the animal to pass before it reach him, as he imagined his energy leaving and going on that part of the ground to suddenly control the ground to raise and form a 7 meter tall wall and 3 meter wide wall in front of him, as he suddenly used his last remaining energy to make the wall spiky even if all the spikes were small as long as the wall was covered with spike.
It all happened in under a second as the wall suddenly grew spikes all over it as the flying animal lets out a loud *HUIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII*, as it struck the spiky wall.
He was not having a good time either as he could not hold the wall much longer, so instead of holding the wall he decided to focus the energy from the spikes to a one last big spike than before, as the last big spike pierces through the head of the flying animal, as blood spurts from its pierced head.
He heaved a sigh of relief as he felt how he was lucky enough to have that much energy left, if not then he would be doomed,
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He felt how he is about to pass out from having his mana almost completely out, so he quickly sat down and inserted his fingers in the ground as he started absorbing energy again.
Suddenly as he was about to recover half of his mana he suddenly felt a suppressing aura coming towards him, he felt how he could not even move, like his muscle was going to break from this intense pressure, It was like the suppressing aura from the dark world before but this time it gave him pain, a suppressing aura from someone, that’s what he know, he knew that this was an aura from somebody else, but he don’t know who this was nor what does he want with him.
Suddenly he saw somebody moving towards him, but he could not hold out any longer, he could feel the aura much more that the owner of the aura was near him, he saw him moving towards him with a smile, that was the last thing he saw, before he passed out, he don’t even know if he only passed out, or something else, as he saw the dark world of his again.
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Candor: The Forgotten House
*** Please read note below *** As a 16-year-old mage from a powerful family, Jayce Candor had known from a young age what his future would hold. As the fourth son in his family the possibility of him becoming the heir to the household was very small. But, with his talent as a mage, his potential accomplishments in the military could lead to titles of nobility and political power. However, on what would otherwise be an unremarkable night, everything he had ever known, the only people he ever cared for, and all of the plans for his future were destroyed. House Candor, one of the six great houses that helped build the Eldoran Empire had been erased from history. By imperial decree, all those bearing the name Candor were hunted down and executed as traitors of the Empire. With no home, no family, and only death waiting for him, Jayce decided to escape north to the uncharted Northern Territories to begin a new life. Forced into situations he was never prepared for and trying to cope with his past, Jayce tries to find safety in a place spoken about only in legends. There for the first time, he will make true friends and find people he will come to see as family. He will encounter strong enemies, build powerful alliances, and become a person his ancestors would be proud of. But surrounded by creatures he thought only existed in tales and pressed by the Empire’s constant expansion, Jayce’s safety may be only an illusion. To survive a world fraught with danger Jayce will need to grow stronger with each new experience and rebuild his once forgotten house. ********************************************************************** Note: The story starts slow. Although there is more action as the story progresses, there is a fair amount of introspection and character introduction in the first 30 chapters. Jayce is the main character, however, other characters play a large role and the story is seen through multiple POV's. This is a draft, it is not a finished work. This is not a story that focuses on an OP MC who beats up on weaklings. At times there can be a fair amount of internal monologue. Some of that may be edited out when I rewrite the story. I decided to keep it in the draft because I think it is better to have too much material rather than too little when I edit. Constructive criticism is appreciated as it helps in the editing and rewriting process. Check out my other story Shattered Mind here
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