《A Peaceful World》Chapter 1 - into the world
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Eden looks at the capsule in front of him.
‘this thing sure looks strange’ The capsule could be described as a sci-fi coffin. Eden was slightly worried about entering such a thing but ended up going in anyway. Eden opened the lid of the capsule and laid down in it. Surprisingly the capsule was quite comfy and the back seemed to meld into his body shape. Eden closed the lid and activated the capsule.
“capsule on”
Eden vision go completely black. He started to panic for a moment thinking the capsule has malfunctioned but then a message appeared before him
New user detected. Would you like to make a new account?
Eden calmed down after realising the system is working completely and answers.
“yes”
Account created. Please choose name please note that using your real name is not advised
“I can’t use my real name? hmmm, what should I use? Ra, Re, Ma, dunno”
Do you want to accept your name as Raremadunno
“No, redo, by god please, redo” after 15 minutes of repeating this process Eden finally decided on a name.
“Quill”
Do you want to accept your name as Quill?
“yes”
Please choose your race
Only race available is human
Your chosen race is human
‘Why is there an option for race if there’s only one option? That should be taken out, oh well, I wanted to be human anyway’
Humans have no option to change gender
Humans have no option to change appearance
‘…what’s the point of this…’
Your starting place will be random
welcome to Second World
‘At least they didn’t give me pointless options this time’ Quill’s vision flashed white then there was green.
‘Green? Plants?’ it wasn’t his vision that was green but the plants in front his face. After reorganising his mind Eden tried to move but felt slight force against him.
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Rustle, rustle
“Why am I in a bloody bush?!” Quill makes his way out of the bush
“seriously, what would they do if someone started inside a rock?” Quill looked down to see himself in a green dense forest populated with rabbits as far as the eye can see. Quill then looked down to notice that his body was completely naked
‘you really do start naked, good thing there’s no one around’ Quill walks towards the rabbits wearily as he heard there’s no friendly animals in these types of games. A rabbit takes notice of quill and starts to approach him. Quill prepares himself to be attacked by a vicious rabbit. He has never been so on guard before for such a small thing, as the rabbit is two hops away from Quill, he closes his eyes instinctively expecting pain to overwhelm him but there was no such thing. In fact, he feels a warm sensation on his leg. Quill opens his eyes and looks down to see the rabbit cuddling up to his leg.
“I’m an idiot” Quill couldn’t help but facepalm over the embarrassment of fearing such a cute creature. Quill is just glad no one was around to see it. Quill bends down and strokes the rabbit before shooing it back to the other rabbits.
‘Well at least it’s quiet’ Quill decides to lie down on the grass. At first he was surprised at how realistic the grass felt, even the smell of the grass was realistic. Soon after Quill was fast asleep only to be woken by a heavy mass on his chest.
“uh…ah? Rabbit? Again? Shoo shoo” the rabbit fled with such speed it would be hard to believe a rabbit was just there. Quill stood up and to his surprise saw no rabbits around at all.
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‘what’s going on?’ as soon as Quill thought that he heard a growl coming from behind him. He quickly turns to see sharp white things and some weird long red thing that seems to be wet. Quill felt a force push him backwards onto the floor and that was when quill realised, it was a mouth.
Quill panicked and starts to punch the thing connected to the mouth as the mouth covered his head. Quill started to feel pain as the teeth start to dig into him and tear his flesh in motion with his punches but still, he kept punching and punching but the mouth was still there. There was nothing Quill could do. Accepting his fate he stopped punching and dropped his arms but his right hit something hard, harder than the ground should be. It was a rock. At that moment Quill had hope, it was small hope but enough hope for Quill. He grabbed the rock and with as much strength as he can muster he struck the mouth.
“Awoooooo”
The mouth finally lets go and Quill can finally see the form of his attacker. Four legs, brown fur and of course, sharp teeth. It is a wolf. Quill doesn’t know what to do, this wolf is definitely dangerous but he has no belief that he can outrun it. His only option is to fight.
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