《Writing test》7.Welcome
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Shit, i feel so dumb right now...
"Uhhg. Alright, yeah, didn't think that too much."
"Hahahah, don't worry most of the newbies are like wild animals so it's already a wonder you are capable of rationalizing."
"Yeah... i realized but, why is that so?"
"Hmm? Weren't you 'welcomed' when you came?
"'Welcomed'... oooooh shit."
"Yeah, heh, most can't keep their mind after that so... well let's say that once the pit ends we are quite busy until everyone is recovered."
"Recovered? Everyone?"
"Yes, everyone. It wouldn't be much of a hell if you could just die and end it, would it?"
"Damn... okay, yeah, makes sense."
"Perfect, now if that's all for now we have to bring you to simps city."
"Simps... city?"
"Yes, that's it's name and yes it's intentional, you will find much more things like that here so get accustomed."
"Okay... i guess."
After walking around for awhile we've finally arrived to the city, a gigantic medieval-looking city without walls and extending as far as i can see, made entirely of some kind of gray stone. With colored rags vertically every which way, standing like some sort of color code, like a sorting system of some kind. After circling the outskirts of the city for a while we finally stop near a short but very wide building with five white rags on single file.
"Alright, now that we are already here..." *Snap*
"What? What's this for?" As soon as he snapped his hand the rest of them encircled my neck with the cold steel of well-sharpened weapons.
"Don't worry, it's nothing personal. I only want the soul you got as a prize from the pit, as soon as you give it up we will part and go our separate ways."
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"I can't do it."
"So you can't, hmm..." *Shlick*
"Huuuugh..." *Gasp*
"You will give it to me or a knife to your guts will be the least of your worries every time i see you, got it?"
"That's not what i meant..."
"Hmmm? Aaaah, you've exchanged it then?"
"Yeahgh..."
"For?"
"Pact making."
"Prove it."
"...How?"
"Make a deal of course, if you are lying you will give me the soul and, let's see... one hundred dust, per head, and you will work for us till you repay it all, sounds good? Say it."
I swear i will wipe that smirk from your face, in time...
"I...I will pay the soul prize i gained from the pit if i still have it along with one hundred dust to each of the presents and work for them till said amount is paid in exchange for said presents' uninvolvment with me from now on in case i already exchanged said soul. Deal?"
YOU HAVE ISSUED A DEAL TO LIUTENANT#Sharp WITH THE FOLLOWING TERMS AND CONDITIONS:
·if i (Last) still have it (LOWEST GRADE SOUL/NEWCOMER GAMES)
·I (Last) will pay the soul (LOWEST GRADE SOUL) prize i (Last) gained from the pit (NEWCOMER GAMES)
·along with one hundred dust to each of the presents (LIUTENANT#Sharp and SQUAD#50551) and (Last) work for them (LIUTENANT#Sharp and SQUAD#50551) till said amount (one hundred dust to each of the presents (LIUTENANT#Sharp and SQUAD#50551)) is paid
·in exchange for said presents' (LIUTENANT#Sharp and SQUAD#50551) uninvolvment with me (Last) from now on (PERSONAL CALENDAR#0)
·in case i (Last) already exchanged said soul (LOWEST GRADE SOUL/NEWCOMER GAMES).
DEAL ACCEPTED. ·LIUTENANT#Sharp and SQUAD#50551 WILL ADHERE TO uninvolvment with #Last from PERSONAL CALENDAR#0.
"Tch... Alright, i guess you were telling the truth."
"So..." Gulp.
"So, it's your lucky day. Gyaaaahah! There you go... Last. Oh, and, welcome home."
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