《Immortal Sovereign (Cancelled)》Chapter 2. Celestial Origin
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One of the Mortal Realms: Black Serpent Continent: Zhenren Empire: Ven Country: Top of a tall mountain
On the top of the mountain could be seen a young boy that was Zhou Ye looking the same as before however with considerable sweat on his face and a sense of tiredness and a person only he could see that was Tang Xuan unless personally allowed for them to also see. Tang Xuan was telling Zhou Ye how to use Celestial Origin and started with "Since i am here i can help you create your heavens condense your sea of qi into a cloud and then imagine lightning"
Zhou Ye did as he was told and all of a sudden a shock sensation came to him and all of a sudden lightning could be seen within his dantian striking his sea of qi. As this was happening a powerful pressure belonging to the Soul Emergence realm could be sensed however was no concern to that of Tang Xuan thus ignored.
Zhou Ye looked worried and in little pain however was still curious and asked "Master what is this sensation?" Tang Xuan looked to the sky then lightning came from the sky and if anyone noticed they would know this was tribulation lightning Tang Xuan wished to create greater lightning to make fun of Zhou Ye but knew that using to much of his Soul power would attract the next stage of his tribulation which attacked the soul.
Tang Xuan smiled and replied "You have attained the power of divine lightning while this is the weakest stage and in small amounts it will now generate in your body over time"
Tang Xuan before taking a deep breath then said "Now it is time to form the divine body gather the cloud and put it in the shape of a body and then it will merge with your body" Zhou Ye did as he was told and his body slowly merged with that of the clouds with his new body brimming with light blue aura and as he did lightning started to vibrate itself on his body in an attempt on attacking but eventually gave up seeing the body as indistinguishable. (Clouds act as the body and lightning acts as the bones and etc.)
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However should any other cultviator attempt to wield the power of the heavens then in rage heaven in their pride and dignity would send down lightning to rain down against whomever used it. However Zhou Ye practiced Celestial Origin making his body identical to those of heaven rendering him safe from heaven's judgement. (The lightning will avoid him and won't affect him unless its special)
Zhou Ye then stood up and looked to the sky and felt accomplished and said "Master I did it!!!" Tang Xuan thought to himself "Foolish child there will be many dangerous tribulations that you will face alone in the future so you'd best not get cocky now" Tang Xuan hit Zhou Ye in the head and said "This is just the start i want you to now coninuously train in this art and luckily you will not face any tribulation until you pass Grand Soul but don't think you can rest easy this is just the start of training"
Zhou Ye looked back and looked quite saddened thinking that training would be a bit easier now but to learn it was just the start even though he went to spirit disciple his training would still be hard unknown to him though was because of celestial origin his power would now be closer to that of Spirit Practioner then disiciple.
Another 3 months had passed and Zhou Ye face looked to a even more handsome standard due to Tang Xuan's "alterations" and was wearing a slightly loose black robe and his hair had grown slightly longer and his eyes could be seen to be looking somewhat as if they had an evil intent and an aura of late stage Spirit Disciple could be felt from Zhou Ye however Zhou Ye could at any time break through to half-step Tang Xuan told him not to saying that his foundation would not be sturdy enough then.
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As well throughout the months passed Zhou Ye learnt news about a traitor of the Zhenren Empire who stole a soul treasure appearing at Ven Country whose cultivation was at Soul Emergence!
A soul rank cultivator could be considered to be a high level figure in the Zhenren Empire and in the entire Black Serpent Continent the peak was an enlightened being one realm above soul and there was only one of those elightened beings on the entire continent and he was only at the initial stage. The Grand Soul was clearly one of the Zhenren empire's greatest cultivators since he was at such a high cultivation and was sent to collect a soul treasure. (soul treasure means soul emergence treasure same with spirit and etc.)
Zhou Ye looked like this as Tang Xuan put him in this image reminding Tang Xuan of his past Zhou Ye looked to the sky as it was getting dark and just realised now that it was dark and thought to himself it was now dark "mmm hey wait a minute when did the skies get so dark? how long have i been out here for?"
Zhou Ye thought for himself to have taken to long however unbeknownst to himself Tang Xuan knew that these dark skies were caused not by time but the arrival of a Grand Soul of the Zhenren Empire arriving at Ven Country upon news of the traitor arriving there.
The dark skies were the result of soul projections being used to search the landscape and as they were used the Grand Soul attempted to search at a specific area which was where Zhou Ye was at currently and found himself unable to see through which caused him to think that the traitor was hiding there since the treasure was a soul treasure capable of hiding himself.
Tang Xuan felt the pressure coming closer and closer then quickly rushed and told Zhou Ye "Zhou Ye! quickly let me control your body for a while, a Grand Soul is coming near!" Zhou Ye was quick to react and allowed for it to happen but it was a given that Tang Xuan could easily take control of the body but felt it was not the right thing to do without his permission.
As Tang Xuan was taking control Zhou Ye's aura suddenly rose to that of an Enlightened being's however whilst this was happening Zhou Ye's body was in great pain and in fact slowly exuding the aura outside of the body making it more and more evident (Imagine crumbling lines and energy going outside of it) and as the Grand Soul cultivator was coming closer he saw upon the rising aura and grew a little closer and then stopped as he saw Zhou Ye levitating above the air. A shock of disbelief could be seen on the Grand Soul's cultivator as well as a sense of fear.
Tang Xuan would make the aura bigger however feared Soul tribulation from hell which would severely weaken his soul. Tang Xuan started to get weaker and weaker but the aura kept on getting greater.
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