《Immortal Sovereign (Cancelled)》Chapter Prologue Part 2/3. Transformation
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Mortal Realm As the body was falling quicker and quicker a young mortal boy looked up and saw as it falled down quicker and quicker. The young mortal boy was chasing after the body however as he was chasing the body. The body once again whispered in an archaic voice "I am going down to quickly and theses flames are to powerful in order to survive i must abandon the corporeal body"
This was unlike the Immortal realm as the strongest entities in the mortal realm were simply unable to sense his arrival of two factors. First being that as the body was falling in the Immortal realm it noticed the two immortals and decided to then try to wane its presence and aura in an attempt to hide itself but couldn't hide the flames surrounding it. Second being that the body was falling down at an unbelievable speed and was in the shape of a comet and as its presence could not be sensed as it was a level to high for any beings including both mortal and Immortal.
As the young mortal boy was running to the falling body he panted "Almost there" repeatedly as well as puffs of air. Luckily the body landed quite close and the corporeal body was incinerated if the body was not incinerated and in full force landed onto the ground then without doubt the entire mortal realm would've been destroyed due to the sheer impact and aftershock generated as well as the flames disappearing as soon as the body was incinerated and without so the flames would've then burnt the entire mortal realm.
(The below part alludes to something else later)
The falling body then thought to himself "Why.....How could this happen?? I reached that Realm!!! It was merely but a second but within such a second I saw everything!.... So what if I forcibly entered that Realm? I still entered it! I was so close....
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Within that single second I wrote a book with all the information I had, I saw thousands of different realms, I understood everything and I felt the power! Beyond Immortal Sovereign! I was half a step into the next realm... It appears my soul is barely considered to be within the level after Immortal Sovereign... But not my body? That's likely the reason why my body was destroyed but my soul unscathed..."
(The above part alludes to something else later)
As the boy came to see where the body landed all he saw were a few ashes and the mortal boy was clearly disappointed and in a sad tone said "Where is it? I clearly saw a shooting star!? maybe dad was right i am imagining to many things" As soon as he finished talking unknown to him the spirit of the body whispered once again instead this time in a way which could be clearly heard that he was hurt yet still in an archaic voice "I must quickly find a host body quickly while my spirit can survive by itself it would be best to stabilise myself first!" As he was talking to himself he looked upon the young mortal boy and said in a dismissive tone "This child has never cultivated before.... Nor has he any good appitudes at best his talents are second rate..."
The Spirit then looked to the sky and laughed "Ahahaha well be it this child's lucky day allow for me to change your destiny for you" The spirit decided to enter into the child's body and for the meanwhile hibernate until the right time. As the spirit was entering into the child's body the child was feeling intensely refreshed and didn't know what was happening and exclaimed "What's happening?? Why is my body feeling strange? Its as if its refreshed... mmm well I'd better go back home now mom and dad are probably worrying about me"
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The child then ran off and without notice was considerably faster then before and less tired and within his dantian a small sea of qi could be seen and this qi was generated by normally by the land which was fluctuating with qi of dead experts. Among the sea of qi an figure could be seen talking to himself about "As i expected his talent is at best so so and his appitudes with all the elements except for wind is mediocre...."
In the distance at a town near the outskirts of a small city a voice could be heard "Ye'er!, Ye'er!
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