《The wisher》Chapter 6. First time always hurt.
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Author note: this chapter was pure miss (still is tho) I spent the whole day fixing it. And I am sure there is a lot of mistakes in it, so please point it out and thanks, :D . have fun reading.
(just discovered that I was using lying instead of laying... FML)
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Chapter 6. First time always hurt.
Today, Tyndraid decided to start training, but, a couple of problems came up.
The first issue is, he has no clothes. All of the members of the Adherents had a black robe for them, the moment they picked sides.
secondly is, all of the monsters in this forest is under the control of The Adherents, so, they can't be killed.
Thirdly, information came. The Order is spreading its control and will soon enough reach this forest. Luckily, this underground land connects to other forests and deserts. The underground world is the best name for it.
The multiple entrances and exists for the underground world had been sealed by the formation specialist, which had the inheritance title. He was called "Bast" in the game. He was a famous player who had a profound understanding of formation magic, one of the hardest magic to learn. His real name is Guan Yu, but he likes to be called Bast.
Formation magic must be drawn by the player and can't be casted, even after the two worlds joined.
The food was secured by the role "feed, on what you hunt". Only Tyndraid and strong people who had the inheritance title got food delivered to them.
In total, there were five people with inheritance title in all. The first and most mysterious one is an elf called Shalim who was an assassin with the lord of night title, an orc named Kratos who had the war of God title, Ashley, Bast, and a summoner who goes with the name Hase, a lich king title holder.
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Those people are the strongest in The Adherents. Tyndraid met all of them and found that they were special. Their personalities are unique, especially Kratos. "amma bust your ass if u don't show more respect you muthafucka" is what he said to a guy who delivered him food then said: "please enjoy your time."
And after thinking for three straight days, they came with a new password. It was "dead balls". Even though Tyndraid came up with it, he was in a bad mood after that, whenever he saw someone using it, he would slap himself in the face.
What made Tyndraid shocked the most is, all of the people who were in The Adherents had a the title "loyal". This title makes the owner loyal to the wisher, no matter what. Betraying the wisher is an idea that they can't come up with.
To his extreme surprise, no one was annoyed by it. They all accepted it without any complaints. That made Tyndraid feeling for this group jump to new heights.
"WE SWEAR LOYALTY FOR MR.TYNDRAID!" is what they said when he asked them about it.
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After traveling for a while (and finding new clothes), Tyndraid and Ashley came out from the underground world, Finding themselves in another forest.
"This sure feels good," Tyndraid said while sighing.
"yes it's. Now let's start training," Ashley said while getting her bow ready.
The moment they came out, they were surrounded by a group of wolves and golems.
Without any sign, Ashley started shooting arrows at the heads of wolves and hearts of golems, which were 3 meters tall.
Tyndraid knew Ashley was strong and could finish them all in minutes and was giving him a chance to train. He felt happiness. Someone who you can trust and give your back to is hard to find.
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Tyndraid got excited. He quickly held the sword that somehow didn't disappear after he killed the Minotaur and passed out.
He started casting "Fireball" while running toward the group of 10 wolves and four golems in front of him. He was ready to fight!.
He tried to act calm and collected in front of Ashley, but, he forgot that he is really weak.
His fireball hit a wolf and rendering him dead. Alright. Then he was jumped at by other wolves and golems.
He isn't experienced at fighting, so he got himself injured and bruised all over. When Ashley saw what was happening, she was shocked. Not shocked by Tyndraid getting beaten up, She expected that. The wounds on him can easily make a living being feel desperate, but he kept fighting without giving up, Even though it was a dogfight.
He called an earth pillar underneath him, resulting in him jumping out the encirclement. After getting some distance, he tried to cast magics of all kind at the monsters. Some were casted while some didn't. Mana control decides the success chance of a spell being casted.
Wolves learned from their dead fellow and dodged while golems didn't even care, they won't die unless their heart was destroyed.
The closest two wolves jumped at him. He stabbed the sword in the head of the wolf on his right side. The other wolf didn't let this chance go as he bit Tyndraid's left leg.
"AHH!" Tyndraid cried in pain. He quickly pulled the sword out of the dead wolf's head and stabbed the head of the wolf biting him.
The sword is sharp and light. Making everything a little bit easier.
That made Tyndraid happy in his heart.
He suddenly felt a strong force from his left side. He was sent flying for a good couple of meters. After landing, he looked at the golem which punched him with hate. He quickly got up and fired "air bullet". Luckily the spell was casted and pierced right through the heart of the golem, which was in the left lung.
this kind of dogfight continued for around 30 minutes.
He only stopped after hearing "Points added to endurance."
and other "points added..." sentence about 50 times and that was when he killed ten wolves and four golems.
"Hah... hah... well... that was better than I expected... hoo...". "stamina reached zero points." "health reached a critical value" that's the last thing he heard before passing out.
Ashley easily got rid of the monsters and took Tyndraid inside the underground world and called the healers.
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Laying on the bed was Tyndraid while Ashley was sitting next to him. After a while, she lowered her head and kissed him on the lips.
"Thank you for giving a chance to be with you" after she said that she got out of the room.
Tyndraid immediately opened his eyes.
putting his fingers on his lips, he looked at the ceiling above him in a trance.
outside the door, her face was as blushing, but after a moment, it turned into a cold smile that gives the creeps.
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