Please tell me how to improve my writing, since i only write with some conversation in my head and look if they good enough or not. any suggestion would be appreciated.

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Knowing that he could become stronger than the other player with the same level make him excited." If you say it like that I will try my best to finish the training."

"Very well, since you have one more day left to help John we will start tomorrow."

"Instructor Rickon, can I ask something about archery?"

"Sure, why not?”

"From upgrading class at level ten, what's the different when you don't go changes job to a specific class for specialization."

"Hmm, there are few different if you do change job into specific class, because you will specialized bonus status every time you got a level up, opening skill tree without need of learn how to do it manually."

"What?! I could learn other job skill even if I don't change into that specific job?" 'Wasn't that the best thing ever?”'

"Hahaha it seems that you don't know how difficult to learn other class personal skill?"

"At first I was shocked when suddenly in this place have a lot of people coming and showing their personal class skills and could do them as it was told on the training manual over and over again."

"And then I ask them how could you use skills, and their answer easily like.

Wasn't that's how you should be? Level up and change class, and then unlocking your class skill when you get into certain levels?"

"With that I assume the new people that we call adventurers are could get skills without the need of training to achieve that state ."

"Then I could learn to do skills that archer use and throw back then?"

"Yes, you could."

"Nice!! Then when will we start the practice?"

"Hahahaha, impatient aren't we? Yes I said that you can do it, but it's not that easy. First you need to have enough proficiency in archery, where you need a long time before you could start using skills." While tapping my shoulder he said " beside the archery proficiency there are other things that you needed first."

"Huh what else that I needed so I could do them?"

"You will be surprised when you heard this but since you still have one more day before we start the training. You don't have to rush it okay?"

"Ugh, but you just told me the best thing ever!! How could I'm not excited?"

"Hahaha, Eiden I like how you think, but wasn't like other adventurer you have the 'real life' when you get basked in light and then disappear?"

"Ahh that's right by the way instructor, how could you learn so much about adventurer?"

"Anyone with ear and eye could tell that there's no way people could come and go basked with light and comeback even when they are died right. Beside they seems see us people of the land not as people and disregard us after they get what they wants."

'Ahh so it is like that? Well it really shock me too that the npc are so much alike the human, with so much expression. So they are real, at least at this VR, from now I will try to talk with them and practice talking so I could start talk with other people too.'

" Alright instructor since I have few more hours before I need to help John again, I will go sleep early so that I could do the training after finished there."

"Okay then see you tomorrow."

Having around 5 or six hour until he could finish the restaurant quest, Reid go to sleep right away.

***

In the office where there are few scientist and a big screen with 196 faces, if people could see this screen they would be amazed. Because those are the face of leader and presidents of the country there are in the world.

"....... With this 10 months already passed when we were given the technology, around 70% world population already used to the world where those people that came and giving us warning about what will come ahead of us." Evelyn, the CEO of POTM said.

"And how many of those people that already go through average levels?" Asked by the president of USA.

"Around 50% of them are people that play with combat class and with levels that pass the average levels that required at 1 year targets."

"Why don't we start telling them about what to come? Instead of doing nothing and just monitoring their Progress?" Evelyn ask with worried tone.

"We can't afford that miss, we will cause mass panic, that could make people couldn't handle the stress." (USA)

“Won’t they going to be more panic when they heard about it if they only have few months to adapt?”

“That’s why we are going to select few people to lead them, when they have someone to rely they won’t get mass panic.”

"And now what we could do are making the rest of 30% of world population to get the access before our times up."(Russia)

" And how about the production class do? Are they got into minimum what's needed?"(China)

"On the production line we still short 13% if there will be 100% from our world" ( Evelyn)

"Okay try to make a competition of production class each one in the same time for the 1 year competition, where we will gather the top 5 from each category and we will tell them what's going to happen in 4 more year. Where we will as planed train them with our expert on said category."

"And how many people we can fit into the special camber?"

"If the way we predict and there won't be any problem we could start to get those candidate around 2 thousands people from total 12,4 billion people."

"Its alright, we need those numbers to be selected carefully! Because they are that will lead the front lines."

"How about the money needed so we could make the capsule free for all of us? Could we do on time with the one year schedule?"

"Yes we could manage to get the needed amount before the time, thanks to the auction website we could get money from there."

"Alright that's for today, if there any more updates I will summons us again"

...

"Ugh, to think the world where we live will be changed in 3 year... I hope we could save many people we could..."Evelyn said dejected.

***

After 8 hours in game time Eiden finish his quest, and walk to the John restaurant.

"John I have finished with my task." I said while entering the kitchen.

"Good with this I will give you the personal cooking kit and skills."Handing me some pan which have double pan that could be closed

"All right john, by the way I won't be coming here for a while John"

"Why, I could use people like you around here thou"

"Hahaha I would love to help here, but I'm going to train with instructor Rickon about weapons. And I already make the promise to go to him tomorrow.

“Oh really? To think you want to train with him.” And John giving me sympathy look.

“Yeah, what’s wrong with Rickon?” I become worried when he give me that look but he still won’t tell me what’s wrong with rick even when I press him around. Well I guess I will just ignore him I guess.

After a while he arrived at the Training hall. “Instructor Rickon! since today i already finish helping John, i could start the training right now." i said while walking to where Rickon is ( he sit in front of training hall gate,)

"Good! we could start now since the progress take lots of time. and since you waste 4 days where people usually take 1 month to finish this training right when you could start your own adventures!"

"Yeah, by the way sir what's is about your training that make John become weird to me, like he is pitying me."

Giving Eiden a wry smile "Don't think about that, he just remember when he going through this training. How do you think John have such a big body and work in the restaurant?"

"hmm, whats the point of he work in the restaurant and having robust body?" confused, and then its struck me like lighting.

seeing me realize something Rickon start to laugh and grabbing my hand when i tried to walk away."Hohohoho ( evil laugh)

Where are you going son! you aint going no where!!"

feeling weak in my knee i almost fell to my back, but since this is just a game. "instructor how does John look like before he gone through this training?" i ask with pale face.

"well if I'm not mistaken he is like you, a weak young man without any muscle in him." giving me a devil smile that took my soul away.

I couldn't believe what he said if i don't see John reaction back in the restaurant. but now i cant go anywhere beside doing what he will put me through."

***

"Alright since now i have something to ask before we begin."

"what is it?" with pale face knowing that i cant go away from this hell training.

"I want to make sure about you adventurers first, when there are people could take something out of thin air, where do you get that thing?

"Like this?" i show some beef jerky when thrusting my right hand. and the jerky came out of nowhere.

"Yes that's it! now tell me do you felt the weight of items when before you get the items?" with his face full of anticipation.

"hmm... i don't think i could felt this item weight since its don't have much weight. And i don't know how I could test it."

"Don't worry, i have just right solutions for you, come with me." and we walk behind the training hall where there are lots of stone with different sizes.

"Try to lift any stone that you could barely lift with all your strength."

looking around and after trying some stones on the ground, i found the one that make me felt out of breath. seeing the information up close when i carry it in my arms.

Mountain Grey Stone

Regular stone that could be find anywhere across the continent

without any value.

learning to become like every other writer i think. giving some cliffhanger around here and there.

tell me how to improve them ok!! [th_084_.gif] << i just find these items and i will be using it every now and then hahaha